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there can be many different types of hooks that are good and some that are bad so make sure to get someone's opinion.

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there can be many different types of hooks that are good and some that are bad so make sure to get someone's opinion.

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Dictionary quote hooks are usually a bad idea because they are overused and unoriginal.

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hooks are something that grabs the readers attention but it isn't what keeps it.

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The dictionary hook is boring and it won't grab a lot of people's attention.

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Hooks catch people's attention. Never start an essay with your thesis.

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its best not to used over used hooks such as beginning with a quote off the internet, unless you can elaborate on it, and catch your readers attention

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Something that stood out to me is that it's recommended to not use a popular quote as a hook. I see these a lot and I agree about how it's overused. My favorite hook was when they were calling out the reader, when the narrator said "Everyone has lied. The person reading this and even the person who wrote this sentence," or something similar. It stood out to me and was my favorite hook.

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Well a hook is supposed to grab someone's attention into the story/essay/article and if I remember correctly there are 5 types of hooks

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Never start an essay with the thesis, and dont skip the hook. It is better to have a bad hook than no hook at all.
Also if someone starts the essay like this "Well i was thinkinh about what to write with my essay and i came up with this..." just throw the essay away and hit them on the head.

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Some things that stood out to me were the fact that there are many different types of hooks you can use, and yet some people forget and completly skip over it.

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Intrigue your reader to make them support your controlling theory without even knowing it.

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try to be original when using rhetorical questions as hooks

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Don't go straight into thesis and never skip the hook.

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never start an essay with the thesis, and don't use overused sentences like " this is what i came up with for my essay".

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You can start with something broad that relates to your thesis and then use a transition to your thesis statement

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 a plain hook would not get a reader attention. You cant jump right into like the guy said about the bike "hey buddy, pal, friend...im in a bad situation would you mind helping me" instead of "Hey can I use your bike" 

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 a plain hook would not get a reader attention. You cant jump right into like the guy said about the bike "hey buddy, pal, friend...im in a bad situation would you mind helping me" instead of "Hey can I use your bike" 

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"well i was thinking about what to write for my essay and I came up with this..."
ew.
hit these people on the head PlEaSe

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to not copy and paste and inverted pyramided

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Inverted pyramid and bold pronouncement

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The question hook is overused and doesn't get anyone's attention or impresses anyone as much

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Use the inverted pyramid "statement, Transition, Thesis"

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What stood out to me was the bold pronouncement because I don't see that often in essays.

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never use someone's else's words other than others

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I did not know that you have to include a transition in between the hook and the thesis.

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lying is VERY bad. (If you cant lie good.) Also you shouldent use dictionary quotes

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Bold Pronouncement

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ewvwerfqafe ew

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try not to use personal pro ouns

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if you copy and paste you get in trouble

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if you copy and paste you get in trouble

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never skip the hook

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I LEARNED THAT YOU SHOULD ADD A HOOOK TO EVERYTHINGGG

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I LEARNED THAT YOU SHOULD ADD A HOOOK TO EVERYTHINGGG

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dont use your thesis as a hook

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never start with a thesis

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do not use a definition for yours hook

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do not use a defenition as a hook

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you can use a rhetorical question for your hook. You can also use a bold advertisement for your hook. If you use a hook to much it will hurt your essay and make it worse.
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a hook is the start so it can either grabs the readers attention or makes them not like it, so you need to make sure you make your story sound very interested and eager
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a hook is the start so it can either grabs the readers attention or makes them not like it, so you need to make sure you make 

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to start with a broad idea then get specific

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I didn't know that the transition, thesis, and hook are in all one paragraph.

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you can use a rhetorical question for your hook. You can also use a bold advertisement for your hook. If you use a hook to much it will hurt your essay and make it worse.

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a hook is the start so it can either grabs the readers attention or makes them not like it, so you need to make sure you make your story sound very interested and eager

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a hook is the start so it can either grabs the readers attention or makes them not like it, so you need to make sure you make your story sound very interested and eager

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If you use hooks too many times, it starts to become boring and it hurts your essay. Hooks need to be good and if they aren't, there's no point in having them.

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using an overused hook can actually hurt your essay instead of helping

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using an overused hook can actually hurt your essay instead of helping

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If you have no hook it is incredibly bland and boring

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Faith- that it is important to have a hook, and the hook can be the most important part of the paper, using qoeuts is a bad hook if not backed by your own info and opinion, it shows very little effort to your hook 

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Faith- that it is important to have a hook, and the hook can be the most important part of the paper, using qoeuts is a bad hook if not backed by your own info and opinion, it shows very little effort to your hook 

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Honest quoting thats not from the dictionary

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One thing suggested was to not start with a thesis as your hook.

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The hook is arguably the most important part of a paper cause who wants to read if it looks lame in the beginning

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A hook is always necessary, it helps to draw the reader in. I think the transition really helps get the reader into the points the author is trying to make without losing interest.

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Hook, transition, then thesis. The hook is something really important. Don't use something that was overused make it creative and want the reader to read it more.

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I definitely agree with how questions can be overused. I see them many times in other essays and sometimes in mine too.

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I definitely agree with how questions can be overused. I see them many times in other essays and sometimes in mine too.

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I noticed that the inverted pyramid was very important, as he used it for almost every example.

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two things that stood out to me is that, not only did they talk about interesting and elaborate intos like the inverted pyramid but it also talked about over used hooks-

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some kinds of hooks are over used and boring, but they are still better than just using a thesis.

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some kinds of hooks are over used and boring, but they are still better than just using a thesis.

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You can use the strategy of the inverted pyramid.

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You can use the strategy of the inverted pyramid.

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I like how you start with a hook and work our way to thesis, without the hook it would be boring and no one would have any interest in your reading.

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you have a hook first, then a transition second, and your thesis last.

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you should use something that catches the readers attention, or you could use the inverted pyramid

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you should use something that catches the readers attention, or you could use the inverted pyramid

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You can start with an Inverted Pyramid.

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don't start with your thesis or a questions unless the question is very good

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don't start with your thesis or a questions unless the question is very good

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Start with something that can get the reader hooked like a fun fact or something that's interesting  

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Start with something that can get the reader hooked like a fun fact or something that's interesting  

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that you should start with something interesting 

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that you should start with something interesting 

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The part where it starts talking about the different choices we could do like the Inverted pyramid and etc.

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Starting with a thesis is not good even if your hook is terrible never start with the thesis

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Starting with a thesis is not good even if your hook is terrible never start with the thesis

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To use the inverted pyramid method and start with a hook

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that you should never start with "I was thinking about something to right and I got this"

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Start with a hook, so you can grab the readers attention

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you could start with a fact or statistic

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Anyone who starts with "So I guess I will tell you all about..." should be hit with a computer. lol

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Anyone who starts with "So I guess I will tell you all about..." should be hit with a computer. lol

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Never begin or end with someone else's words

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Never begin or end with someone else's words