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updation!! it will continue also please no dis -
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BY FARRAH
MARRY STOP RIGHT NOW! said her mother with fear ok ok said marry.she rent into her room and sat down,MARRY WILL B! THE TROUBLE MAKER! said her sister lie-la.YOU HAVE ONCE AGAIN RUNIED MY PAINTING! said lie-la with madness grace.marry was always the trouble maker in the family.even her teacher can't hold it! marry is always the one who make trouble! SAY SORRY TO YOU SISTER said dad with anger "alright fine sorry lie-la will b" said marry SAY IT PROPER IF YOU SAY THE FULL NAME YOU DO NOT MEAN IT MARRY!!,said dad she looked at lie-la sorry lie-la said marry "oh and you said my last name so you don't care" said marry OH MY GOD JUST STOP MARRY YOU ARE MAKING ME MAD I SAY IT CAUSE YOUR IN TROUBLE MARRY! YOUR ALWAYS TROUBLE! said her mother and walked away.ugh marry signed and went to draw.she liked drawing-OH AND MARRY DO NOT PLAYING ON GAMES AND NO WATCHING ANYTHING FOR YOUR PURPOSE! said father.she signed again "ok!" said marry licking her lower lip she was drawing a burger a yummy one too.but it was time for bed anyways GO TO SLEEP! her dad shouted he was really angry with her he has always had enough of her lazyness and trouble.she jumped into bed and rolled her eyes she closed her eyes as tight as a nampkin and closed them,but she could' sleep all her parents presure and it was like they were wrapping her in paper and squishing her thats how her presure was like every single time it grows and grows her tightness grows bigger in size she just wants to be free in her own mind! but she kept thinking of all that yelling taking things away from her and they think that if you do it again we take it away but in reality your parents are presureing you,the more they take away stuff the more you make trouble! they always blame it on you when there doing it on you.she kept think those thoughts over and over again like a roller couster it kept swirling in her mind and................................BOOM there it was the time were she broke her sleeping peace she went crazy she could not sleep at all! but it was time the net morning she was cranky she felt sick inside wake up little marry said her mom she woke up and got up not saying a word and got up carefully and slowwly walking like a zombie.oh dear you did not sleep hunny bun! said her mother.NOW YOU ARE CRANKY UGH MARRY JUST WHAT IS STOPPING YOU? said her mom marry thought it is hard to say it when they scare you and ran off.she knew her mom and dad had got ready for her toothpaste and toothbrush she brushed as fast as a racer and jept on brushin and brushin!!!! she was then on done and put her most prettyest outfit just like her friend nina,nina is really nice and is a lovely girl.she was then ready to go lie-la!! im ready! lie-la and marry go to school together there school is just two blox away from them.they went outside by my darlings! have fun in school and no trouble marry! be safe! said there dad yes yes! said lie-la and marry ok now so no trouble right? said lie-la "uh-huh!" said marry alright... said lie-la they walked to school and...THERE they wear at school alright by marry have fun! said lie-la,ok said marry she skipped to school and was right on time! she wore black shoes with pretty red dots.hi nina! said marry oh....uhm hi marry.. said nina i need to tell you something said nina what is it? said marry oh uhm....i made some new friends...and if i want to make them friends i haft to regect you sorry bff your not a friend anymore said nina.wha-what? sair marry and cried with tears dripping sorry marry said nina she was now on the girly sassy side she used to be nice and lovely...in her thoughts.she ran off we were friends since kindergarden..she thought she could not handle the pain she was given.she cried even longer sobbing the teacher looked she has never seen her cry well at least she hasn't seen her cry like this she went to marry she stopped the class uhm marry what is it? said ms.linda nina is not my friend anymore....she is on there side the sassy side.said marry oh dear.. said ms.linda I CANNOT TAKE THE PRSURE EVERYONE IS BOOING ON ME EVERYONE MY PARENTS TOO EVERYTHING THEY SAY AND THE YELLS THE CHILLS THE ONES THAT REGECT YOU JUST LIKE A SNAP said marry AND THEY TAKE THINGS AWAY FROM YOU IT JUST GIVES MORE ANGER IT IS SO TIGHT ITS LIKE THATS THE DARKEST SECRET OF MY SIDE said marry oh my dear well all i can say is sorry marry you'll be free next time said ms.linda marry thought of everything she had done she has done so much bad stuff she then realized she needed to change right now! she said ok ms.lida i need to change oh marry please do i bet your parents are causing so much harm but it is what couts to you! said ms.linda they then marched to the classroom but AHHHHHHHH said the teacher

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by farrah felipe
it was a sunny morning.but there was a girl named serena she is a clumsy girl but she is funny.but one day her dad got something for her "what are those papa?" said serena. theese are your own cherry blossom seeds,you can plant them in our garden! said dad.serena smiled with joy and was surprise,"rlly" said serena she stached them right away and started wearing her fancy garden hat and got everything she needed.she started using the shovel and diged to plant the seeds.she saw its bringtnest of shine cherry blossoms.she put the seeds she smiled and put all the dirt on top of it.she then put her soil (water) and layed it there she was so happy.but then her father said uhm..sweetie I know this is hard but it take to 10 or 20 years to get its full height..."then can i wait to meudim?" said serena.sure said dad,thats takes about 10 or 15 days sweetheart! said dad.she left the garden and took off her hat i will clean your stuff don't worry said serena said her dad

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Playdate MysteryPart 1It was the summer between first and second grade. I was bored at home, watching the same old TV shows. Then one day my friend Tara called. Her mom asked my mom if we could have a playdate in the park near our neighborhood. Tara's family lived on one side of the park, and my family lived on the other."Sure," my mom said into the phone, "See you at the park in ten minutes."  I was excited--it was the first time I saw any of my school  friends since  school ended four weeks ago. I grabbed some toys--soccer ball, Nerf guns, flying discs--and packed them into a big backpack. Mom made snacks, little bacon sandwiches that smelled great. We packed them, too.   When we got there I saw Tara and her mom,  waiting near the slide. I waved. Tara saw me. She had a big smile on her face when she saw me, and waved excitedly.   It was a busy day in the park. Lots of kids were playing--swinging, sliding, chasing and tagging, monkeying on the bars. Dogs ran around, chasing each other. One crazy little dog grabbed someone's blanket and dragged it all over the park. Tara and I laughed.   We found a good spot to drop our bags, beneath a tree near the bushes. "Look out!" yelled Tara's mom, as the crazy little dog streaked across our blanket, leaving dirty paw prints.  Finally, it was time to play!favorite32 comments

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Playdate MysteryPart 1It was the summer between first and second grade. I was bored at home, watching the same old TV shows. Then one day my friend Tara called. Her mom asked my mom if we could have a playdate in the park near our neighborhood. Tara's family lived on one side of the park, and my family lived on the other."Sure," my mom said into the phone, "See you at the park in ten minutes."  I was excited--it was the first time I saw any of my school  friends since  school ended four weeks ago. I grabbed some toys--soccer ball, Nerf guns, flying discs--and packed them into a big backpack. Mom made snacks, little bacon sandwiches that smelled great. We packed them, too.   When we got there I saw Tara and her mom,  waiting near the slide. I waved. Tara saw me. She had a big smile on her face when she saw me, and waved excitedly.   It was a busy day in the park. Lots of kids were playing--swinging, sliding, chasing and tagging, monkeying on the bars. Dogs ran around, chasing each other. One crazy little dog grabbed someone's blanket and dragged it all over the park. Tara and I laughed.   We found a good spot to drop our bags, beneath a tree near the bushes. "Look out!" yelled Tara's mom, as the crazy little dog streaked across our blanket, leaving dirty paw prints.  Finally, it was time to play!favorite32 comments

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Once upon a time there was a girl   named Red. Some people called her Red Hood because she wears a red hood . She was so nice and she liked nature.
She liked  it so much that she went to the forest near by her home every day. She played with the birds and played with deer and bunnies. She had a pet wolf, but this wolf was not harmful this wolf was nice. The wolf ate fish not meat so that's why he was not harmful.

1. The forest animals liked to play with the wolf to. One day Red's mother asked Red to go to grandpa and grandma's house to and give cookies to them. Red loved grandpa and grandma so she went inside the forest. She noticed that there were less trees. She was wondering why and she thought maybe last time there was a big rain so the trees were almost about to fall down, so that is why some of the trees are cut. But she still wondered because there were more trees cut out then she thought, so she was little bit curious, but she decided to not worry about that for now.

When she was in front of grandma and grandpa's home she knocked on the door three times,
"knock knock knock" and then grandma opened the door then Red said "Hi grandma I brought cookies for you and grandpa!"
And grandma said, "Hi dear thank you very much for those lovely cookies."
"Oh grandma where is grandpa?" asked Red.
"Umm I think he is near by the forest where you came."
" Thank you grandma ."
Red wondered, "Why is grandpa  near by the forest?"  She went to go find grandpa. Suddenly she heard  people talking.  It was grandpa and  people in town. She was wondering why is grandpa and people in town are talking she noticed that grandpa and other people where holding a tree axe Red wonder "what is the tree axe for ?" then she heard them talking  grandpa and other people was saying that they are going to destroy the trees and the forest suddenly Red gasp! she felt so angry and sad at same time she felt to strong that she ran back home she went inside of her room the wolf was looking so worry about Red Red kept saying i am ok i am ok but the wolf was looking still worry then suddenly she heard a voice saying are you ok she slowly looked at wolf and then Red  gasp then Red said "did you just talk?" then wolf gasp to and said "did i just understand girl talking " they was stead for a while and they couldn't talk and then Red ask "did you talk" and then the wolf asked "did you talk?" and they yelled "aaaa" they say it together Red said with loud  voice and the wolf did to
and then Red said "i can't believe you talk" Red said with a happy voice and then wolf said "'i can't believe you talk !" the wolf name was Salina and then Red tell what is going to happen in the forest to Salina Salina said that "we need a help" lit ask if other animals can help the wolf and Red went  inside of the forest the wolf said "owww" and then all the animals came then wolf start to explained what is going to happen all the animals say that they are going to help and they wonder how can we stop with out fighting Red say" they ware holding axe so we can take the axe away " "that a good idea" the bunny say "but how can we take out the axe away?" Red said "then we can't take the axe away" the birds say the wolf said "Red grandma can help" "oh yea lit go to grandma and grandpas home tomro" and then the next day when  Red wake up in the morning she is going with the bare because she can't hold all axe
when she was in the town she take all of the axe with bare and bring it back home the wolf tell the bird to take a look at the people in the town red have to bring grandma in the forest because red have to tell grandma what is going to happen and about the animals when red bring grandma she tell every things that they know then she tells every animal to come then grandma said

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One time I went to ice skating me and my mom we went to ice skating so we bought some snacks
we got boba milk tea and chips so we went in to ice skating I was so good at it I did not fell my mom fell A lot of time's I did not fell and I'm good at it because I go to ice skating when I was 5 to 7 and I am 8 years old.

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I went to the zoo with my Auntie and uncle. I was really excited to go to the we see peacock and giraffe and other Animals. we ate food the food was good then Auntie and uncle took me home on there car I said bye auntie and uncle said bye to I went in side my house I ate lunch I played with my toys to wait for dinner I ate dinner now finally my favorite part of the day take A shower I took a shower now it is time to brush my teeth I brush my teeth now it is time to sleep. it is finally morning today I am going to watch tv And eat ice cream. and I made Ice cream milk.

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It was my 7th birthday. I was excited in the morning because every year of my birthday I get a toy and cake.  My mom gave me a present, it was a dress. I was excited because I wanted to wear the dress to parties.
My Auntie, uncle and other people came. They put the candles on top of the cake, and they sang Happy Birthday.  Everyone was happy.  We ate a big slice of the cake because we can't let it go to waste. Everyone said, bye. I said bye too. I think they might come to my 9th Birthday.

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by Isaac
one day I was at home I told my mom can I buy this toy she said okay I said yay! I was so happy then the next day its not here then the third day its here I open it I felt so happy! when I got it then I play with it it came with two cars so the next day I go to my cousin house I said do u want one he said sure then we play my cousin said we can make a road for it so we can race it I said okay but I said how are we gonna make a road we don't have wood or other stuff for a road he said hmmm? I said maybe we can use car-bored boxes he said that's a good idea then we make the road with car-bored then we test it to see it works my cousin said it works now we can play! I said yay! we play and play until its night time then when its night time I said bye bye to my cousin he said bye bye Isaac then me and my family went home then I chat to my cousin I said I'm going to sleep he said okay me too and I said good night he said okay THE END.

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one day, we were going ice skating so we went there. So I
I saw my brother ice  And we buy skates. Then we head in the ring. So then I fall on my hands it hurt then we head home

THE END
by Theodora

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By Farrah Felipe
"het Farrah there is a new game that is fun" said my uncle.REALLY?!? I say with a smile there is said my uncle,"it is called gunshin impact1 it is really fun and it is for 9 year olds or older" said my uncle I went to the kitchcan and grabbed my phone out of the charger."look it up now! it is fun" my uncle said.I said nothing and went to the app store.I looked up:gunshin impact.I saw a game and it was called gunshin impact I went straght to it and i saw the botton "get: i then pressed it and said to my uncle hey I got the game! i had a feeling that was coming went i got it.After it was done downloading i went straght to play it.My uncle told me that you can defeat monsters and get pre-mo-gems.I said wow! there is a stary line too! i then pressed start i picked the chartar and then did some missons.I got a little bit of pre-mo-gems. My uncle told me that if you get a lot of pre-mo-gems then you might make a wish and you might have a chartar or a item.I was happy he told me that because that was a good thing to know.There are also klee! i new chartar i got she is has a 5 star! said my uncle.The cartar looked SO nice! i wanted her so much he told me she is a 5 star then he needed to do some work.He left the call "good-bye! " I say.Then after that I wanted to play the game! i then whached a little movie and it was pretty good...I then picked my chartar and.(FREE) I had a misson to do...I got some monster on the way..BUT THAT DID NOT STOP ME! I got some powers that is for sure then I use them! and killed those monster (but the monsters were cute.. it was hard...)

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How do authors of realistic fiction show character feelings?

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How do authors of realistic fiction show character feelings?

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I went to the beach and played with  the waves and it was very fun and very pretty and amazing !and I feel excited and I play with some sand to make a  sandcastle it was awesome because I also got ice cream and it was very delicious.

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one day I went to the beach. I saw fish in water  I thought the fish will Bite me. so I went away form the fish. because the fish have a big mouth then the fish followed me so I said Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so I walked back home.

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By Katya
When I get my pet bunny I will make  my other dog friends. I think they're gonna be great friends. Now I will have a friend that will always be with me. I'm gonna take her/him everywhere. I want my bunny to be a girl but I don't know if its gonna be a boy or girl. I LOVE LOVE bunny's bc there so fluffy. But I never touched one before. I think they're really fluffy though. I read a tutorial how to get a bunny to like you before so I'm gonna listen to that tutorial again. I want a white bunny it will be dirty most of the time but I still want a white bunny. They will be dirty because they're white. I like white bunny's they just look cute like the picture on the bottom. I want a tiny bunny so u can put them in ur back pack or ur pocket. They're really tiny. So if u get one u have to be careful because they might just be walking and u don't see em AND U STEP ON THEM!!! that's what will happen if u don't watch ur step. Bunny's eat carrot well I think so. they eat other things to but that's all I know of what they eat. When I look at a bunny ITS JUST SO CUTE!!! SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!! I just love bunny's their like the cutest animal EVER!!! I just love them so much they're just cute that's why. My mom says that they make a lot of mess I think so too but I will clean up after them. Bunny's like to be in grass I think I seen a bunny's in grass before. I only saw a bunny one time. Maybe I saw it more times but I don't know. I saw a bunny at a beach well not at the beach on the grass. Kinda. I don't know bunny's have long ears. I think they use it for hearing the enemy's at least I think so. Bunny's look like a tiny fur ball.

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One day I went to the beach with my dad. I saw fish in the water.  The fish were big and small. They were scary because of their teeth.  They had small but very sharp teeth. I thought the fish will bite me.
I said to my dad that I don't  want to go in the water because there are fish, so I played in the sand.  I built a sandcastle, it was sooooo cool!  It was larger and taller than most  regular sandcastles.
Then I got tired so I went to the hotel to go to sleep. I had to go take a shower first.
I hugged my Turtle, my plush animal, and said, "I saw your your scary little fishy friends."
"Yay, fishies!" said Turtle the Plush. Then I went to sleep.

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One time I was on a field trip at the zoo. I heard a banging sound coming from the goat cage. A goat escaped from its cage and started rampaging around the zoo. eating everything one by one it started eating paper, Donuts, and cupcakes.
I thought he was going to eat the whole zoo and I decided to drag the goat back into its cage after it was really full. Tony said oh no the goat is to heavy he might run me over and the goat lost all of its momentum and got tired

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One day, My dad said were are going to get a cat. I was happy, So then we got there and we ask what is the cat name they said Docter. Then they got stuff and then we went home. They got stuff from savway. Seens we had him for a long time he went crazy and broke the tv. They got a new one.

by Theodora

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by Isaac
one day I was sleeping at night then I hear a sound it was annoying I felt scared I was thinking what could that noice be? I look out the window I see noting I was thinking is it invisible? I keep looking but I just can't see anything I was tired I said I just want to go to sleep then I ignore the sound so I can sleep but its just to low then i solve it its air I know its air because how can something be invisible bushing the window only strong air can do that then I felt happy because now I can go to sleep yay! THE END.

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I walk and walk and walked and finally I'm here to the pizza store with my mom and I buy pepperoni pizza and my mom picked a cheesy pizza that I loved those were 50$
so I give her 50$ me and my mom feel excited to eat the pizza we walked and walked and walked
and me and my mom is finally home we wash our hands before we eat the yummy pizza we ate the pizza.
what is your favorite pizza?

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Part 1
It was the summer between first and second grade. I was bored at home, watching the same old TV shows. Then one day my friend Tara called. Her mom asked my mom if we could have a playdate in the park near our neighborhood. Tara's family lived on one side of the park, and my family lived on the other.
"Sure," my mom said into the phone, "See you at the park in ten minutes."
I was excited--it was the first time I saw any of my school  friends since  school ended four weeks ago. I grabbed some toys--soccer ball, Nerf guns, flying discs--and packed them into a big backpack. Mom made snacks, little bacon sandwiches that smelled great. We packed them, too.
When we got there I saw Tara and her mom,  waiting near the slide. I waved. Tara saw me. She had a big smile on her face when she saw me, and waved excitedly.
It was a busy day in the park. Lots of kids were playing--swinging, sliding, chasing and tagging, monkeying on the bars. Dogs ran around, chasing each other. One crazy little dog grabbed someone's blanket and dragged it all over the park. Tara and I laughed.
We found a good spot to drop our bags, beneath a tree near the bushes.
"Look out!" yelled Tara's mom, as the crazy little dog streaked across our blanket, leaving dirty paw prints.
Finally, it was time to play!

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I do my homework every day with my mom at the kitchen table. there are plants on the kitchen table. -Ronan

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by abigail
Dad was a veteran.
we went to the grave yard to see the people who fought in a war.
it was beutiful.
it was short... but fun.

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I when to the ice cream shop and I picked a flavor and I choose vanilla and strawberry It was 20$ I gave her 20$ and I when back home then I ate the ice cream then I when to wash my hands. I feel happy and I feel good Because I ate the Ice cream then I ate Lunch I ate pizza for Lunch it was delicious I played with toys and I wait and wait for my dinner a have chicken wing for dinner then I took a shower and I bush my teeth then I sleep At 9:00

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I went to Six Flags with my family. I felt really excited. I was hoping to go on a big, scary roller coaster. I only went on the little ones before.
First we went on our favorite roller coaster, the small one.
My cousin went on a big, scary one. I thought, that one looks too scary for me.
Then we saw a new roller coaster. I saw people on it having fun, screaming, "Yay!"
I asked mom if it goes upside down. She said, "You can go, why not?"
When I got on, my cousin said, "This is not scary."
But I kept on screaming.

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by Ella
I went to bed in my bed but woke up in the sea even more unbelievably I saw mermaids! one had curly blonde hair and a golden and blue fish tail another had wavy brown hair with glittery purple high lights and a glowing pink tail they both had glinting turquoise eyes one looked intently on me her blue fish tail swishing swishing from side to side she sent glittery glows flying at me eventually turning me into a mermaid then I had adventures with my new mermaid friends then I woke up and I realized it was a dream and a very pleasant one at that.

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By Kalene Wong.

On Halloween my family went to my cousin's house for Halloween.
We were doing a Halloween hunt. The Halloween hunt was like easter but no eggs and we were wearing costumes. Well most of us were, my brother and one of my cousins were not in costumes. I really think they just like the candy part of Halloween. When we got to there house we put are stuff down then went to play Roblox. After a some time are grandma and grandpa got there. They had a surprise too. Are grandma, grandpa, and are parents  got it ready, then they where ready for us to start. They got cakes and icing for the cake and donuts and more stuff. My grandma said we were making a grave sight. We used crushed Oreos as dirt and

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by abigail
coronavirus has taken our halloween but i had a backup plan.
we had 4 bowls of candy and 4 rooms. Mom was sick but she was good enough to help on corona virus' Halloween. Dad pretended to be a broken robot and a deer who wanted to keep the candy to himself. Mom pretended to be a shy lady and a witch. I knocked on all of the doors in my house and got candy. I went downstairs and my neighbor Dan gave me two bags of candy and a couple more. He had the biggest bowl of candy out of all of us.It was a fun Halloween, I loved it.

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My brain was hurting when I came back home. My brain was screaming.  I was confused, I didn't understand why the baby fish didn't bite me. I was wondering why the big fish don't come, only the baby fish were eating the food on my finger. Then my dad said,  "Koi fish don’t  have teeth." I didn’t believe my dad, that’s why I got so scared.
I was thinking the the small koi have little teeth. And also  I was thinking  if the fish bites me, it will stay stuck on my hand FOREVER, ( ಥ ʖ̯ ಥ) because when I put my finger in the pond the fish was sucking on my finger. It sucked tightly, like it was never going to let go. And I thought it would suck my whole finger in.
But it went away.
I realized that I have to trust my dad when he talks about fish ponds. Because he knows a lot about fish. I feel more brave now. But I hope the big koi does not suck my finger!
THE END

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One time I went to Los Angeles for a week during the week we went to the beach when we were at the beach we saw pier with amusement park and we rode on the roller coaster and my heart beat faster and faster because I was scared.

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By Katya
I'm gonna get my pet bunny when I'm 10. I don't know if its gonna be a girl or boy I want it to be a girl. I really like bunny's. When we get a bunny were gonna. go on a trip to Hawaii. Then I'm gonna make my dog and my new bunny friends. I think they're gonna be best friends. My dog barks at people so I don't know how its gonna go with the new bunny that I'm gonna have. He might start barking. But maybe he will be friends with my bunny.

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By Katya
Willy sleeps in his be d a lot. But he goes on walks every morning. He also goes in the back yard and he sniffs the tree.Theres a swing in my back yard too.Theres a big tree in the middle of my back yard. Also when he goes outside there's birds outside and they chirp at him.Then he will bark at them until they leave. When its night he barks all the time I don't know why though but he does it.
The End

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"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!" I yelled. i was on a roller coaster! but before I can tell you  that story I have to you this first. I was at tell hi and I could not wait to go to GREAT AMERICA!! When I got on the school bus I sat with a new friend Samule. him and I played lots of games on the bus. when I got there I was so excited that I went right out of the bus and I could not wait we ate lunch at the side of the street. After we ate lunch me and my group went on this big ride and now we're back were we started aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! it went so fast that I almost fainted🤢. after I went on that ride my group went to the water park! I went on a HUGE water slide. later I got coke. when it was time to go I was so tired. I went home and told my mom and dad all about the big day.
THE END

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Sometimes i do not know what to write. Nothing fun happens. I found a game that is FUN. I love it. its a game of mystery.

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by Cooper
one time me and Jude went on a hike to the beach. When we were at the beach i got washed up back to the shore and I laughed so hard

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by abigail
Once I went to a big forest with a big mountain. It had beautiful trees and fresh air.I had a big walk walk through the big trees. It was long and later my feet got hurt. At the top of the mountain there was a staircase leeding down. We finaly made it back to the tral. It was a fun walk

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We went to Alaska, and took a big boat. I got my room and we had breakfast.  We saw polar bears and the boat had really good games to play with. We watched Black Panther. We also went canoeing , it  was hard to row the boat because the waves were strong and then my brother and I roe- sham-bow. I won the game. We had a lot of fun and had  a good time. After we went home.

by Theodora

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Once upon a time me and my mom when to Las Vegas and I feel excited because it is so fun and I get to sleep there because it was a hotel!!!!!!

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One day I went to the beach with my mom and dad. When I got there, I saw stuff on the sand. I saw slimy, stinky seaweed. My dad carried me to the water. After a little while, I felt something poking my leg. I felt weird. So I tried to run out, but it was hard to run in the water.
Then I went to play in the sand instead. When I went back in the water, the poking thing was gone. I felt better without that.
Then, when it was time to go, my dad had to carry me back, because I was still afraid of the stuff on the sand.
We finally got to the hotel. I felt cold, because I got out of the water.
I was glad to get out of there.  Then I took a shower, and went to bed.
Now, when I go to the beach, I feel better, but a little bit scared of the things on the sand. And I don't like getting poked then i keep go to the beach and i get less scared  then i  don't need my dad to carry a me so i feel happy and my toy is happy to! so i hug my toy to sleep my toy was soft so i was happy!

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by Katya
One day had to go to my doctor.

I did't want to go but I had to. my doctor checked my eye sight.when she was done she said I needed glasses.i had to wait so I can get the permission slip.so we waited in the waiting room or whatever the room was called.a little while later I got the permission slip.my mom did't know any glasses stores.so my mom called my brother to see if he new any stores my mom said"do u know any stores for glasses"I was waiting thinking"hmmm what glasses do I want to pick"my mom was done taking with my brother "finally"I said my mom said"we are going too JINS"that's the glasses store we are going too.we went too JINS.when we were there the person said"u can't get ur glasses today"so we went the next day.then I got to pick on that day."there's a lot of glasses"my mom said I said"I know"after trying on some of them I found the one.then I went to the salon bc my mom said"u need a haircut"so I agreed.my mom and I went to one but then we switched to another one.so we went to the Other one.i got my hair washed and straitened.then we got food.next we went home and my sister was touching my hair.she said"cool"the end.

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my birthday                              by: Jude

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On my 2020 birthday I woke up to a sunny day with a yellow sun. on 8:30 my sister and I got smoothies
in bed! At 10:10 I got to open my presents the last present was huge I opened it up and I GOT A SKATEBOURD!!!!!!!!!!
after lunch I went to Joe DiMaggio
I skate boarded the whole time.
At 4:10 cooper came to my house!
cooper and I did a nerf gun battle then we played Minecraft at 8:25 cooper left with his dad.

THE END

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By Isaac
One day my mom and I were going to McDonald's.  I said I want a happy meal my mom said okay. But I was worried. I was scared about what toy I will get. Some of the toys were for babies, and some of the toys were new.   I was hoping to get a toy car with a happy face and glasses. I thought it looked so cool. When I opened the bag I was surprised that I got it! At the end I was so happy when I got that.then I went home and play with the toy I was wondering how fast is this this toy I wonder wait I can race it so I know how fast is it. then I race it its so fast but I keep trying and I won the race I was happy when I won.my cousin said wow good job I said thx then he try and he won too. I said wow u did good too.he said thank you. then I said I wish u have one so we can race it and see which one is better. The end.

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by COOPER

One time in 2019 i went to Judes house and we played Minecraft.
When we played Minecraft Jude looked into an Endermens eye.
After we played Minecraft I asked him if he had a nerf gun and he said, "No."
I felt happy that I was playing Minecraft with multiplayer instead of solo Minecraft

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By Farrah
One sunny evening I was walking to my alley way. There were people walking to the street.

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by Simone Miller

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by Simone Miller

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by Simone Miller

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One day I was at home eating lunch with my family. We heard a knock on the door. I asked my dad, "Did you order something?"
My mom and dad said, "No."
He sprayed the box to make sure there was no Coronavirus on it. He wiped it, and brought the box in the house.
My dad opened the box with a cutter.
I was worried. I was thinking who is this from?
Suddenly my dad looked so happy!  He was jumping up and down with his mouth wide open.   We wondered what it is . When we looked we felt surprised but not my mom.  My mom was surprised when she saw expensive Japanese food.
My brother saw a present for him. He opened it. At first he didn't understand what it was. He looked closely at it, and noticed it was a Jojo anime card.
I was trying to read the address on the box. I thought who is this from? I tried to read the words, it was hard. I asked my brother to help me read. He was eating so he was not supposed to stand up. So my brother did not stand. Again and again I tried to read. It said "Alameda."  It was a place. The place where my cousin lives! I felt happy. And I closely looked at the present and i opened it. I was so happy that i did not talk. It was PIN, a marker that has a brush at the top. I wanted them for a long time, but the original ones are only found in Japan. Colored pencils and school markers don't blend colors. But now I can blend them to look cool.
And I started coloring-- but first I have to practice .  I was thinking, what should I give to my cousins the next time we meet.

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by Katya
My mom was driving to Lake Tahoe. my sister said "are we there yet" the whole way there. my mom said "just 1hr" but then she made a wrong turn. it was 2HRS long now. when we were there we could't get inside my mom did't now the password. and it was RAINING. my mom got wet. we were under the tiny roof under the big door. we had to call. then they came and they opened the door. we went inside and we got to stay there for 2 days. after a couple hours later. my brother came and his girlfriend we are friends. after 1 day my brother and his girlfriend named Jordan. they went grocery shopping. we did't really eat anything but we had a lot of FUN!!!. then we got to see our rooms my room was a bunk bed with my sister my mom had 1 to. but she slept with my sister bc my sister was to scared. the next day we played games we had a game room. and there were books to. we watched to on my iPad. also I got to sleep on the top bunk. the next day we got backed up bc we were gonna leave I was so cold that I thot I saw SNOW outside. my dog willy was scared to he was with me the whole time. when I woke up he woke up to. also last night my mom took willy my dog on a walk with gramps. when  they look back the was a BEAR "AHHH" my mom screamed. back to the packing part when we were done. my mom said "is there anything else we can do?" my brother looked and he found a boat ride we got to ride out ourselves I was to scared to go in the water. but my sister went in. I went on the bed seat thing it was like a chair but on a boat. then we had to give it back so we went back. then everyone left the boat. then we left Lake Tahoe.
The End

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“Click!” I here something in the kitchen! It sounds like pans cooking! On the stove! I run to the kitchen and I saw my dad cooking some stake for dinner I told him “can I help you cook?” My dad said “sure” thank you! I say he gives me some vegetables and the cutting board he also gave me my kid knife he told me to cut the top ends of the stem so i did.after that I was done! I said “hey dad I am done cutting the vegetables!” “Ok” said my dad he cleans the table and puts some NEW vegetables this time they were tomatoes! He told me to cut then in thin slices and I cut them! “Chomp! Chomp!” The cutting board is making a sound! With my kid knife so then I was done he said now we are done with the food! Now we shall eat the great work! We ate it and it was good in taste! My dad said thank you for helping! I smiled and said you are welcome! We ate the food with joy,
The end

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I went hiking even tho I did not even want to go and I was tired

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I was in bed all day playing bc it is warm and fun

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By Farrah
Oh hi Farrah how are you doing! Good school was awesome! Oh ok!
Dad was ur day good? Yes it is vary good! Mom how was ur day? So good! Hmmmmm you guys are acting strange? They brought a book it had a baby photo on it! I said mom y is there a baby photo on the book? Oh it is just for work.i said but u do not bring baby out! In ur work! I was not trying not spy I was.......curious. I felt like I needed to see that book just to find out...........bc I can feel and see it! I need the book to find! Out my mind said but..that is strange..my mom could never lie! Tho! If she did..wait! It might be a secret..who knows! So I told my mom can I see the book! Please!i need to find out! My mom said again it was for work! I was thinking so hard my mind was blowing left to right! So I told her again and again and again and all she said was it is for work! I did not like that answer! So I said again and now she said is what is ur dream thing! I said...money! They laugh at me! I felt embarrassed..so they told me....my dad said ur mom has a baby! I was shook! My head was out to the sky! I was so happy for me my dad and mom..and the new members.......baby! (I do not know the name that time!) so after weeks my mom said we are having twins!....now my head went to space omg!!! Instead of one I have two! Yay! When I said that my mom said oh they are kicking! I felt my moms tummy and they kicked me! All on my hand! I was so happy! My mind was in space! Then my dad told me that when you are older u will take care of ur sisters ok? I said ok.. but then in my mind it said two babies! Wow and only me! Wow my parents are way to far at the point
The end

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by Katya
my mom said we can go to lego land it took a whole day though. when we got there we went and explored. we didn't get a hotel. the end.

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By Farrah
LEGO Land wow! This is a nice place! My dad and mum walked to the front desk.Oh hello! Ma’am! Welcome to LEGO land! How may I help I help you! We just need ower
apartment! Please! Oh ok! Let me just get a the card! Ok my mom looked happy! Then the lady came toward us and gave us the card! My mom said thank you! The lady said oh u are welcome! Any time! So we went to ower room! Wow!! ! My dad looked so happy! Just seeing it! After we did we went to go on a ride! The ride was so fun! My face was so smiling! We also has some pizza! Yummmy! Pizza that is for sure! We took a ride but this ride made you go vomit 🤢 I did not vomit but I almost haha! I hope u can go to LEGO land it is VARY fun!

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Authors have special ways to start stories

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How do authors start stories?

tell the setting

use dialogue (talking)

Tell what characters are thinking  ( I thought )   (I felt )

and doing

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By Mr. Hood
“I was terrified of scary clowns,” Mr. Hood told the class.

“My son teases me about it.  He pranks me by putting scary clown pictures around the house. He even puts them on my computer, sometimes.”

Suddenly...

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By Farrah
One day it was a sunny day outside!
My dad was doing some work at the table in the kitchen.wall he was doing some work, something went wrong with the computer! He needed some help! He called my mom! She ran to the kitchen and my dad said I need help because the computer is broken! So my mom said ok I will help u!
So my mom did.and when she did it was back! The computer is now! Fixed! My dad said thank you! So much! My mom said you are welcome! Just remember to press the Esc! My dad said ok! Thank you!

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P.1
It was HALLOWEEN!!  My mom told me to put on my costume, because we were going to Spark Social to see some family! I played with Madison. Otis did not really play he was hot, I was too, I took off my costume.
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My sister Weewer was gone for a while. "I am bored" I said "where is Weewer?" "Weewer is  getting ice cream" says mom. I got excited "yummy" I thought "Ice cream" 30 minutes later (it felt like that) Madison was watching I watched too. Weewer was still not here the grown ups were talking.  Then Weewer came when I tried the ice cream it was so yummy! "Mmmm" I said. I closed my eyes, It was heaven it had rainbow sprinkles and it was pink.
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My mom and Charmain got some pictures, me and Madison got some candy and soon it was time to go home. I said bye to everyone, Weewer went home with us and Sean came we watched a movie called "Curps Bride". After the movie Weewer and Sean left.
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Me and my mom went to Spark Soical we saw Alicia, lucy, Michael, Ellie, Madison, ( different Madison ) her mom, her dad, their dog, Stan, Sage, and a guy I don't know ( or don't remeber). Me and Madison played I was smiling Madison was too.
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Me and my mom went home with Alicia to do some stuff and get some stuff. We went back and did Karieoke me and Madison sang some songs and danced we played. Soon it was time to go Madison's dad told me to put all the candy in my pokets and tell my mom I went trick or treating when she wasent looking.
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Me and my mom and almost everyone went near Alicia's house and did some dancing! Me, Madison, Alicia made a new dance. After, some people left I said by to Madison, her mom and her dad, and their dog Hudson. Me and my mom went in Alicia's house for a little, soon we went home. After me and my mom made a deal. What a great day!

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By Farrah Felipe
One day were I was alone and I had no one to play.Then my dad came from work! "daddy!" I say with joy "oh hello Farrah!" my dad said my dad saw me bord on the table i was just playing with some cup."Hey "Farrah you want to make a restaurant? so mommy can eat?" said my dad "sure!" i say with a smile.My dad got some pans and some veggies then he got my kid knife and put it on the table.He then got some meat and so shrimp. "alright now i will set some stuff on the table you will cut some veggies and you can cut some mean! also i will let you cook the mean! and shrimp!"said my dad a BIG smile "ok!" i say with please he then got the stuff and put it on the wooden table we use.He put the veggies,mean,and shrimp on the table to he got the kid knife and gave it to me.He told me to cut the mean and veggies for me to cook."thank you daddy! now i could work in a restaurant! and my own restaurant!"i say with a goodie.I cut the veggies soft like the wind and put them in the pot then i kept ctting.CHOMP CHOMP the knife split them to peaces when i was done my dad got the veddies and said ok now you need to cut the shrimp. "ok" i say i grab the shrimp then i cut off the tiles with the knife split split the knife got the tiles off the shrimp

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By Katya

Halloween Town is
a fantasy filled with various monsters and supernatural beings associated with the holiday. Jack Skellington, respected by the citizens as the "Pumpkin King", leads them in organizing the annual Halloween celebrations. However, Jack has grown weary of the same routine year after year and wants something new. Wandering in the woods the next morning, he stumbles across six trees containing doors leading to other towns representing other holidays and enters the one that leads into Christmas Town. Awed by the unfamiliar holiday, Jack returns to Halloween Town to show the residents his findings, but they fail to grasp the idea of Christmas and compare everything to their ideas of Halloween. However, they do relate to one Christmas Town character: its ruler, Santa Claus, or "Sandy Claws" as Jack mistakenly calls him.
Jack sequesters himself in his tower to study Christmas further, and find a way to rationally explain it, but despite his efforts, he cannot do so. He ultimately decides that it is unfair for Christmas Town alone to enjoy the holiday and announces that he and the citizens of Halloween Town will take over Christmas this year. Jack assigns the citizens of Halloween Town Christmas-themed jobs, including singing carols, making presents, and building a sleigh to be pulled by skeletal reindeer. Sally, a beautiful rag doll woman who is secretly in love with Jack, experiences a vision that their efforts will end in disaster, but Jack dismisses this. He also tasks Lock, Shock and Barrel, a trio of mischievous trick-or-treating children, to abduct Santa and bring him to Halloween Town. Jack tells Santa he will be bringing Christmas to the world in his place this year. Jack orders the trio to keep Santa safe, but against his wishes, they instead deliver Santa to Oogie Boogie, a gambling bogeyman, who plots to play a game with Santa's life at stake. Sally attempts to rescue Santa so he can save Jack from his potential fate, but Oogie captures her as well. Jack departs to deliver his presents to Christmas Town, but they frighten the populace. While word spreads about Jack's wrongdoings, he is shot down by the military, causing him to crash in a cemetery. While the saddened residents of Halloween Town think he is dead, Jack has in fact survived, and while he bemoans the disaster he has made of Christmas, he finds he enjoyed the experience nonetheless, reigniting his love of Halloween. But first, he realizes he must take action to fix his mess.
Jack returns to Halloween Town and infiltrates Oogie's lair. Jack confronts Oogie and defeats him by ripping apart a thread holding his cloth form together, causing all of the bugs that live inside him to spill out, reducing him to nothing. Jack apologizes to Santa for his actions. Despite still being furious at Jack, Santa forgives him, remaining certain that he can fix things and takes his leave.
As Santa replaces Jack's presents with genuine ones, the townspeople of Halloween Town celebrate Jack's survival and return. Santa then shows his forgiveness to Jack by bringing a snowfall to Halloween Town, which, in a way, fulfills Jack's original dream and causes all the residents of Halloween Town to finally realize what Christmas is really about. Afterwards, Jack and Sally declare their love for each other. And they lived happily ever after In Christmas Town!

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