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Needs more information on Utopian societies

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map was spread to far and a lot of important events were missing.

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Can't really read whats in green.

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Your mind map had good information but some of it was really hard to read.

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You have good information but the way you set it up is hard to read.

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The green is barely readable needs a little more info but its still pretty good.

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It's hard to follow because of the color, and cause it's scattered

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It's hard to follow because of the color, and cause it's scattered

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organize it better and a little more information

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The light green makes the words a lot harder to read. One of your boxes is "Americans create perfect groups" which when I read it, it doesn't give me the idea of it being a town trying to be a Utopia but something on a much smaller scale. Shakers shouldn't be directly linked to your "Perfect groups" either since they were a different type of community but came from the same root, which is religious beliefs. Same root but one not coming directly from another.

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The light green makes the words a lot harder to read. One of your boxes is "Americans create perfect groups" which when I read it, it doesn't give me the idea of it being a town trying to be a Utopia but something on a much smaller scale. Shakers shouldn't be directly linked to your "Perfect groups" either since they were a different type of community but came from the same root, which is religious beliefs. Same root but one not coming directly from another.

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This one is kinda hard to read because of the green, other than that it is pretty good.

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Your mindmap is great but maybe you could have added a bit more about the groups the Americans created

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Your mindmap is great but maybe you could have added a bit more about the groups the Americans created

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the color of the boxes make it hard to read the text

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Good detail but it could be a little closer together.

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Good detail but it could be a little closer together.

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It's hard to understand because its kind of all over the place. <3

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Its was good but I couldn't read the light green one

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As everyone is pointing out it is hard to read, but besides that you explained everything very well and structured it nicely.

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a little hard to read but great information and i like how you described transcendentalism!!!  

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a little hard to read but great information and i like how you described transcendentalism!!!  

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Great sentences, but hard to read because of the colors

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Not close together and it's hard to read because of the colors

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I really like your ideas and the explanations, but I also think you should have organized your map more.

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You should have chose a different color than the neon green.

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You should have chose a different color than the neon green.

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Learn to organize better.

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This is a great mindmap! Good sentence structure. A bit hard to read though

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This is a great mindmap! Good sentence structure. A bit hard to read though