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Glow- I really like the way you wrote and the way you orginaised it.
Grow- the images are all nearly the same.

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Nice job! I like your introduction it hooked me in to keep reading, it also had some interesting facts and questions. I also noticed you added lots of your own thoughts which was good overall good job.

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Grow: i like the history of gems nice images. Grow: maybe add more writting????

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Glow i really like all of the facts and I was so suprised by tose facts. Grow Just grammar.

Overa really like it the reason that this comment is short because i wrote this last minute.

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Glow: Wow i really liked in introduction how you started with a sound effect and ow you said Shhhhake the sound of a coffee beans being roasted. And also i really liked how you said not all brands are fair trade but it dosent mean that the comapny is bad.

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Jerry that was amazing i loved how intresting and factual it was good job. but you just need to check your spelling otherwise good job

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Glow: I liked how you added a photo carousel to show pictures in one place. Also, I liked how you explained information using bullets and even explained the history, Mica mining, and even added quotes like "MAMA DADA HELP". I also like how you added your own opinion. I was very surprised that makeup originated thousands of years ago, from Ancient Egypt. Well done!

Grow: You could add what is Fairtrade, other than that, everything's perfect.

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GLOW- I like how you made me want to read more, on each slide. GROW- its a little bad that you do that at the end because the reader wants to read more, you got to make endings.

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i loved your images and the end of the book!!!!!!......Glow: is that your writting is very nice amazing i love it Grow: is that spelling but it doesn't matter so sofia you get a A+++++++

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Hugo :) Well done! We went through a lot writing this piece and I know you put in so much effort from beginning to end. I love how you are committed to adding interesting ways to start your paragraphs. They really hook me in and make me want to keep reading. I also learned that you are a tech wiz with Google Sites! Thank you for adding lots of pages for us!

Something to work on - I think we need to work on our note taking a little bit. That will help you when it comes to writing your paragraphs.

Well done, Hugo!

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Glow: I love that little story you added a could feel the Rocks treamble and my adrenalin I was a little scared that I might die

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Hugo, I loved that you put pictures on every slide and you had a different introduction from everyone else! Before I didnt know that a soccer ball can go through so much work! Great job :)

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Your writing was intriguing, more so than others because you had your on Syakir flare in your writing. Even on a massive time crunch you were able to complete your writing and that's incredible because it shows you were focused and dedicated to finish. Sadly this writing piece isn't flawless, due to your lack of punctuation / correct punctuation. Other than that phenomenal job as it had captured my attention while I was reading it.

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Glow: I liked how you added things like "shhhakke the sound of coffee beans" to explain what sound it makes. I also loved how you put how coffee are made and how an Ethiopian coffee farmer works.

Grow: You can improve your grammar, and put the things in 1 sentence instead of
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Sofia you did such a good job and you a still learning English. WOW.
Glow: I love how you added you own twist to the way you wrote
Grow: Maybe you could add how some of the information surprised you

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i loved your sounds it makes the writting so good i love it :) Glow: i love how you writter alot, i loved your introduction it was so nice. Grow: maybe add images?

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I liked that you told the readers that if you even if they do not support fair trade does not mean there not ethical. I liked your introduction to because i could see you added your own style. Let me just say perfecto!-Lydia

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It was awesome! I loved that for the conclusion and introduction, you didnt just put 'introuction' or 'conclusion' you put another title! I also loved that you put pictures on every slide!

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Glow: I love it. I find it soooooooo Interesting. And that fact

What is the Biggest Banana Company/ Companies? that just, WOW, a round of aplause such a good fact and WHAT!!! like I did not Know that! Grow, Just some grammar and commas!

Overal LOVED IT!! I was so hooked in! And in this fact Bananas are classified as berries but black berries and mulberries aren't, I was likee HOWWW!! there is berries in the name. I am confusion. Love it! Great job.

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Pip - Well done! I think this is some of the best writing I've ever seen from you. You took the time to research like a real investigator. I know it was hard at times, but you powered through. I love how you watched an entire documentary to take notes on how Nike treats their staff and workers. You made me want to change my mind and support smaller brands who are committed to sustainability. So proud of you!

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I like yours because it in small paragraph and easy to read and it has cool pics.

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Glow: I liked that you told us a little bit about those three companys Ethletic, Will Vegans Shoes, and Cariuma. Grow: Maby you can add a concludig sentaance ( I cant really talk I dont even have one)

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Emerson, I loved that you put a how to make coffee and other brands of coffee that is sustainibel, it was really nice :')

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Luke :) Well done! My favorite part of your writing is your introduction...you really hooked me in to make me want to continue reading your piece. Even when things got tough and you struggled, you persevered. Creating a website is hard! Especially when you don't REALLY know what to do. You figured it out and have a brilliant piece of writing to show for it. I'm very proud of you. Well done !

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this was very creative I liked how you even brought your own life into you writing. But I think you can do better with your grammar which you really did well in.

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Glow: I loved how you put pictures and added things together so that people could understand your writing better.

Grow: I think you could improve your grammar.

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i loved that you writted i love bananas so know i can eat fair trade bananas! Glow: you have alot of images that you can see that you meant! Grow: maybe a introction ?! ....... i don't know?

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Great job! I like how you made the companies that use cruelty free on there, im gonna tell my mum! Grow maybe you could check where to put your commas and punctiaton, thats it.

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WOW - Sofia. You blew me away with your writing. Not only your writing, but this whole unit you gave your all to make sure it really is the best that it can be. Your English is really soaring to new heights. We are all so impressed. I can't wait to see where you taking your writing next. SO PROUD OF YOU.

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Bartu, I really liked your writing! it was intresting that big brands like apple of microscoft actually used child labour on making products! Im just glad the laptop i have at home is asus xD

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Awesome job! I loved how you put things together, added videos, and pictures.

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Glow:I like the way you mixed the images and words. Also, it is easy to read your words.

Grow: I think you can add a bit more since it is too short.

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i loved it so factual and interesting so sure there were are a couple spelling mistakes but that doesn't matter good job

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Glow- I really like the way you organize your writing and the way you add your images it makes it look really professional. Your writing I like the details you included it gave me alot of information about coffee!. Grow- the grammar is a bit off and the way you phrase your sentences. Overall good job.

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Glow: Wow you writing is amazing! I really did learn something new in your writing. And now i know Lipton is a fair trade tea brand/company i should support! Grow: maybe you can add a little bit more writing because to me its was short. But still good job!

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Syakir! Well done! You pulled through in the midnight hour and got your work finished. Not only finished, but it is really some of your best writing. I have to say, I wasn't sure if you'd get it done in time! But you proved me wrong!

I love your Final Thoughts section - it reminds me of a professional opinion section in the Newspaper. You tackled a big topic, and managed to break it down so that it is easy for us to understand.

Something to work on - don't forget your full stops, capital letters, and COMMAS!

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Nice job! I really liked how you added lots of lists. i also liked how you added a whole section of your opinion on the products and fair trade. My favorite section was the story, i thought that was very unique and different.-Lydia

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Glow: I really like that at the beginig you shared that story with us on how tea came to be. Grow: A ittle of the grammer is off but other then that you get a A+

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oh no! i did not know that amazon sode child labor!
maybe a Grow is...........i don't have a grow

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Anya I loved your work and I applaud you for how much you did.
Glow: You really put you thoughts in there and showed that you wrote it.
Grow: maybe you could have checked you grammar a bit more.

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You wrote great words and your writing was really nice! I learned some great information in your writing! You also put lots of pictures :) I also loved that you put fun facts!

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Glow: I really saw your opinion shine as Read not as much as my writing. Grow: A bit of grammar and there was once two yous hen there is one needed so no bigie. I really liked your writing overall. I found it very interesting ,and there was a lot of information even though it is a hard topic. Well Done!

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Lydia - I loved your writing. You started each section with a really interesting hook that made me want to keep reading your work! I can tell you investigated deeply about your topic. You made me think twice about supporting companies like Nike. I'm going to buy Adidas from now on!

One thing I think you need to work on is making sure that your grammar and punctuation is in check. Don't forget to add those commas, they make a big difference!

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i like your page it is fun and it is easy to read and it is writing and image not only images

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I learnt that the company Tesla is actually really nice and only has SOME bad sides, you gave great info and you even put your own thoughts! The only thing that you could improve on is maybe writing a little but more, but overall, great job!