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Praise: I love how detailed you did this project and you characterized him well.
Polish: Can’t think of anything

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Praise- very thoughtful
Polish- great presentation

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-I really enjoyed how now you are cautious of the lives of others
-this was cute
-I think this creative project could use different colors and designs to make it colorful:)

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Praise- good explanation of your images

Polish- maybe put your work on a google slides and add a background

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Praise: The times are detailed, so is the overall project
Polish: Only thing I can think of is to use "like" less

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Praise// The whole presentation is organized and neat. It’s easy to tell what’s going on and what your boyfriend was doing throughout the day.
Polish// Maybe space the pictures our more? Or bold certain words to specify and make it even easier to see what he was doing.

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Praise: very well organized
Polish: could have been a little more detail

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Praise: she did well to explain every photo

Polish: I would say that she Make it more colorful

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Polish

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I really like  the way you formatted your project

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Praise:  explain each photo clearly

Polish:  put in more color

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Praise: speaks comfortably
Polish: maybe speaks too comfortably should try to be a little bit more formal

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Praise:all of the pictures are really well shot
Polish you could work on not saying and then too much

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Praise: I like the details of his day even though he didn't do much haha!
Polish: On the picture of his carrying the laundry, maybe edit the picture to make it brighter!

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I like the format of your presentation. It’s all in order and it makes sense. When you present just make sure you are speaking professionally.

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Praise: I appreciate her explaining each picture thouroughly and telling us her opinion on her boyfriends mannerisms.

Polish: She kind of gets embarrassed or shy at times, she needs to show more confidence in her work and stop doubting herself considering she did such an amazing project.

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Praise: I liked how you used your boyfriend as an example since you basically know this dude
Polish: girl you gotta get your mans in place jkjk but I think the presentation is good, but it does need more colors in it if possible!,