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Magma

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Ash

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Lava

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Orange

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Red

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Dirt

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Trees

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Embers

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Igneous rocks

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Cloudy

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Amazon Product, this backpack gives a good idea of how we could cool the backpack. It uses water pumps to cool the backpack constantly this could be something we could implement. Link

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Anders, M.  "Backpack Basics" Get Geared Up Backpacking. Link

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​ Your design team has one goal: to improve the utility, comfort and aesthetic of backpacks currently on the market. After collecting research, you will take some time to complete the ideation...

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The Danklage Spanklage is made out of pure fire / heat resistant material and is lightweight.

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This backpack is the best backpack you will ever need in the case of a volcanologist.  It is heat resistant because of the lightweight heat resistant material used for the pack. Most backpacks are not made out of the material you need for a backpack to be heat resistant, but the danklage spanklage has the perfect material. It has a freezing compartment specifically designed to hold a lot of water so that you can stay hydrated and cool. It's lightweight open design is to help you stay nice and breezy.

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Not flying volcano rocks

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Flying volcano rocks

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Mini Volcanoes that erupt straight out of the ground

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Spiky lava rocks

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab)

Write more and clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem--not just a list of features.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity