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Glow: I enjoyed how you made your presentation very personable and used specific examples such as you spreadsheet to prove points made in the video. Grow: I would try to use a different medium for the presentation to space out the slides a little more so the viewer focuses just on what you're saying as you say it.

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Glow: I enjoyed how you included all the background information from your prior experiences.
Grow: Felt like there were just way to many words within each bullet point and found myself trying to read each section rather than listen to what you were saying.

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Glow: I liked how you explained each different technological program and what it is
Grow: Too many words for each section/bullet point, took away from the presentation and what was being said.

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Glow: I enjoyed the specific example of how you incorporated the excel sheet for accounting
Grow: Try not to use so many wordy bullet points and sections for a video presentation. Makes the viewer read more than listen.

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Glow: Good balance of text and images
Grow: You spoke extremely fast and didn't elaborate very much on the presentation and could have included a lot more information

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Glow: I really enjoyed the visual aspect of the presentation and liked how it wasn't just all text
Grow: Not much, maybe just try to condense some parts

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Glow: I liked the visuals incorporated in the video presentation
Grow: Try to speak up next time and elaborate more when speaking to keep the viewers attention

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Glow: I enjoyed to elaboration on the topics throughout the presentation and you made some great points!
Grow: I would incorporate more images rather than have the same 3 or 4 throughout the entire thing. It just keeps the viewers attention

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Glow: I liked how you added a lot of personal experiences within your presentation, I think it added positive effect to it.     Grow: The only suggestion I would have is maybe elaborate a little more on the questions you asked and their responses, maybe something like why did your co-workers consider themselves creative or innovative.

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Bruce Knops:

Glow: I really enjoyed the visuals of the presentation and how you incorporated pictures/images to correlate with the topics

Grow: Try to fluctuate your voice a bit more so it is not as monotone

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Gabrielle DePalma:

Glow: I enjoyed your presentation a lot and how it was so different from the rest, the recording of the laptop camera while you were speaking really made it personable because the viewer could put a face to the presentation.

Grow: Not much to say to grow on. Even after trying to make something up, I can’t think of anything you could improve on, your presentation was awesome.

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Glow: I really enjoyed how you used prezi for the presentation; however, this goes along with my Grow which is that there was a lot of changing the display within the prezi which was distracting and took away from the substance of the information being given.

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Glow: I like how you made your presentation extremely relative regardless of the person and drew from previous assignments we have done in class!
Grow: I think having a background to the infograph would have tied the presentation together nicely!

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Glow: I like how the presentation itself was. Very well  visuals and good responses.
Grow: Nothing really just try to stay within the ten minutes.

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