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Topic: chemical fertilizers
 
Topic sentence 1: One of the main advantages of chemical fertilizers could be financially acceptable. 
 
Topic sentence 2: Another significant advantage of chemical fertilizers could be quantitatively obtainable.
 
Topic sentence 3: However, one of the major impacts of chemical fertilizers could be environmentally damaging.

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farrukh136 1mo
1. not clear? Is it about cost?

farrukh136 1mo
2. ....could be the fact that these fertilizers are quantitatively obtainable.


asma alnuaimi
asma alnuaimi
Provides an application to memorize the lessons could be one of the main benefits of using technology in education.
 
Accessibility to the internet could be one of the major advantages of using technology in education.
 
The lack of interest in studying could be one of the biggest impacts of using technology in education.
 
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farrukh136 1mo
1. Providing an application to memorize......

farrukh136 1mo
2. This one doesnt make any sense and would result in a very poor paragraph in terms of grades.


Rowan Aldebs
Rowan Aldebs
 
Topic:  Benefits of Physical Activity for Children with Special Needs 
 
       1- In the first place, physical activities have a huge benefit on disables children physically. 
2-      Furthermore, it works to develop their senses. 
3-Equally important to look about progress of action. 
 

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farrukh136 1mo
1. Spelling of disabled.

farrukh136 1mo
2. Remember that a topic sentence could not be without the main topic. Also, what is "IT", here?


Maryam Alsulaiti
Maryam Alsulaiti
Topic  Decrease Traffic in Traffic Signal 
Topic sentence 1: One of the most important solutions of decreasing traffic on traffic signals is setting up surveillance cameras.
Topic sentence 2: Another important solutions of decreasing traffic on traffic signals is improving streets and traffic lights.
Topic sentence 3: In addition, one of  the solutions of decreasing traffic in traffic signals is raising traffic signals time.

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farrukh136 1mo
2 another important solutions???


Sara Al-baker
Sara Al-baker
Causes of Rickets Disorder
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, lack of vitamin D or calcium is the most important cause of suffering from rickets.
Topic sentence 2: Secondly, genetic defects play a significant role in causing rickets for children.
Topic sentence 3: Finally, the last cause behind suffering from rickets is underlying conditions. 
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farrukh136 1mo
2. Rickets among children.

farrukh136 1mo
3. Moreover, another factor that could lead to rickets is underlying conditions of a person.


Muhammad syed
Muhammad syed
Topic 

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Budoor Aljalham
Budoor Aljalham 
 
Topic sentences 1: The first significant factor which could be involved in causing Alzheimer disease is genetic factor. 

Topic sentences 2: The second factor leading to Alzheimer disease is lifestyle. 

 
Topic sentences 3: The last causing factor of Alzheimer disease is environmental factor. 



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farrukh136 1mo
Just for the third sentence it would be better if you dont use the word "Last".


Sara Al-marri
Sara Al-marri
What are the common effects of the industrial wastes?

Topic1:
The first primary effect caused by industrial waste is environmental hazard
Topic2:
The second common effect of industrial waste is climate change
Topic3:
One of the common effects of industrial waste is habitat loss

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farrukh136 1mo
all look okay


Topic Sentences First
Topic Sentences First
Lama Soaly

- Benefits of highly motivated employees for an organization 
motivating employees could have many benefits for businesses such as increasing employee satisfaction, reducing turnover and creating a positive work environment. 
topic sent1: 

topic sent2: one of the most important advantages of motivating employees for a business is controlling and ultimately decreasing the turnover rate. 
  

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Topic: chemical fertilizers

Topic sentence 1: One of the main advantages of chemical fertilizers could be financially acceptable.

Topic sentence 2: Another significant advantage of chemical fertilizers could be quantitatively obtainable.

Topic sentence 3: However, one of the major impacts of chemical fertilizers could be environmentally damaging.

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Provides an application to memorize the lessons could be one of the main benefits of using technology in education.

Accessibility to the internet could be one of the major advantages of using technology in education.

The lack of interest in studying could be one of the biggest impacts of using technology in education.

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Topic:  Benefits of Physical Activity for Children with Special Needs

1- In the first place, physical activities have a huge benefit on disables children physically.

2-      Furthermore, it works to develop their senses.

3-Equally important to look about progress of action.

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Topic  Decrease Traffic in Traffic Signal
Topic sentence 1: One of the most important solutions of decreasing traffic on traffic signals is setting up surveillance cameras.
Topic sentence 2: Another important solutions of decreasing traffic on traffic signals is improving streets and traffic lights.
Topic sentence 3: In addition, one of the solutions of decreasing traffic in traffic signals is raising traffic signals time.

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Causes of Rickets Disorder
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, lack of vitamin D or calcium is the most important cause of suffering from rickets.
Topic sentence 2: Secondly, genetic defects play a significant role in causing rickets for children.
Topic sentence 3: Finally, the last cause behind suffering from rickets is underlying conditions.

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Topic sentences 1: The first significant factor which could be involved in causing Alzheimer disease is genetic factor.

Topic sentences 2: The second factor leading to Alzheimer disease is lifestyle.

Topic sentences 3: The last causing factor of Alzheimer disease is environmental factor.

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What are the common effects of the industrial wastes?

Topic1:

The first primary effect caused by industrial waste is environmental hazard

Topic2:

The second common effect of industrial waste is climate change

Topic3:

One of the common effects of industrial waste is habitat loss

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Lama Soaly

- Benefits of highly motivated employees for an organization
motivating employees could have many benefits for businesses such as increasing employee satisfaction, reducing turnover and creating a positive work environment.
topic sent1:

topic sent2: one of the most important advantages of motivating employees for a business is controlling and ultimately decreasing the turnover rate.

topic sent3: Having a positive work environment could be another benefit of motivating employees in a business.

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I.                   Safe

(TS 1) One significant advantage of using self-driving cars is it will be more secure.

II.                Organized

(TS 2) Enhancing cars movement on streets is another significant advantage of using self-driving cars.

III.             Convenience

(TS 3) The last advantage of self-driving cars is it will provide more free time for people.

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Noora Heidous
Benefits of Small Businesses Use of the Internet

Topic sentence 1: One of the possible advantages of the internet use by the small businesses could be with regards to the marketing sector.

Topic sentence 2: Another significant advantage of internet on small businesses is that it will associate with its growth by the immense variety of the free information available online.

Topic sentence 3: Enhancing the management control is the third major benefit of using internet for small businesses.

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Topic:
1- One of the major benefits of laser hair removal is decreasing hair growth.
2- The second advantage of laser hair removal could be done on all body parts.

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pros and cons of using virtual reality in medicine.

topic sentence one: One advantage of using virtual reality in the medical field is increasing the efficiency of rehabilitation programs.
topic sentence two: Another important benefit of using VR in medicine is the improvement of medical training.
topic sentence three:

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Topic sentences: 1- Poor financial status can affect badly on public health of the community in the term of access to their rights.
2- Choosing abuse behavior is linked with poverty which has many impacts on public health.
3- Poor people suffers from lack sanitation facilities that influence public health.

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The Advantages of Robotic Surgery
Topic sentence 1: One of the most significant advantages of using robotic surgeries is better vision.
Topic sentence 2: Another important benefit of robotic surgeries is faster healing.
Topic sentence 3: In addition one important advantage of robotic surgeries is ease to the surgeon.

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topic sentence 1: one of the most important advantage of epilepsy surgery is on the medical side and health of the patient.
topic sentence 2: another possible advantage for the epilepsy surgeries is on the behavioral side which the patients changes their attitude positively.
topic sentence 3: negative effect on the nervous side is one of the most main disadvantages of the epilepsy surgeries.