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Area for Improvement: Academic Style of Writing

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Area for Improvement: Academic Style of Writing

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The first session of tutorial with Charlotte I said I wanted to improve my academic writing as I found my academic writing to be weak since the lowest score out of all my scores in IELTS was in writing.

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First feedback of my summary assignment

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First summary assignment feedback ELSS QMUL

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Feedback for my final submission of the summary assignment

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Final summary assignment feedback ELSS QMUL

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Portion of the blog post

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I found myself having to ask lecturers to repeat themselves or watch videos multiple times to fully understand the concepts. This is cost me time and my lecturers, patience. This is why I picked listening.

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Summary of an animated documentary.

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Laws of Motion in a Cartoon Landscape - Evidence 1