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The use of the speed dating/peer review session was very interesting. It was great to get feedback from my peers so I would know what I need to work on.

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The Pyramid Organizer was helpful as it provided a visual representation or guide that helped to focus my essay from a general to a narrow view. It was effective especially for a visual learner like myself

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The speed Dating activity was helpful as I was able to attain a number of different perspectives of my work which was effective in highlighting my mistakes to me.

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The Peer Review/ Speed Dating actually was intimate and intimidating as a date but I enjoyed it receiving helpful pointers and seeing my work in the eyes of others

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The speed dating exercise was so enjoyable. It was really good to view my friends' work, not only to know that I'm not the only one struggling with aspects of essay writing, but also to see where others are strong and I can get help from them.

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The idea of speed dating was interesting I liked that different persons commented on my introduction, however, the process was a bit rushed so most persons did not get to truly make proper comments. I think I might have enjoyed this method more if we got a little bit more time

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I enjoyed the speed dating activity because I was able to read other persons' ideas on attempting the same prompt. This activity proved educational because I was able to see many common errors students make when writing introductions to their essays. My knowledge of these classic student mistakes helps me to critique my own introductions and avoid repeating these errors in both the introductions and other parts of my essays.

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blessedmarie-reflection on Peer Review (Speed Dating

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blessedmarie-reflection on Peer Review (Speed Dating

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This activity was very enjoyable even though we were dealing with a serious topic. I was able to see and take note of some of the errors that we as essay writers make. I learnt, through critiquing others work and the critics of my work, what i should do and what i shouldn't do when writing my introduction.

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Through visual representation the knowledge taught was reinforced orally. The pyramid organizer and padle did this well but the planning map helped most.

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The planning map helped me to properly organize the process of my ideas, it also was able to enhance the organization of my essay writing skills.

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The planning map really helped me to organize my thoughts and visually put them on paper. I like to write my thoughts,  so that I can remember them.

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The pyramid organizer and mapping plan showed me how to coordinate my essays.

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Padlet was great a tool in allowing my work to be easily viewed by my peers and my teacher so that it was able to be critiqued and analysed in to improve my techniques in writing.

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The use of the planning map was very helpful as I now feel more confident in writing my essays as well as I have a clear understanding of how to tackle my essays using a step my step approach.

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The planning map helped me to understand how planning an essay properly before writing because knowing what I want to write and creating my responses to prompts before attempting an essay enables me to have an essay of a higher quality

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The planning map has helped because it created a visual on how questions should be broken down before attempting. It gave a step by step metheffectively analysing and interpreting a question

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The pyramid organiser gave my thoughts process a visual representation as it conveyed the filter I use in my mind. From Thick and chunky ideas to slim sentences acting as a funnel

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The planning map helped me in understanding because seeing the map helped me to compartmentalize ideas for paragraphs

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The planning map given, helped me understand clearly what is needed before starting an essay. This is so as it clearly separates the points to be discussed in my essay, such as separation between the two texts, and the content for each. This was useful as I never used to plan my essays so precisely.

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The planning map has helped me as a visual aid since the different steps in planning an essay was outlined in different levels so it helped me to always remember to link all points to the main idea

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blessedmarie- Reflection On Pyramid Organizer

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blessedmarie- Reflection On Pyramid Organizer

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The use of the pyramid to show how an introduction is meant to move from a broad to narrow focus was very effective to me. I was able to understand how to structure my introduction wherethe broadest first section is what is generally said and narrow it down to my own opinon being the last and smallest section.