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Good try Jane.  I can see that you have made an effort to share your personal experience about the Observation Wheel and for others to see if they want to try this too.   Your ideas are good, but I think you need to spend more time on the grammar and sentence structures.

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Good try Jane.  I can see that you have made an effort to share your personal experience about the Observation Wheel and for others to see if they want to try this too.   Your ideas are good, but I think you need to spend more time on the grammar and sentence structures.

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Hong Kong observation wheel
is the perfect place in Central.

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introduction
you can see the beautiful scenery.
If you don't like crowds,the afternoon is best.
if you want to see a beautiful night scene,go there that night.
And I heard there were a lot of delicious food.
I went there because my good friend,Jennie,d me to practice my courage and had a good Saturday .I was here for a
activity with my friend.

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We met at observation wheel in the afternoon.We bought juice before went up,but did not had a drink in observation wheel.I can smell the food
About three laps ,the observation wheel slowly rises.When I got to the top,I screamed because I was very scared.
Although I was scared, I still enjoyed the trip.

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Ending
We went Tsim Sha Tsui by ship.I had a nice of the sea.finally I backed home by MTR. I was very satisfying with the travel.