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In past tense

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Keeping it fluent

Include feelings and emotions

No repition

Include senses

Chronological order

Avoid speech

Different sentence lengths and openers

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Interesting sentence starters and vocabulary and adverbs

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Describe something different in each paragraph

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Focus on small details cause they can add a lot in

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It needs to be in chronological order.

Keep speech to a minimum.

Using similes and metaphors, personification, onomatopoeia.

Don't give away everything away, drip feed.

Use different sentence openers.

Sophisticated language.

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Hook the reader in

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Past tense throughout,

Chronological order,

Accurate SPAG,

Don't repeat yourself,

Don't reveal too much at the start,

New idea each paragraph,

Stop it being boring,

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Past tense always.

First person.

Chronological order.

Different and good sentence starters.

Don't repeat you self- don't drag.

Drip feed information.

Ambitious vocabulary.

Use senses.

Abstract opening paragraph.

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Slowly revealing the story

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You need to include a zoomed in perspective of anything that could hook the reader.

Unusual opening to hook the reader and you should give away too much information to the reader so they want to read in.

Ambitious vocabulary.

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Interesting and not repeating itself and includes different techniques. 1st person and good sentence starters

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Write your ideas along with your name and a short explanation.