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The story had a clear format with a problem and climax and all.

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Very creative and organized. This was also thoughtful and well planned out.

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Your story is very well throughout and strategic. Great job.

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Very complex story line. Very brilliant story with action, suspense, romance the whole shabang.

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Jade wrote a snazzy story with a format that made the plot clear. However, syntax could be improved.

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Her synopsis of the story is very well thought out and has a lot of interesting plot twist that seem entertaining.

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The format of her story was really good
I liked her story and It’s very creative and well thought out

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Perfectly formatted

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Cute cheesy story, had a format that while outlandish was extremely easy to follow and had hilarious plot twists, which didn’t stray from the main point. Which is an example of good formatting in a story.

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Format:
- Story is well thought out
- Paragraphs are neat and organized
- Story is fun and cteative as well

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The story is well developed and planned out. She knows her story very well and can present it well.

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She presents the project In a clear and confident way and really summarized her project effectively

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Story was really creative lots of drama. Story plot was clear and entertaining.

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Her creativity within her short story is very good she added drama which is good to keep the audience engaged.

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Very creative
Sounds like a very good and entertaining story

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It was nice and clearly done great. Informative and interesting

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Good content, very interesting and imaginative. Seems well organized and planned

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- Great format!! c:
- I don't see any problems here ><
- AWESOME STORY

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The format is well presented appropriate for the assignment.

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She sounds like she’s very confident in her story and she really knows the information. It seems very thought out.very descriptive with her synopsis . I like the story it was very dramatic. And creative

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-so creative
-grabs the audiences attention to read the short story
-I love this!

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Her synopsis was very interesting, I would actually read her story. She could improve on her eye contact a little bit. In all, how she explains her story is spot on.

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I like how creative she was with her story. I like how realistic the drama is in the story. I love the plot twist in the story. I like how she rarely ever needed to look at her story, she new what she was going to say before presentations even started.