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This is a simple summary.The summary are written in proper order.The point are properly written and explain about the difference between employability and employment.The minus thing are the grammar which are bad and the number of words which are obviously more than 120 words.

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the summary is well written, love to read it. the summary also below than 120 words

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The summary is good as it is written in sequences order.  Aini's summary  met the requirement which is less than 120 words.  Besides, there are linkers joining the points. However, the points of summary have some mistakes and there are many direct lifting.

We cannot be confused with the words of employability and employment because employment can crash but employability may rise as people need to complete harder for available work.
Furthermore, employability is the set of attributes that makes a graduate worth employing.  Therefore,  there is a metric of employability for higher education and to agree to a common definition that would benefit students, academics.
Besides, there are three important elements to consider in defining employability which is knowledge, controversial and skills, whereas this can raise students'self-awareness about employability. Thus, UK have already been leading a programme of embedding employability into the curriculum.

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Nora had written a good summary since, she's been doing her summary in according sequence. She's also had use  linker in her writting.
Overall, the summary writting was written perfectly.
NORA SUMMARY
The proportion of graduates in employment six months graduation is a measure of employment not employability, the words must not be confused. Employability is set of attributes that makes a graduate worth employing, thus there is a need to create a metric of employability for students torealise it. Therefore, three elements in defining employability which are knowledge, social capital and skill sets is needed. Developing student's awareness can be done by creating courses based on the student's demand not employer's. Moreover, employability awareness among the academics need to be engage by having a simple explanation to describe it. Lastly, student need to know the importance of understanding employability in order for them to be able to present themselves for employment.

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It is a simple summary. Have the gists but not all. The used of linkers is appropriate. Words is too less than 120 words. The writting sequence is in order.

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this is a good summary because has all the main point from the passage.
look simple but compact with the points.

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Syu's summary is a good summary that met the requirement which is less than 120 words and the summary is state in order by referring the main idea in the article and the use of transitional words to ensure the flow of the summary.
But it is lack with some incomplete sentences. Besides, some of the word is not suitable to be use.

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-Overall the summary is quite good but the total words for the summary is more than 120.
-Mostly all the main point or idea had been written in the summary.
-However,you need to eliminate unimportant word and elaboration in the summary

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Your summary is quite nice and simple but lack of title.
hope you can improve your handwriting next time :)

Employability is more important than employment . Employability is a set of attribute that benefit the student, academic and employers. There are three important element to defining employability such as knowledge, social capital and skill. Knowledge is provided by higher education. Social relation may help an employee more attractive. Skill is divided into hard and soft skill, distinctive skill set can aid employability. Raising student self-awareness about employability is compulsory by making it more transparent in course objective. it will become a welcome feautured of any course whatever the student initial reason to study it. It also help academics to engage with employability. Having a simple and common language to describe will help the embed employability into the programme.

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You had written a good summary. You also had done good in rephrasing the main idea and use transitional word wisely.  I suggest you to improve your handwriting and need to apply variety type of sentence to make the summary more interesting.
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This summary is quite good but there is no conclusion in the summary and its too lengthy.

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This is a good summary because the points of summary are written in sequence as in the original text. The points are linked with each other and needs some improvements. This summary should have a title. There is some grammar errors in some parts of this summary. Overall, the summary is good.

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-Summary should consist one paragraph only...no need to do introduction and conclusion
-Do not elaborate more about 3 element
-This summary over than 120 words
-Nice linker between sentence.
-All the ideas have in his summary (Good Job Bro)

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The summary is good because there are linkers that joined the important points and it is written in order; following it sequences. Besides, Nora's summary also follow the instruction as the written summary is less than 120 words. In addition, the summary consists of paraphrasing sentences.

The summary is lack of title and there is an incomplete sentence.

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Well, it's a good masterpiece ; simple, solid and nerve-breaking.
A self-established, ground-breaking title.
Perfect entries of linking words, which I've never encountered before.
However, I think you should at least try to conclude it, if I may say.
Keep up the amazing, mind-blowing job Luffy !

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Your summary not that good because you didn't write in your own word

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This is a good summary with  clear points,  and add-on transitional words made good flow of his writing.
If stated with counted words then it will be great.

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-This is a good summary because it is simple and easy to read. Points were clearly stated and linked nicely.
-The conclusion is not in the summary

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this summary are lack of tittle but it is quite nice because it have linkers that joined the important points and the ideas arranged properly.

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This is a good summary because it completely follow the summary writing rule which is not more than 120 words. next, the main points are written in order. The lack about this summary is Nazrul didnt use variety of sentences and synonyms from the text to make the summary more interesting.

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this is a good summary because she points the central ideas wisely and she arranged it in sequence as the original. But, her summary doesn't have conclusion.

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This summary is good because she write it in good order and within 120 words.
Then she also did the summary with main idea and supporting information for it.
But she forgot to write the title  for the summary.
Its simple and easy to understand.

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This is a good summary because it written in a good order. So that, readers are easy to understand the point that are trying to delivered. He also use linker so that this summary looks neat. He also use variety types of sentences such as passive and active sentences. What best is , Syukri was choosing to use simple words or phrases so that it is easy for the readers to understand. Last but not least, he summarized all main and important point that was listed in the text. Just one thing that he need to changed is, he need to make it more simple because his summary was written in more than hundred and twenty words. One more thing is he need to set aside those things that are not really important from the text

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There are linking words.
Did not just simply copy the text, added his own words.
There is a response in the conclusion.
The points are in order as the original passage
Exceed the words limit which is 120 words.
Lack of bombastic words.
Overall, it is quite a good summary.

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Your summary wasn't complete as lack of the title.
You mainly wrote the main ideas for each paragraphs and lack of some elaborations.
I believe you can do better.

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Aiman summary is good because he using paraphrasing to simplify the article. The points are stated in order form, so is easy to trace where the points located.

Employability is the qualities that makes graduate worth employing as the syllabus complement with the labour market requirements. One of the requirements is an increasing proportions of students expect to get from higher education which ensure that their loans never repaid. Next, the employability is based on knowledge, social capital and skills. Besides, students self-awareness about employability helps to develop it. Therefore, being more clear, simple and deliberate about employability will help. Futhermore, by putting students at the heart of the system creates a supply of courses. Thus, become alert about an employability aids to high academic achievements. Finally, the sector needs to take many actions to overcome student's tendency to see degree as a proxy for employability.

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this is a good summary because why?
the part that this summary lack on are what?
write the comment in a complete sentences