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Nik Nur Nasuha Binti Nik Ahmad
012020070807
Ainaa maryam binti ramli
012020070979
FEEDBACK:
No 7, TS is too general.
No 4, your TS is too long.
No 10, your TS lacks other points.

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1. Thiviya A/P Selvaraj
2. Bavathaarani A/P Rajendaran

3. Aishani Devi A/P Alagarsamy

4. Harsimran Kaur Dhillon

5. Shivaani A/P Muthaiah
FEEDBACK:
No 6, your TS is unclear.
No 7, your TS lacks other details.
No 10, your TS is unclear.

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Yasmin Irdina
Najwa Syafiqah
Sharifah Zulaikha
Syarifah Balqis
Wan Dalili Dayana
Iylia Maisarah
FEEDBACK:
No 1, it lacks the details.
No 5, your TS is unclear as to what is it that you are planning to write about.
No 7 & 10, it lack details.

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1. Muhammad Qasim bin Ahmad Yusaini
2. Muhammad Afiq Mifdhal bin Mohd Abdul Mutalib
3. Abdul Malek Mumtaz bin  Ab Aziz
4. Rishanraaj A/L Mogandass
FEEDBACK:
No 1, it is too general not strong.
No 2, your TS is too general
No 6, it is too general.
No 8, it is not strong.
No 10, your TS is incorrect.

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1. Mohamed El-farabi
2. Rohit Sharma
3. Hwang Hong Jun
4. Awangku Muhammad Ammar
5. Rhyza Marie
6. Jeyvisna
FEEDBACK:
No 1, it is not strong, it is too general.
No 6, it is not strong, it is too general.
No 8, it is not strong, it is too general.

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GROUP MEMBERS:1) Siti Izzahtul Hani binti Shaick Dawood (012020073363)3) Anis Khairina binti Arzanil (012020073255)4) Anis Farisha binti Rok Man (012020072818)5) Aufa Nasreen binti Murtadha ( 012020073266)6) Nur 'Aisyah Najwa Binti Azhar (012020073260)

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GROUP MEMBERS:1) Siti Izzahtul Hani binti Shaick Dawood (012020073363)3) Anis Khairina binti Arzanil (012020073255)4) Anis Farisha binti Rok Man (012020072818)5) Aufa Nasreen binti Murtadha ( 012020073266)6) Nur 'Aisyah Najwa Binti Azhar (012020073260)

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FEEDBACK:
For no 5, what is the connection between your TS with the original TS?
No 6, it is not correct.
No 10, your TS is a little bit out of topic. The focus is on the neighbour's cat not all cats.

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FEEDBACK:
The given thesis statements are a bit unclear and the meaning does not come across well.

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Akmal Hafiz
Ahmad Zikri
Muhammad Razan
Alvin Ara
Nathan Alexander
Mothagapriyan
FEEDBACK:
No 6, it is incorrect.
No 8, it is incorrect.
No 10, your TS does not really have the connection to the original one.

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Qistina Balqis
Nazira Izzati
Amirah Nadhirah
Siti Aisyah
Soraya Dean
FEEDBACK:
Overall it is good but you need to check to ensure that it is not too specific until you are stuck when writing the body paragraphs.

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FEEDBACK:
There are actually 1 thesis statement which is strong, which is no 3. The rest are not correct.

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1. Work in your project groups. Look at the tutorial for thesis statement. Identify whether it is too broad, too narrow or strong.
For those thesis statement which are too broad or narrow, you are to rewrite the thesis statement.
2. Please post your work on Padlet.

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1. Read the two slides on Essay format & thesis statement.
Based on  the task you did on Monday, the findings are that an essay contains 5 paragraphs :
introduction
body - 3 main points
conclusion
INTRODUCTION
- There are a few ways to write an introduction (refer to the slides). In the intro, you must have a thesis statement.

- A thesis statement is the last sentence in the introduction. It tells the topic and the main ideas in the essay.

- A thesis statement can be specific whereby it will list out the main points in the essay.
E.G. Celebrities are often poor role models because of the ways they dress, talk and behave.
(words in bold are the main topic & highlighted words are the main points)
- A thesis statement can be general whereby it just gives a general overview of the main points.
E.G The twentieth century produced three inventions that dramatically changed the lives of all Americans.
(Words in bold is the main idea & highlighted words are general ideas for the main points)

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Muhammad Razan
Ahmad Zikri
Nathan Alexander
Alvin Ara
Mothagapriyan
Akmal Hafiz

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1. Mohamed El-farabi
2. Rohit Sharma
3. Hwang Hong Jun
4. Awangku Muhammad Ammar
5. Rhyza Marie
6. Jeyvisna

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Ashiyath Shimna
Ayesha Syed
Shenaya Subasinghe

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Wan Dalili Dayana
Sharifah Zulaikha
Yasmin Irdina
Najwa Syafiqah
Syarifah Balqis
Iylia Maisarah

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Qistina Balqis
Siti Aisyah
Nazira Izzati
Amirah Nadhirah
Soraya Dean

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 Siti Izzahtul Hani             Anis Khairina                     Anis Farisha                     Aufa Nasreen                     Nur 'Aisyah Najwa

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 Siti Izzahtul Hani             Anis Khairina                     Anis Farisha                     Aufa Nasreen                     Nur 'Aisyah Najwa

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1. Work in your project groups. Find out the format of an essay ( how many paragraphs, what are the components needed to be in an essay)
2. Search on the differences of a thesis statement & topic sentences.
3. Please post your findings on Padlet.

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Thiviya A/P Selvaraj
Ainaa Maryam
Najwa Syafiqah
Shenaya
Soraya
Nazira

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Ahmad Zikri
Anis Khairina
Yasmin Irdina
Razan
Ashiyath Shimna

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Mohamed El-Farabi
Muhammad Qasim
Lee Tuck Hoe
Aufa Nasreen

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Aisyah Najwa
Afiq Mifdhal
Mothagapriyan
Malek Mumtaz
Sharifah Zulaikha

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Aisyah
Bava
Ryzha
Ammar
Dayana

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Breakout room 8
Akmal
Alvin
Jeyvisna
Simran
Shivaani

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Breakout Room 3
Amirah
Izzah
Nathan
Ayesha
Qistina
Aishani

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SOCIAL ACCEPTANCE - BLACK MIRROR (NETFLIX)

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SOCIAL ACCEPTANCE - BLACK MIRROR (NETFLIX)

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Black Mirror | Nosedive Featurette [HD] | Netflix

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Thiviya A/P Selvaraj
Shivaani
Awangku Ammar
Zulaikha
Dayana
Malek Mumtaz

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aisyah najwa
el-farabi
akmal hafiz
aufa nasreen
syarifah balqis

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Najwa Syafiqah
Yasmin Irdina
Harsimran Kaur
Jothika Pillay
Lee Tuck Hoe

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Hwang Hong Jun
Aishani
Soraya Azreen
Afif Thaqif
Jeyvisna
Qistina Balqis

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Ashiyath Shimna - 012020070217
Rohit sharma -012020072391
Muhammad Qasim (012020072693)
ALVIN ARA ANAK GERAJI 012020073243
ANIS FARISHA - 012020072818
Shenaya Subasinghe- 012020070082

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Amirah
Siti Aisyah
Ahmad Zikri
Ainaa Maryam
Nazira Izzati
Rhyza Retita

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Nik Nur Nasuha
Afiq Mifdhal
Ayesha Syed
Nathan
Razan
Sharvin Shanker

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Nathan
Thiviya
Aisyah
Izzah
Akmal
FEEDBACK:
cute is an opinion adjective, therefore it should be the second adjective after 'two'

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1.Simran
2.Amirah nadhirah
3.Aisyah najwa
4.Sharifah zulaikha
5.Motha
FEEDBACK :
- beautiful, tall young brunette

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FEEDBACK:
-'cute' is an opinion adjective. It should be the first adjective.

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1. Mohamed El-farabi
2. Hwang Hong Jun
3.Malek
4.Rohit
5. Shenaya
FEEDBACK:
-luxury - luxurious (opinion adjective). It should be among the first two adjectives.

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FEEDBACK:
Correct!

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- Dayana
- Najwa Syafiqah
- Ammar
- Ainaa Maryam
- Jeyvishna
FEEDBACK:
Correct!

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FEEDBACK:
Correct.

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Alvin
Ayesha
Nasuha
Razan
Soraya
FEEDBACK:
I think you need to reconsider the second sentence.  Which category does vibrant belong to?

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1. Muhammad Afif Thaqif bin Helmi- 012020072691
2. Iylia Maisarah binti Mohd Akram- 012020072853
3. Nik Nur Nasuha binti Nik Ahmad- 012020070807
4. Ainaa Maryam binti Ramli- 012020070979

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1) Hwang Hong Jun - 012020071973
2) Mohamed El-farabi bin Zulkarnaini - 012020070191
3) Awangku Muhammad Ammar Bin Awangku Badaruddin - 012020071958
4) Jeyvisna A/P Arumainathan - 012020091476
5) Rhyza Marie Gonzales Retita - 012020091695
6) Rohit Sharma A/L Vijey Kumar - 012020072391

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Muhammad Akmal Hafiz Bin Asmawi-012020073263
Ahmad Zikri bin Zainol-012020073273
Nur Muhammad Razan bin Sharudin-012020073245
Nathan Alexander Benny Dusti-012020073251
Alvin Ara Anak Geraji-012020073243
Mothagapriyan R Moganadass - 012020071954

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Ashiyath Shimna 012020070217

Ayesha Syed - 012020072205

Shenaya Subasinghe
- 012020070082

Zaithwa Richard Makodi - 012020070186

Sharvin Shanker - 012020091724

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1. Muhammad Qasim bin Ahmad Yusaini @ Ahmad Nordin (012020072693)
2. Abdul Malek Mumtaz bin AB Aziz
(012020070446)
3. Muhammad Afiq Mifdhal bin Mohd Abdul  Mutalib (012020072719)
4. Rishanraj a/l Kannadasan
(012020072697)
5. Lee Tuck Hoe
(012020091776)

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1. Nur Najwa Syafiqah bt Abdullah (012020070918)
2. Yasmin Irdina bt Rustam Shahril (012020071332)
3. Sharifah Zulaikha bt Syed Ahmad Badiuzaman (012020071014)
4. Syarifah Balqis Nuwsath bt Syed Shahriar Ahmed (012020071949)
5. Wan Dalili Dayana bt Hasnan (012020071754)

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1. Thiviya A/P Selvaraj (012020072068) 2.Harsimran Kaur Dhillon (012020070980)
3.Bavathaarani Rajendaran
(012020070751)
4. Aishani Devi A/P Alagarsamy (012020072201)
5.Shivaani Muthaiah
(012020072791)

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1) Amirah Nadhirah Binti Arifin (012020073244)
2) Siti Aisyah Binti Rosli (012020073264)
3) Qistina Balqis Binti Ahmad Nazari (012020073246)
4) Nazira Izzati Binti Baharudin (012020073259)
5) Soraya Dean Binti Rudin Azreen (012020073249)

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1) Siti Izzahtul Hani binti Shaick Dawood (012020021271)
3) Anis Khairina binti Arzanil
(012020073255)
4) Anis Farisha binti Rok Man (012020072818)
5) AUFA NASREEN BINTI MURTADHA  012020073266
6) NUR 'AISYAH NAJWA BINTI AZHAR
012020073260

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CONJUCTION

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I see a small poor boy playing around by jumping from one heap to another. The environment is with polluted air drawn by factories and vehicles. The boy seemed poor as he’s not dressed properly and he’s living in a rural area and not a residential area with no family and friends. This place looks more like place where they dump all the extra garments.

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There are six different man acting or performing a circus stunt by leaping bravely from a diving platform onto a soft ground or into a pool of water to amuse their audience. In this circus act, we assume that these are convicts due to their outfits. They are on a desperate and daring escape from prison during the mid 20th century.

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1) The two people in the small room which we presume are astronaut are holding a pen while looking at a book full with highlights. They look like they are revising something while trying to breath through the mask connected to the oxygen tank.

2) We saw that their clothes resemble like a trainee at the astronaut academy and the books are filled with word and photos that resemble textbook. The obvious fact that they are wearing mask connected to a weird object that is unfamilliar but presume is an oxygen tank.

3)  The person on the left is wearing a ring on his ring finger. The situation looks like a simulation and not a real one as they look very uncomfortable in the photo. The emblem on their jackets make them look like they are working in a space related field. In addition to that, the mask that they were wearing looks old thus our suspicion that the photo were taken in the 80’s era.

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a) A herd of sheep gathered underneath the spotlight.
b) They did not want to stay in the dark because they are more vulnerable in the dark
c) the blimp is chasing the sheeps to catch the sheeps for its wool. There's always a light in the darkest roads. Everyone deserves to be seen. Everyone wants to be under the spotlight... craving for attention. Lights always guides you the way whenever you feel lost and lonely. Sheep is afraid of the sound of the blimp.

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Ayesha Syed. Inference 3 Man in the Muddy Pothole

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Ayesha Syed. Inference 3 Man in the Muddy Pothole

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In a rundown down city with close packed residential apartments. A man is seen "swimming" in a road side pot hole filled with muddy rainwater. An officer of some kind in uniform is seen looking down in somewhat awe at the sight as he drives past in a motorcycle. There are other people in the image who seem unfazed to the mans odd action. The whole has been corned off from the public as seen with the official city car parked behind the hole and the construction tape. However, it seems efforts were unsuccessful given the actions of the man. He may be a member of the public and the officers are about to apprehend him due to his actions. The city seems to be quite busy given the high traffic of cars seen in the back ground of the image. It can be assumed that the image was taken in an Asian/Heavily Populated nation given the appearance of the city (many apartment blocks) and the appearance of the people (dark tones individuals).

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That person is swimming, the background reveals some information about the activity. They are swimming near Bridge like structure

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Inference 5

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A boy was trying to dive in the river that was covered with foam. The foam looks so many and unnatural. It might come from the industrial waste. This is because, the river was located in an industrial city , because we can see a highway. The river was also polluted because we can see rubbish at the river bank. People at the area may not be aware of the pollution because there was no action taken by the authorities for example no warning sign present at the area(based on the picture) and the boy was freely diving in the river. We also assume that the boy may be poor and he wanted to take a bath in the river that he thought  was covered with ‘body wash’ bubbles.