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My partner should work on her creative title. So far though she is doing pretty well, she added some statistics to her essay to support her claim. Very good

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My partner needs to put the claim statement in the introduction not the body paragraph.🤔

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My part has the format down but she does not explain

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My partner has pretty good reasons but needs to explain his body paragraphs more and have more evidence including the citations

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Partner has some great reasons but she needs to expand on them and add more text evidence and get rid of the 1st and 2nd person word

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Partner forgot Fca's

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My partners essay is good and she has a good summary of the book but keeps talking in an Indian accent

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Tell... my partner had a great conclusion 

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Tell... my partner had a great conclusion 

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Ask... why did he not read the essay over for punctuation
give... he could work on punctuation

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My partner has a good hook, but no claim and needs to separate his introduction and his conclusion from his body paragraph 🙅🏻🙅🏻🙅🏻🙅🏻🙅🏻ph, sincerely an awesome writers 

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My partner has a good hook, but no claim and needs to separate his introduction and his conclusion from his body paragraph 🙅🏻🙅🏻🙅🏻🙅🏻🙅🏻ph, sincerely an awesome writers 

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My parter had a great hook that pulled me into the essay.
Why didn't he check for first person.
He should work on checking 4 third person

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this essay showed how the American mind thinks versus a warped pretty mind. Used a good variety of different sources.

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Tell: I really love liked the hook and the tittle of the

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My partners easy was pretty good.
Why did you choose differences?
Use more describing words.

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I found my partners essay very good it explained how the Uglies and America are similar it made more believe that these societies are similar even though my 

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I found my partners essay very good it explained how the Uglies and America are similar it made more believe that these societies are similar even though my 

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My partner has a really short essay, what should she do to make it better?