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I'm working on fixing things because Mrs.Catherine put comments so I fixed it but I still need to do a little of revising and editing. And if I Am done I will do some 5th grade expectations.

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I am thinking to add more sentences in my writing

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I am also gonna see if I could add some 5 grade expectations to make it as a challenge

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I need to work on my revising and editing. I will try to use the checklist that Ms. Catherine sent on drive!

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I need to finish revising and editing. I am going to try to work on some 5th Grade expectations as a challenge!

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I'm revising and editing my work. my lead and transition words are going good actually really good.

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I'm almost done with my revising and editing

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Please share where you are within your literary essay piece. Show your checklist, as well as telling me what part of your essay is going well and where you feel you need to spend more time. You will want to talk about the introduction, body paragraphs and the conclusion. If you would like a teacher conference , please let me know that, as well.