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This is my view outside my window. Honestly my eyes hurt from looking at too much electronics and I want to go back to school soon
Ms J: I suggest you look at something green every hour or half hour. It will be restful for your eyes. You're supposed to do only 2 hours of computer work. How many hours did you do in a day on the computer ?

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This is the view from the window. I feel tired as i I have to wakeup (spelling)  early and prepare to sit infront (spelling) of the laptop for a few hours. I feel hbl is not as productive compared to being in school and in school there's   friends who (missing pronoun) can talk to , to make lessons less boring at times.

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My view in my room everyday, seriously feel like I’m gonna die from all of these work that our teachers are giving. I’d honestly rather go to school then be in the house all day 24/7, can’t even go out and hang out with my friends :( I just want the virus to end.

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This is the view from my living room, i (punctuation) don't really have a study table, so i just study in my living room :)) i always feel tired and restless all the time because of the environment i am in, but yes i will try to keep up with the topics i have missed and carry on with the current topic taught. honestly, i would rather go out of my house to study and eat food because home is getting boring and i would love to meet up with my friends after all of this is over :)))
Ms J: You really need to improve your punctuation. Write one idea at a time and use the proper conjunction as well. You need to redo this work.

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This is the view from my room. Confused with how online classes work since I'm more or less new with it. Just want to go back to sleep as I'm at home and its comfortable. I am thankful that I can do my work at my own pace and at an own time own target. I guess I'm supposed to hope school opens soon so I can see my friends or whatever? But I like online classes. Thank you:)

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This is the view of my workstation, may  (punctuation) seem rather weird but i learned (missing word) appreciate it for the moment. Im feeling calm after being very sressed (spelling) a few hours ago. I wished i was at school though, with good companu (spelling) than rather do (verb form) work alone.

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This is the view from my room. I feel tired as there are a few distractions and the workload is a lot heavier so i need to rush to complete some of the work.
Ms J: Why is the workload heavier though? Did the teachers give you too much work or is it because there is nothing else to do but work?

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This is the view from my room. As of now, I am feel tired and lifeless because I miss school. In school I can focus more rather than being here getting distracted by my video games and phone.
Ms J: Its good that you know the phone and games are a distraction. I hope you are doing well.

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This is a view outside my  from my work place. Currently I feel that HBL is more tiring then school work as the workload is heavier with lesser time to complete .
Ms J: Why is the workload heavier? Don't you get the same amount of work or maybe the teachers are able to mark at a much faster rate and then give you some more work?

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this (punctuation) is the view from outside my room window. i feel unproductive as there is nothing to do and i feel extremely lonely
Ms J: Although you have very few mistakes and it is only for punctuation, I still want you to do corrections. I feel that THIS is due to carelessness and you cannot afford to be careless.

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This is my view and i am finishing my hbl and i feel very lonely as all my friends are not able to go out due to the circuit breaker.
Ms J: Dear stranger
Please take more care with punctuation and sms language. I warned you already. :(

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This is the view from my room window🤩. I feel tired and super unproductive right now because everything around me is distracting me😕 i would rather be in school right now not gonna lie, i miss my friends and my family is just skjhafd😠 and i wanna go shopping and spend money.😅orite im going to go sleep now. bye👋🏻

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This is my view outside of my window. I feel extremely bored and feel like I can do much more productive things other than taking this picture and writing this statement. I wish I can just sleep right now.
Ms J: Take a deep breath. Don't sleep so much. Remember to exercise. It will help.

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I am currently very tired and unproductive because i have  to wake up at 7 and get ready to seat (verb form) infront (spelling) of my study table for 7hrs (short form!) a day and be on task so that i can submit work on time .i (missing modal verb) rather be in sch (short form)at least i would feel more focused compared to home at the same time i would bable (spelling) to learn effectively..(punctuation) This is the view i see when i wake up early :(

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Currently tired and hungry. This is the view from my house. I cant wait to get back to school instead of hbl...

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this (punctuation) photo is taken from my room. currently i'm  (punctuation for both) feeling very tired. 3. i prefer to be in school and please end hbl so i don't have to wake up and do homework online every day.

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this photo is taken from my room. i feel tired everyday so saying i'm tried doesn't mean anything to me anymore. but this is what i see everyday now. Although HBL is fun, i prefer being in school being able to talk with friends and have fun other than talking to them online.
Ms J: Are you the Punctuation King?

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This is the view that i get everyday . The road is empty and the atmosphere is not that lively anymore . I missed going to school and I wished i was more appreciative of being able to learn in school.
Ms J. Ok I give you a pass from doing correction this time round. I am glad you are beginning to appreciate school.

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This is view i have while i am completing my hbl and i miss having lessons in school and its too early to wake up for hbl and it can be tiring and stressful as we are not used to it

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i feel tired everyday so saying i'm tried doesn't mean anything to me anymore. but this is what i see everyday from and it is indeed very beautiful and breathe taking view that i see. i would rather stay in school.
Ms J. Essentially you have one mistake - the personal pronoun 'I'. Please remember NOT to use sms language in English work.

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the view from my work place is east coast park

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This is the view from my room window, nothing much to see just flats everywhere. I’m feeling tired as i have to stare at my laptop for half a day just doing work. I am happy at where i am, i don’t prefer to be anywhere else as I am most comfortable at home. I prefer not doing anything so please give lesser work to do :)))))))))))
Ms J: Be careful of punctuation especially the personal pronoun 'I'.

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This is the view from my room. It outside the window and this is also the view i wake up to every day with a big palm tree and the Eunos CC opposite my house. I feel a little more chill than yesterday as yesterday was my first full HBL and it was pretty stressful handling my siblings and doing my work while helping with their work too. I miss going to school and i miss hanging out with my friends. I miss going out with them and travel to popular places in singapore (punctuation) such as bugis street.(punctuation)  I would rather go back to school than do HBL to be really honest but thats (spelling)  fine. HBL is still pretty great i guess.
Ms J: I am glad you are very accepting of the HBL work. I notice your tone is very informal in the post. Please know that proper nouns needs capital letters.

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I wake up in the morning just nice (rephrase) before the sun rises. It is very refreshing to see the golden rays of the sun hit the leaves and give out a bright glow while enjoying the breezy morning. This is the view from outside my corridor. I wish to be in school with my friends
Ms J: You have a lyrical post. I like the way you describe the sun. Good work.

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This is a view outside my room window. I am feeling frustrated at the laptop as it is loading very slowly. I am also tired of waking up in the morning and face (ing for verb form) the laptop to finish the work given. I prefer to do work in school so that there is no more trouble to do work online. Going back to school, I can also can feel less board (spelling) as i can talk to my friends.

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this (punctuation) is the view outside the window. i’m (punctuation) feeling super tired today but i am still coping with my hbl. i prefer studying in school as i feel more productive and also friends who can talk to and eat with during recess. but (punctuation) even though while we’re doing hbl, zooming with friends are (SVA) still great but not as great as meeting in school to meet and talk
Ms J: You cannot have these types of punctuation mistakes at Sec 4. Be careful.

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This is my view from where i’m currently carrying out HBL. My view for the next 3 weeks. My back is starting to hurt after sitting in a very uncomfortable position to reach my laptop. I prefer going to school because I feel more productive and energised when i leave the house. I miss the fresh air outside of the house.
Ms J: What do you mean 'to reach my laptop'? Is it on a different level?

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It’s the park near by . (Spelling and punctuation)
I feel sad right now not being able to be in school to see my friends and Teachers. (punctuation)
I would prefer to be more productive than where I am right now.
Ms J: These punctuation mistakes are a matter of carelessness and you can learn how to avoid these things!

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This is the view from my room. The view from my room isn’t really nice as it is just flats. feeling (punctuation) kinda overwhelmed & tired as i’m still adjusting to the workload :/ Although it is only the second day of HBL i miss my friends and teachers. I learnt that i should appreciate school as HBL is more tiring & draining 🙂 I would rather prefer being in school with my friends, having lessons than be given assignments to do at home, alone 🙂. but its okayy :) i’m still adjusting so maybe overtime i’ll enjoy HBL when i’m more comfortable with it.
Ms J: I need you to correct all the punctuation mistakes. The informal tone is ok to use in the post.

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This is my view for the past 3 days as I can't be bothered to leave my room. I am feeling more tired than going to school. I learnt that we should appreciate what we have such as simple things like going to school as HBL work is more stressful and tiring.
Ms J: Excuse me. Surely you have to leave the room to talk with your family!

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Now at home trying to finish all the work given while people are strolling or having a morning run outside . Even completing homework at home can be quite tiring and quite troublesome.
Ms J: Why is it tiring? Don't you get to rest more comfortably at home?

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Currently in dad’s office
Feeling bored and tired of HBL
Wished to go out or play some mobile games instead.
Ms J: Don't you do HBL at home? Why are you in your dad's office?

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This is a view outside my workstation. I’m feeling very bored that i’m (Punctuation) gonna stay at home for 1 month and tired as there is a tonnes (Subject Verb Agreement) of homework waiting for me.I would prefer to go out with my friends to hang out rather than staying at home to rot.
Ms J: What is the right SVA here? Please correct this serious error. DO not use sms language in English work.

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The living room is where I took the picture. Currently, I'm feeling bored as I have to stay at home for a month. I would prefer to be at my friends house studying or playing computer and phone games.
Ms J: Don't you still play those games after doing HBL work? I can't believe you've suddenly stopped.

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I am currently at home, in my room. i currently feel sick and tired and most probably lethargic. i wish i was sleeping instead and not doing much.
Ms J: Do not use the same adverb. What is another adverb for 'currently'? In addition, please do not use sms language in English work. I need a capital letter for the personal pronoun.

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Well this is the view from my workstation. Personally I like looking at this view very much as I have a clear view of the sky. Right now I'm bored as I can ever be, but that's fine. If ya asked where I'd rather be, I'd say school because I prefer written work instead of online work, so yea.
Ms J: Apart from hbl that you do at home, what else do you usually do as well? Have you taken up a new skill or hobby?

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This is the view outside my workstation.Nothing much as you guys know where this place is.Felt tired and sleepy after going here for two days but it is all worth it as I get to focus more on my studies and concentrate more on improving myself during this “circuit breaker”.Around this timing (8:30 am) I wish I would have been on my bed right now cuddling back to sleep or either eating my breakfast or playing video games.

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This the view outside my work station. The sun rays shone on the trees bringing them to life.
I feel much alive when I look at the nature. Well Shin Yan, I didn't know you can write so lyrically as well. Good job here.
Studying in school is more effective than studying at home. Despite the Covid 19 situation, I will try my best to concentrate.
Ms J. I am glad to see that you can write a paragraph without a grammar mistake. Its  a new side to your writing :)

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I am inside my bedroom ,sitting on my study table. which i can  (I can see nothing ... Try a new sentence so it doesn't become a run-on one)  see nothing through the window now, as my mum locked to window in my bedroom so that the insect would not fly in (Your window is not made out of glass? Why can't you see through it?) . But the view outside when is night time sky is the pretties (spelling) .Doing online assignments instead of having lesson in class is two different feelings (Re order the sentence structure here ...I get two different feelings when ...) even though i feel tired all the time, one is freedom ,another one is seeing my friends .
Ms J: You need to seriously try to write in simple sentences so your ideas do not confuse your audience. You ideas are interesting but confusing. Try to sequence them differently and categorise them as well. The picture is one of the prettiest I have seen in this page though.

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This is my view from my room window,, (why the 2 commas?)kinda sleepy and restless today but i am going to push myself throughout till i am done with today's hbl lesson. I miss my friends in school,, 21 more days! Jiayou everyone !
Ms J: I am confused at your new punctuation? Is it just a careless mistake or are you doing this deliberately? Check the capital for personal pronoun.

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The view of the mysterious and wondrous place we call planet earth, in all of its majesty from the view of a 16th floor balcony. Personally speaking, I feel rather calm as I view this space, it fills me with a sense of joy to see such a wonderful and empty plane, free from the perils of the world. Though to be honest, I'd rather play videogames

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This is the view from my room. I’m feeling a bit unwell due to lack of sleep but I feel motivated to study. I prefer to be with my 2 cats that are usually outside of school and my friends.
Ms J: You have 2 cats outside of school? Community cats you mean? It's a little unclear.

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I am standing in front of my window, appreciating the nature outside . I am feeling tired as looking at the computer for almost a half day ,really tires me out . I wished I can get out of house and go to the attractions in Singapore like Universal Studios (USS)
Ms J: It's a surprise that you mentioned USS. Is it because you wanted some really massive movements like rides in contrast to be in one place for  along period of time? Make this clearer.

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I am inside my study room right now, I can see the swimming pool,the gym,cafe,playground as well as the other condominium blocks outside my window. I feel uncomfortable as I am still not used to use my computer to complete assignments. I miss having lesson in school although today is only the second day of Home Base Learning.
Ms J: There will be many more days. Have you tried to learn a new skill? Many people under lockdown learn a new skill even though they also have to work at home.

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This is the view outside my room . There use d to be several cars driving pass (spelling) this area since it’s the community centre. Now it feels weirdly quiet (good adjective) that this area is not congested with cars and people but only buses and a few private cars. Since my house opposite has a supermarket and Food courts (reorder the sequence of the ideas) ,I normally will go out and walk .However due to Covid-19 I barely can live (spelling) my house unless it becomes a need to stock up food.

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Feeling sleepy as my view is not that nicee beacause the government is building a school infront of my block. (Do not put all your ideas in one sentence. Make 3 sentences out of these jumble of ideas)

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This is the view from my doorstep. There is a mall right opposite my house and usually on normal days, there will be lots of cars on the road and many people walking to the mall. From my view i do not see any cars passing by the road (missing conjunction) neither  do i see anyone walking to the mall. Its a weird experience seeing less people around because im used to seeing crowds around the mall area. I usually do spend my time going to the mall for snacks or for shopping and i miss that. I am really bored at home:(
Ms J: Generally you have a good grasp of the mechanics of grammar. However you really need to be careful when you are writing complex sentences.

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These are the flats I can see outside my window as I am typing this post. I am a little dizzy at having to be at my computer so much of the time. Although I am grateful that I  safe, I miss  walking my cat in the park.

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Just click twice on the background to create a post. Put your name for the title. Click on the arrow below to upload a photo of what you can see from where you work (workstation as you are doing your hbl). Be careful not to include anything  that you want to keep private in your photo.
WRITE 3 things ABOVE your photo.
1. Where it is.
2. What you are feeling at that moment.
3. Where you would prefer to be at or what you prefer to be doing at that moment.
See my example ;))