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Hi Emilio, I think that you did a great job, you used the grammar correcly and your presentation had a considerable lenght, however I believe you need to improve your fluency and some pronunciations of words. Nice festival btw :).
Regards, Oscar

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https://youtu.be/vvAlSwJ-OjA

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Hi Emilio. I think you did a great job, you used the grammar. Maybe you can practice the use of the contraction with perfect modals in order to sound more natural.

Alejandro.

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https://youtu.be/JdWTcwWfLaQ

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Hi Emilio,
You did a very nice job showing a positive attitude and reporting relevant information.  Additionally, you had prepared very nice ideas using indirect speech paying attention to verb changes. congrats.

However, you need to work on some aspects:
1. you read a lot during your presentation and this affected your performance.
2. You need to keep working on your pronunciation because of mistakes with words such as "vehicle, workED, among other words."
Action plan: you need to send me a different voice recording everyday in which you read a text. Pick a different text everyday and read it recording your voice and send it to me, pay attention to final sounds.

Never start a speech saying "good night" this is a good-bye expression.

Task: GOOD
Platform: Very good (careful with low percentages).

Regards,
Anderson

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Hi Emilio. It is your feedback.

Alejandro.

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Hi Emilio,

I liked the way you started by introducing the origin of the word “chiropractive,” also I liked a lot that you used past perfect in a couple of moments and presented important information about your topic.  However, you need to work much more on some aspects:

1.       Pronunciation: Established, Diagnostic (spanglish), headache, etc.

2.       Grammar: you need to show me better results using the grammar from the units and be careful with SHOULD TO.

3.       Connectors: you need to use better connectors to make clear transitions in your presrntations.  For example, to conlcude the presentation you needed to use an expression like “to conclude, finally, etc.”

I need better results on these aspects next time.

Regards,

Anderson

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Some images to remember this concept:

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Dear Emilio firstly, You showed good preparation and It had been better if you had persuaded the audience with some visual aids. Your timing was perfect but you forgot the conclusion
I think you must be to improve your pronunciation, above all the pronunciation of the verbs in past tense.
In the speech moments , You need to forget the use of some expressions that in Spanish, it is common (Eh), You can change It, for example with well or some similar expression.

See you in class. best regards
Diego C.

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Hi Emilio. Nice work. You use many taq questions, simple past and past perfect. This is very important for our task. Good job.

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Hi Emilio. Nice work. You use many taq questions, simple past and past perfect. This is very important for our task. Good job.

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You have to improve your pronunciation. i think you can do it, don't you?

Have a nice weekend.
Juan Gabriel

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This is my first Podcast (Task 1)

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Listen to it and let me know...
https://vocaroo.com/i/s1c6vpC4cEfp

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Comentaries by William Rodriguez

Hi Emilio, good job, you had used past perfect and tag questions, It was the main objective. I am sure you can improve your fluency.

Regards,