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On the other hand, some people believe that online learning is more effective than face to face learning.They assume that online learning  gives students more comfort for learning and listening in  class. In fact, they can reduce distractions. moreover, online learning requires less time and easily accessible for students.   good

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However, some people have a mindset that online learning has the same impact on a student as one on one learning.They proclaim that online learning is convenient. In reality, students struggle coping with house work and study happening at the same time, finding it difficult to manage tasks altogether.Furthermore, having the whole family present in house while attending your class makes it more awkward than convenient as you naturally cannot answer or talk freely the way you do in a class.
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In summary, because generation z is having high quality education and upgraded technology, they are going to have a higher financially success rate than their parent’s generation. High quality education will help them deal with life in a better and smarter way because of the educational background they will be having in the future. Also, upgraded technology will make everything easy to access and will decrease many complications they might face. Although many others think that the new generation is less successful than their parent’s generation because of video games addiction, video games actually helps improving a lot of skills. In sum, the new generation is more successful than the old generation and they will develop many great things in the future

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In conclusion, it will be a bad idea to make public transportation services free because the country will lose a lot of money and people will act negligently in public transportation. While some people think making public transportation free would attract people, providing free transportation will not attract people because people actually prefer to use private transportation to maintain their privacy and making public transportation free will not change that.In sum, providing free transportation is a bad policy decision for Qatar because it will not provide any good results and only will lead to loss.

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Bp3:  Although, some people are convinced that making public transportation changeless is a good policy.  They argue that free public transportation can reduce the traffic pollution.

However, nether pollution or traffic will be reduced, because its only transfer pressure to public transportation and that will probably increase the pollution.  In order to provide more taxi cabs and busses to cover the demands.

In addition, delay in stations will become a regular situation, because of the amount of people who wants to benefit the decision and saving money.

They argue that it can assist the community by providing the equality among society members.

Even though, labors are representing the majority that uses public transportation, equality may sound good but, it will need a lot more than free public transportation to reach it.

In detail, everybody will be able to use metro, taxi cabs and buses without a good reason except that it’s for everyone, that will raise the sexual harassment in public transportation among females, including staring, winking, groping, pinching, and sexual comments.

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To conclude, online learning is a better way learning than face to face learning. Many people quite like it because it is both easy, suitable to use and more economical. Others like it because it is safer and obliging. Although some people think it is lack of social interaction, online learning is actually providing body language by using the camera and microphone which body language is the main thing while interacting . All in all, online learning is very effective and should be used more throughout the years.

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Bp3: On the other hand ,some people think that online learning is more effective than face to face learning.They claim that online learning gives the student the ability to organize and make their own schedule. While face to face learning is unproductive because of the cramped and crowded classes, where the student can not focus or interact with the teacher and this affects the teaching process. Furthermore, studying in classrooms may distract students unlike online learning that gives the student the chance to learn in a comfortable environment.

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Bp3 :   On the other hand, some people believe that face to face education is not more influential than online education.  They argue that face to face learning wastes time and money. In fact, education in the traditional way need a lot  of things, which leads to waste a lot of money, such as paper books and school uniform. In addition to transportation like buses and cars that takes amount of time to get to school. Furthermore, there are a lot of schools government that offers a free education and they are spread across the country and adjacent to residential areas to facilitate access to school.

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Bp3 :   On the other hand, some people believe that face to face education is not more influential than online education.  They argue that face to face learning wastes time and money. In fact, education in the traditional way need a lot  of things, which leads to waste a lot of money, such as paper books and school uniform. In addition to transportation like buses and cars that takes amount of time to get to school. Furthermore, there are a lot of schools government that offers a free education and they are spread across the country and adjacent to residential areas to facilitate access to school.

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on the other hand, some people believe that making public transportation free will be a good policy for Qatar. they argue that it will make many people use it, in reality many of them don't like using public transportation because it waste their time while the train stops in each station and prevents them to have privacy. furthermore, (wrong transition word)they say that it will saves people money while usually public transportation is not very expensive and Qatar can make it very if some people can pay a lot for public transportation. (Not clear)

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On the other hand, some people believe providing free transportation is not a good policy decision for Qatar.

Many people are against providing free transportation because there are many people who would lose their jobs and companies would not be expected to provide top services.

In fact, they would need more public transport workers with increased and better public transport.

Furthermore,a lot of public transport companies are reliable and need more customers.
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In contrast, so many people believe that online learning is more effective than face to face learning. They argue that online learning is more comfortable and easier than face to face learning. In reality, they can learn anywhere with any device available to use and if they missed the session or they didn't understand some of the information they can immediately back to it again  because it has been recorded. In addition, students will get distracted easily by anything so that will keep them unaware about what the tutor talk about or they will lose so many important things during the session.

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On the other hand, some people believe that online learning is as effective as face-to-face learning.They argue that online learning gives students a more flexible schedule and environment. In reality, face- to- face  classes have the same flexibility as online classes maybe even more . Because, face-to-face classes schedules are decided and created in a way that suits the students  and  give them the chance to adapt their schedules based on their personal preference of time and days. Moreover, face-to-face classes gives students a better learning environment for pupils. Since face-to-face classes helps students gain greater understanding through interacting directly with their professors and gives students the ability to concentrate harder in a less distracting environment.Good

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BP3:  On the other hand, some people believe that studying online is as effective as face to face learning.
They argue that it is more flexible and available to everyone which helps to provide education to people who cannot afford it because of their work connections, or because of some diseases and disabilities that prevent them from that.
In fact, face-to-face learning provides educational opportunities for all students, despite their different ages it considerate all student cases whether it is an ordinary student, or with special needs where there are special teachers who have been trained in a special way to deal with the
difference between the students and their ages.
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On the other hand, some people believe that the Qatar’s youth generation is lazier than their parent’s generation. This is not the essay question They argue that the Qatar’s youth generation is addicted to the video games and social media applications. In reality, video games and social media applications could strengthen a range of cognitive skills like reasoning, memory and perception. In addition, there are a lot of educational video games and educational accounts on social media.   Good points but they supporting the wrong topic sentence.

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On the other hand, some people believe that making all public transportation services free will be a good policy decision for Qatar because it will attract people. In reality, many people dislike using public transportation because of the time you consume while stopping in every station and also because people prefer to have their privacy and making public transportation free will not solve these problems. Moreover, the quality of services on the public transportation will not be good because people are not paying anything to get good services and that will help decreasing number of people using public transportation for sure.
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Amal Alnabit 104                On the other hand, some people think that using vaccine on humans immediately is logical. They argue that it will save time and it will lead to quick results. In reality vaccines undergo multiple trials to develop them and ensure their success. Even though using vaccines on humans could save time, It is considered as a risky option. In addition, with the development these days ,when using the vaccine on animals the results appear faster ,So there would not be a problem on humans.     Good work. Do not star a sentence with although

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Amal Alnabit 104                On the other hand, some people think that using vaccine on humans immediately is logical. They argue that it will save time and it will lead to quick results. In reality vaccines undergo multiple trials to develop them and ensure their success. Even though using vaccines on humans could save time, It is considered as a risky option. In addition, with the development these days ,when using the vaccine on animals the results appear faster ,So there would not be a problem on humans.     Good work. Do not star a sentence with although

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Question 4;- Bp3
On the other hand, some people believe that youth will not be as successful as their parents . They argue that youth will not be fortunate as their parents because of careless and lethargic attitude. In reality, many youth will be as successful as their parents because of their well improve their self and to improve the country , so it does not apply to this generation. In addition,  some minority like to play sports such as basketball and baseball which helps them remain fit and active are some are interested in creating new technology's which will help advance the country.
Good structure but pay more attention to your argument.  You may lose marks for content.

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On the other hand, some people think that online learning is not effective as face-to-face learning. They claim that online learning has no interaction or motivation. In fact, distance learning has  online sessions that help the students to participate with the instructor. Furthermore, the student can ask the doctor and get responses and feedback immediately. Which makes the online learning faster and easier to deal with. In addition, they argue that online learning spend a lot of money like buying tablets and the internet bill. In reality,  you only need to buy one electronic device and it will leave for years. This actually save money because you do not have to print any document. The great point is that it  protects the environment because there is no waste papers and this is a big issue in the world, so we have to support the environment. For the internet bill, most of people have WIFI in their home and they can not leave without it so, they have to pay for it anyway.    Good

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Skipping Animal Testing for COVID19 :     Sara aljaber 104                                BP3:  On the other hand, some people say that skipping tests on animals is the best choice. They argue that it may lead to a fast-possible treatment, save time and rescue more people. However, the coronavirus could then become worse and fiercer against medicines that are not tried before on animals. Such issues could occur because the ineffective treatments could weaken immunity and give the opportunity to the illness to be developed. In addition, the treatment period of the illness until reaching a full recovery could not be identified when trying the medicine on humans for faster treatment purposes. 

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Skipping Animal Testing for COVID19 :     Sara aljaber 104                                BP3:  On the other hand, some people say that skipping tests on animals is the best choice. They argue that it may lead to a fast-possible treatment, save time and rescue more people. However, the coronavirus could then become worse and fiercer against medicines that are not tried before on animals. Such issues could occur because the ineffective treatments could weaken immunity and give the opportunity to the illness to be developed. In addition, the treatment period of the illness until reaching a full recovery could not be identified when trying the medicine on humans for faster treatment purposes. 

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This is good.  Make sure these are your own words ok Sara because remember your paper will be submitted on safeassign.

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In contrast, it may be argued that Qatar’s youth generation might not be as financially successful as their parents due to them relying on their parents (Do not include reason in your topic sentence.  this information should be your second sentence in Bp3. Having parents that are financially successful may make the children comfortable in feeling they always have their parents to lean on and they would have less passion to thrive and be better than their parents for the reason that they have everything growing up and so that can affect them in a way by leading them to not work as hard as their parents did which can therefore lead them to be less successful than their parents were. However that is assumption that the children would be not as hard working as their parents were because of having everything growing up were in fact, having everything they have as they were children may lead them to work even harder to keep living that way and ensuring that their children have the same things and living the same way they did and even better
Too wordy.  I cannot follow your point and if I cant follow it, then the person who will grade your paper will also not be able to follow it as well. so please make clear points. Use word that will make your point easy to understand  Follow the template.

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One the other hand, half percent of students and parents ( Do not use percentage say many) believe that learning online is not as effective as face-to-face learning. They claim that the technical issues that occurred during classes affect the student's academic level. In fact, (you have to indicate what blackboard is and how using it as an example is relevant to the point you are making).Blackboard is not available as an application in Qatar, which made it difficult for families to provide every student member a laptop or a tablet as soon as possible in this crisis. Besides, the majority complained even if meeting applications worked there would be some connection errors, poor quality, and joining class’s problems that influence the pupil's understanding and grades negatively.
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On the other hand, some people believe that human testing should not be done first. They argue that human testing might be unsafe and it is unethical. In fact, time has changed and rules has been established in order to protect human subjects and their health. Government and testing organizations have create standards which does not endanger human’s health.

Transition word needed to introduce the second refutation. You must give the reader a sign post that you are moving to another point. Over the years, human testing has improved their ethics and society should start accepting them as they have safety standards that do not put the health of the human subject in danger. And for those who argue that human testing is unethical. Actually, there is a theory that is called utilitarianism that states that something or an action is moral or good when it produces the greatest amount of good for the greatest number of people. Based on this theory, volunteering for vaccine test is an ethical action which will save a lot of lives.

Good argument but too many grammatical and punctuation error takes away from easily understanding your content.

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However, testing on animals first before humans for covid -19 cure is best because it’s logical and follows protocol.

Bp3: On the other hand, some people believe that the researchers have to skip animal testing to find cure for covid -19 and go straight to human testing. They argue that animal testing will take a long time and skipping it could save lives. In fact, going straight on testing animals. T his is not a complete sentence Indeed, doing experiments on humans without going to the animal may not lead to wasting many people's lives and finding a quick cure. In addition, many people think that try ing (you are not talking about peoples thoughts here.  At this time you are now talking about/suporting your own argument) medicine on humane straight will not wast time on the animal with less cost and fast results.

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On the other hand, some people think that generation z won’t be as financially successful as their parents because the new generation is more dependent on technologies and the internet. While their parents have made their wealth working in a real economy sector.
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Making all Free Public Transportation in Qatar would be a Good policy?
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On the other hand, some people thing that making free public transportation in Qatar would not be a helpful policy. They say that free public transportation could have negative impact in economy decrease because Qatar spend a lot of money for public transportation especially in metro they spend more than 1 million in it . Also they added that some people will not take care about free public transport if someone destroys it such as throwing food, pouring juice or even writing on public transport walls like metro.
Aldana, these are two strong counter arguments, but you did not present any refutation.  You need two.  See the sample on PPt #23

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On the other hand, some people believe that the researcher should skip testing vaccine on animals and try it on human direct. They argue that going directly to humans and test the vaccine on them will be better. Actually, it may delay a real vaccine if it doesn't work. In addition, It can make the patient's condition worsen and delay his recovery, as well as cause some side effects.
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On the other hand, some people think that this generation will not be successful as their parents generation. They argue that this generation is more lazy and unhelpful. In fact, this generation is more powerful and helpful because of the big development in this generation. Moreover, being lazy just depends on the person and the factors that affect him, but not all the generation is lazy and unhelpful.
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However, Qatar's youth generation could be as financially as their parents because of high education and effective plans.

On the other hand , other people believe that  (Generation ) are not the best people to lead the Qatar's future (this is not the question asked) to economic success. They argue that young people will not work harder as their parents. In fact, they young  Qataris are active and energetic to work in long hours in confidence . Moreover, (Generation Z) can create ideas greater than parents to be successful i n economically which it encourage them to achieve plans.
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On the other hand, some people believe that online learning is more effective than face to face learning. They argue that , student can save transportation money and the time .Moreover, student can start learning in any time of the day and in any places, whether its bed room or garden or balcony.In reality, student might be distracted by a number of factors while studying online.,
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Refutation 1: In reality, using untested vaccine cure on human body can lead to death lieu curing.

Refutation 2: further more, mouse has the nearest biological  to human body , so researchers can use it instead of exposing  human to danger. ( Does your topic sentence say anything about a mouse.  If not you cannot introduce mouse here.  What argument was stated in the topic sentence.  You need specific sentences to support that.)

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On the other hand, some people think that the youth generation will not be financially successful as their parents.
They argue the youth generation (generation z) will not be financially as their parents because they do not have enough experiences.    Assignment incomplete

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On the other hand, some people believe that face to face learning isn't more influential than online learning.
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On the contrary, some people believe that face-to-face learning is more effective than online learning. They assume that face-to-face learning is good because of cooperation between students.

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In contrast, many people are against online learning, they claim it is not effective as face to face learning.

They argue that online learning make lack of social interaction.

In fact, it is the same as face to face learning, you are socializing but from distance, you can open the microphone  and camera for clear body language to interact together.

Furthermore, some say that online learning reduces students productivity.

Actually, students get more productive when they are comfortable, online learning is very helpful to get more things done while you are at home and comfortable at the same time.
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On the other hand, some people believe that researchers should not skipping animal testing and going straight to human testing.

They argue that
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On the other hand, some people believe that face to face learning isn't more influential than online learning.

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On the other hand, some people believe that face to face learning isn't more influential than online learning.

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They argue that online learning saves time and money.

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On the other hand,  some people believe that making public transportation for free in Qatar is not the best policy. they argue that companies will lose their fund. In fact, companies will be financially-supported by the government to provide a suitable service. Moreover, companies will compete to provide the best service in order to be the government first choice to serve free public transportation.  Good argument.

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On the contrary, some people believe that face-to-face learning is more effective than online learning. They assume that face-to-face learning is good because of cooperation between students. Actually, face-to-face learning make students to discuss and help each other. In addition, it is easiest for the teacher seeing his students front of him while teaching because this make the teaching process go faster with good results.  Good

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on the other hand, some people believe that it's hard for generation z in Qatar to be as financially successful as their parents.

They argue that generation z in Qatar will face some difficulties.
In reality, the  truth is far more complex because of the pressure they will be under from the competition with other countries.
Moreover, they can overcome these difficulties if they benefit from parent's experiences.  Good

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On the other hand, some people think that the youth generation will not be financially successful as their parents.
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Write your entire BP3 : Include Clear thesis statement, correct transition, logical counter argument. logical reason to support it and two sensible refutations. Follow the sample on PPT#23

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1. Is on line learning as effective as face to face learning?

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1. Is on line learning as effective as face to face learning?

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On the other hand, some people believe that online learning is more effective than face to face learning.They assume that online learning  gives students more comfort for learning and listening in  class. In fact, they can reduce distractions. moreover, online learning requires less time and easily accessible for students.   good

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Q2.  Would making all public transportation services free be a good policy decision for Qatar?

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Q2.  Would making all public transportation services free be a good policy decision for Qatar?

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On the contrary, some people believe that face-to-face learning is more effective than online learning. They assume that face-to-face learning is good because of cooperation between students.

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Q3.  Should researchers fast track a vaccine cure by skipping animal testing and going straight to human testing?

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Q3.  Should researchers fast track a vaccine cure by skipping animal testing and going straight to human testing?

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Q4. Will Qatar's youth generation be as financially successful s their parents generation.  Why or why not?

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Q4. Will Qatar's youth generation be as financially successful s their parents generation.  Why or why not?