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Compliment: I liked the way that you showed what was happening in the story. You did not just tell us.
Challenge: Use more descriptive words.

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Jacob, please put your A Time When I was Afraid graphic organizer here.

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Compliment: I liked how you used quotation marks.
Challenge: Please make sure you have capital letters and punctuation.

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