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Photo retouching:

1. Reduce the size of the photo

2. The proportion of the text should be larger (Since the whole news story would be regarded as an item, so adding objective text can balance the judgment)

3. Use a thicker and solid stroke (Black colour) to censor her breast

Caption:

1. Rephrasing and enlarge the title and caption (精采養眼, origin of the organization -> emphasizes art instead of 🤬)

2. Describe more about the background of the show to state that it is for artistic purpose

3. Turn it into a news report, not a random big photo

Replace with other alternatives:

1. Use a less revealing photo (Only showing the model’s back)

2. Shoot from a wide angle, making the proportion of the naked woman smaller

3. Use a photo that shows also other parts of the exhibition ,not only models (e.g. decoration)

After the adjustments => can justify by “honest purpose” (just featuring a news story about an artistic activity in South Korea, but not aiming to sell “sensationalism and 🤬”

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Dominant overall effect

Reduce size of the photo and add cultural photographs of the event (the venue, other people)
Change the order display: The picture go after the title, then paragraphs(description)


Honest purpose
Cultural event background in the caption, details and information of the association 
Change wording of the title (not emphasizing on naked model→ change to a neutral name of the dance/event)

Suggestions with priority:
Adding more photos related to the cultural event → according to no.28 → arts as public good
Provide more description of the event
More shade / turn down the brightness *not the framing to keep the original purpose→ nipples: less likely to be seen
Resize the scale of the photos on the newspaper, choose photos that are less zoomed in
Neutrality of the caption (current version: wrong focus)
As it feels like related to the first article, it is better to put others news that not related to 🤬.

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Dominant overall effect

Reduce size of the photo and add cultural photographs of the event (the venue, other people)
Change the order display: The picture go after the title, then paragraphs(description)


Honest purpose
Cultural event background in the caption, details and information of the association 
Change wording of the title (not emphasizing on naked model→ change to a neutral name of the dance/event)

Suggestions with priority:
Adding more photos related to the cultural event → according to no.28 → arts as public good
Provide more description of the event
More shade / turn down the brightness *not the framing to keep the original purpose→ nipples: less likely to be seen
Resize the scale of the photos on the newspaper, choose photos that are less zoomed in
Neutrality of the caption (current version: wrong focus)
As it feels like related to the first article, it is better to put others news that not related to 🤬.

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Title: 韓國裸體模特兒協會成立 漢城酒店表演慶祝

Caption: 韓國裸體模特兒協會在稍早前正式成立，協會舉辦一系列活動及聚會慶祝。週五在漢城一所酒店舉辦的慶祝活動，當中包括模特兒跳舞表演。

1. blur / pixelate the nipples to a higher degree (use different colors instead of transparent & cover more)

2. amend the location of the nipples in the photo : not in the middle

3. add an objective and informative title and caption to demonstrate the artistic value of the event, making the message stands out but not the photo (similar to the case of 美國熊人博鬥)

4. reduce the size of the photo little bit (less preferred)

- delete the word “雙姝裸舞”, which is not related to the event

- choose a photo / more photos which show more details of the event (e.g. venue, audiences, nature of event)

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Suggestion 1:

reduce the size of the photo, so that its size will be similar to other news photos

Suggestion 2:

adding body text and title

lengthening the caption of the photograph

Suggestion 3:

use pixels or shapes with color different from the body of the woman

Suggestion 4:

Choadding a photograph of the event, stressing the focus is on the exhibition, but not the nude woman

osing a photograph of the same women, but with the name of the event at the background

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Group 7 Suggestion:

1. Photo: Use larger black grids to cover the nipples and reduce photo size to a size that similar to other photos on the same paper

2. Text: Increase more text to describe the news story

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VS Dominant overall effect:

Reduce size of the photo and add cultural photographs of the event (the venue, other people)

Change the order display: The picture go after the title, then paragraphs(description)

VS Honest purpose:

Cultural event background in the caption, details and information of the association

Change wording of the title (not emphasizing on naked model→ change to a neutral name of the dance/event)

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Suggestion1
Suggestion2

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Add a new Title：

韓國裸體模特兒協會成立 雙姝裸舞宣傳

Caption of the picture:

兩名裸體模特兒周五在漢城一間酒店表演宣傳

Add content:

Background information of the model association

What happened during the performance

The cultural background of the association

Theme, audience and honorable guest of the show

Photograph:

Make the coverage of private parts more obvious

Increase mosaic or just use black (don’t use the same colour as the parts that need to be covered)

Adjust the proportion of text and picture

Shrink the picture and don't put it at the center of the page

Make it smaller and put it aside at a corner so that it’s not the main focus of the page

Add content to the news, provide proper title and news content (E.G the background of the 韓國裸體模特兒協會), not merely one single caption

排版 similar to「美國人熊搏鬥」

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照片建議

1. 胸部馬賽克範圍增大（而不是僅僅blur 🤬）

2. 將照片範圍縮小

3. 選擇遠景視角：觀眾觀看表演的圖片，不要將關注點一味放在裸體演員身上

4. 抓取演員特定姿勢或角度，儘量避免胸部裸露（可能是手臂剛好擋住胸部或者反面特寫等）

5. 增加對body painting的特寫

文字建議

1. 增加文字部分說明

2. 不要強調「裸體」，而是強調這個藝術的本身的來源等

3. 新聞內容可以增加對演員的採訪（多些分散讀者注意力的文字說明）

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1. 調整圖與文字的比例，讓圖片與文字部分做到相輔相成

2. 二次設計圖片，例如仿效下半身的絲帶，將表演者的乳房用後製的絲帶去遮蓋，並在圖下加上備註，例如此圖片經過處理
－ 將重點聚焦於彩繪本身，而不是表演者的胴體，但同樣能保留其吸引讀者留意之用途

3. 避免使用例如『精采養眼』的字眼，只是描述圖片與背後的新聞故事，盡量避免發表個人的意見