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Topic: Why women deserve equal rights
Reason 1: If the world can take one step for women equality it means one step of equality for everyone.

Reason 2: Women have just as much potential as men and having women with different rights is unequality. Women are a crucial part of the world and of humanity.

Reason 3:
Women are just as strong as men, they have been fighting for equality for so long it is considered as a great strength that I think deserves acknowledgement.

A lot of people would argue that women do have equal rights already. Do use specific examples where women are powerless. - Miss Meads

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Topic-cutting down forests is killing our earth.
Reason 1- when you cut trees, you lose more oxygen flow.
Reason 2- The animals that live in the forests are affected.
Reason 3- There would be lifeless soil to grow crops

I like your first two reasons but your third reason might need further consideration - Miss Meads

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Topic: why opt in and opt out systems should change to signing a card if you don't want to agree to the system ( give a body part to someone else who needs it, when you dying).
Reason 1:  There is a shortage of donors
Reason 2: You don't have to go to all the trouble to get a card to give.
Reason 3: You'll be saving peoples lives.

I'm not entirely sure what your topic is. Do you meaning organ donation should be compulsory? - Miss Meads

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Topic: Bad effects when you are in a smartphone addiction

Reason 1: Going on phones all the time causes brain changes especially the cortex
Reason 2: When using phones they usually slump down, this is bad posture
Reason 3: It distracts them from their learning

What do you mean about going on the phone all the time? Do clarify your topic - Miss Meads

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Topic : Why every student should do physical activity in or outside of school
Reason 1 : It will benefit them as they will be more healthy and fit
Reason 2 : They will be able to meet more people and socialise
Reason 3 : They will have outdoor activities they can go out and enjoy

Very broad topic. Focus on sport in schools as there are now strict guidelines about how much time students need to do PE in schools or consider how young people don't get enough exercise out of school because of technology - Miss Meads

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Topic: Should puppy mills be banned?

Reason 1 -  Dogs in puppy mills face horrible, cruel conditions
Reason 2 -
Reason 3 -

Where are your reasons? - Miss Meads

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Topic: everyone with different colored skin should be treated the same as everyone else.
Reason 1: they are the same as any other person but worth different colored skin.
Reason 2: they have the same human rights.
Reason 3: people with different colored skin, should be treated the same because we all have different races and genders.

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Topic: Healthy food should be cheaper than junk food

Reason 1: Cigarettes and junk food are both bad for you, and the price of cigarettes are really expensive, so should junk food.
Reason 2: If junk food is cheap for a long time, all of us will have a bad diet.
Reason 3: If a lot of it is in supermarkets, and it's on special, it will attract a lot of people.

Interesting topic. You could also consider that the government wants to tax sugar. - Miss Meads

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Topic: There should be more natural wildlife conservations areas in Australia
Reason1: native Animals are competing against wild introduced animals for food such as wild cats and cane toads
Reason2: It allows us to study them and appreciate how Awesome they are
Reason3:  a

Very broad when just discussing animals in general. Perhaps focus on a particular species. - Miss Meads

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Topic: Woman's rights
Reason 1: Women are equal to men, and shouldn't be prevented from doing what they want just because it's a "men's" job.
Reason 2: Women are able to do just as good a job as men, therefore they shouldn't be paid less just because of their gender
Reason 3: Women have been here just as long as men have, so we shouldn't be treated as 'weak' and as 'housekeepers' while men have the opportunity to do whatever job they want.

You need to be a bit more focused in your topic. Are you wanting to address gender stereotypes and how they are unfair or are you more concerned about the gender pay gap? - Miss Meads

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Topic: Donald Trump will not be a good president for America
Reason 1: put a ban on immigrants and refugees ( majority Muslim )
Reason 2:  terrible attitude towards different nations
Reason 3: discrimination towards woman.
Reason 4: No experience in politics

Your topic is more of a question than an argument so do state your topic clearly. - Miss Meads

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Topic: Donald Trump will start WWIII
Reason 1: He wants to build a wall that Mexico will not pay for.
Reason 2: Him winning the election caused a lot of trouble and disturbance towards other people.
Reason 3: Donald Trump is not approved of by too many people.

Your reasons need to be more convincing otherwise you won't be able to be persuasive - Miss Meads

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Topic: Why fracking should be be illegal in all countries.
Reason 1: Fracking wastes an incredible amount of water.
Reason 2: Fracking retrieves  materials that we need to discontinue the use of.
Reason 3: Fracking contaminates millions of gallons of water that people could drink

Your topic reads as a question rather than an argument. Fracking should be banned is more of an argument. Your reason 3 is very broad; do be more specific - Miss Meads

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My topic is why nuclear products and tests should be banned.

1.nuclear tests have huge impacts on the environment.
2.it will mutulate and pollute our world
3.it is uncontrollable.

What do you mean that it is uncontrollable? Be sure to make your reasons clear - Miss Meads

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Topic: How tutoring increases academic levels
Reason 1: it's another way to learning a subject
Reason 2: it helps with school work
Reason 3: it also increases your creativity

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Topic: Should Vietnamese refugees be allowed in Australia
Reason 1: Australia is full of space, resources and water.
Reason 2: There journey will be harsh riding in a small boat.
Reason 3: The Australian government technically doesn't own the land.

Why only Vietnamese refugees? Why not all refugees? Need to consider why refugees what to come to Australia - Miss Meads

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Topic: Why women deserve equal rights
Reason 1: If the world can take one step for women equality it means one step of equality for everyone.

Reason 2: Women have just as much potential as men and having women with different rights is unequality. Women are a crucial part of the world and of humanity.

Reason 3: Why should there be a difference? Women are the same species as men (as humans). A man and a woman are equal and it is appalling to classify women as different.

Need to consider specify what makes when powerless as technically women do have equal rights - Miss Meads

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Topic: Physical education
Reason 1: You get healthy bones and muscles
Reason 2: It reduces risk of diseases and cancer
Reason  Bullies can pick on weaker people

You don't have a clear topic here - Miss Meads

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Topic: Equal rights for women
Reason 1: Women are stronger, since we bear children and carry them for nine months.
Reason 2: We can do anything men can since we are both the same species, just different types, like there's white tigers and orange tigers.
Reason 3: Women need to be treated differently and inspired, so they can actually show men that they are strong and can do what they do.

Why don't women have equal rights? Need to consider a particular instance in society where women are made to feel powerless - Miss Meads

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Gay marriage should be legal

Reason 1: People can't control who they love
Reason2: It is not a choice to be gay you are just born gay
Reason3: It is a human right, sexuality should not affect their legal rights and responsibilities

Reason 1 and 2 are actually quite similar when you start arguing them - Miss Meads

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Topic: Refugee children should have more support from government for education
1: As from research, most kids that have disadvantages in school are kids from refugee
2: The reason that people are actually fleeing their country to Australia

Is that either they have into freedom in their country or that it's just not livable. We should help these people with open arms
3:  Refugees are a huge problem for the entire world BUT maybe we all should actually interview them before actually allowing them into the country, to see if they are actually here for good reasons

Shouldn't refugees be accepted as part of the Australia first then they need to be treated equally? - Miss Meads

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Downloading hacking should be under surveillance and extremely illegal at all for these reasons
1. Hackers can get into extremely private information and data
2. If people don't try to block hacking it becomes extremely easy for hackers to hack into anything
3. Hacking is already illegal but people aren't trying to track them down and this needs to stop
Thank you

You need to clarify the hacking of what? Or are you more concerned with the downloading of films and TV shows? - Miss Meads

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Topic: compulsory for students in highschool should study food and nutrition!
1- prepares you for the future
2- prevents sickness/ obesity
3- mental health

Expand on your reasons as they are very brief. Interesting topic! Maybe you can ask your Home Ec teacher for some quotes! - Miss Meads

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The Australian overall
Schooling system should change. ( I will explain how Ithink it should change)
1.More and More kids are not getting the everyday benefit from our modern Schooling system
2.The system we use today has been used for over 150 years
3.Finland Have made a change in their schooling system and ar leading the world in children education

Why should it change? Put this in your topic such as the Australian schooling system needs to be overhauled as it is too restrictive. - Miss Meads

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Topic: Recycling
Reason 1: Pollution
Reason 2: Landfill
Reason 3: Deforestation

Expand on your reasons. Recycling is an issue so what are you arguing about recycling? It needs to be compulsory? - Miss Meads

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Topic: Donald Trump wont be a good president
Reason 1:  He wants to build a wall
Reason 2: He is discriminative against women
Reason 3: He doesn't know politics

Need to expand on reason 1. Consider how Trump is divisive. - Miss Meads

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Topic: Physical activity is beneficial
Reason 1: Socialise - be socially active and connect with others
Reason 2: Physical health - confident, resilient and fewer medical bills
Reason 3: Mental health - endorphins, reduce depression

Expand on your topic Physical activity is beneficial to who? Are you focusing on young people or adults? - Miss Meads

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