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I used 3rd person. Next time I would like to use more adjectives

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I used 3rd person and present tense next time I should use more adverbs

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I struggled slightly with this task,butin  the end I really enjoyed the task. I accidentally wrote in past tense and present tense. Other than that I kept to my success criteria🎅🏽😎🐾🐾☃️

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I think I have timed my writing so it fits in with the video.
I think i have used third person present tense
I think I need to use more adventurous vocabulary

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I have used adventurous and imaginative volcabulary. I have used third person and present tense and I have made it factual and have used my notes to help me write it. Next time I need to use a different range of sentence starters

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I managed to complete this task with confidence and independence without support of the teachers. I completed my success criteria and I used my first person and present tense to describe the feelings of the polar bear in this video. I included my technical vocabulary and adventurous vocabulary and I referred to my previous knowledge in the lessons.

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I used third person present tense
I used Interesting vocabulary to describe the Polar Bear
Next time I think I should use a variety of sentence starters

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I have used 3rd person, present tense.
I have started to use adventurous descriptions.

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I used adventures vocabulary and present tence next time I need to use more adverbs

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I would like to do a task like this again, I really enjoyed it. When I record I would like to speak slowly so it sounds like David Attenboure

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I really enjoyed this task because I think I followed my success criteria and I used adventurous vocabulary. I also think I captured the spirit of the frightened and worried polar bear quite well. 🐾

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I have used adventures vocabulary.
I have engaged the audience.
I did not use present tense.
I did use present tense

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I used adverbs and adjectives to describe my animals and I have checked over my work and have chosen my words that I use carefully . I think i could slow down how I speak when I do my voice over.

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I engaged my adiance
I enjoyed this task I found it hard to think of what to say but a wrote at a resanoble speed and got round it evn

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I enjoyed this task and I felt that my choice of words were good. I also followed my success criteria by keeping my work believeable. Next time, I would like to be a lot quicker in my work.