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to naDia I  love your story it is so good  from Ellie 

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to naDia I  love your story it is so good  from Ellie 

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cool stor

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my favorite games are call of duty and gta

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cool story

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you mad me hungry

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login haw do you tip so fast  and can you tech me haw to tip fast

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login haw do you tip so fast  and can you tech me haw to tip fast

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awesome story from kaden

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thank you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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i like your book because it talk's about fundraisers and field trips

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Dogs Help People.

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The Lady was resting A boy knocked on the door the dog barked and barked the lady waiting all the dogtooth she noticed the boy was not on the door she let him in the house .

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This bark over and over because someone was breaking into the house the owner woke up from sleeping and said to the dog and looked at the and up the phone and called nine-one-one and said there is a leave in my house and I need help now and the cops team house and arrested the man and took him to jail and she said thank you to the cops and they left.

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Once Upon a Child there was old lady at our house a guy broken took all her money and she said oh no  I can't babysit I can't because I'm broke and I can't be broke what do you mean someone broke into my house I need help my money got stolen by a man and a girl please please send something to get my money back please please please find something to get my money back we have a dog ma'am we'll handle it thank you sir or ma'am cuz you have a   cuz you have a deep voice Can we have found the robbers we got your money come down the station you can have it and we use their dog to get it goodbye I'll see you next time you need to call nine-one-one maybe and if there's any more emergencies I might be able to help you I might even be able to help you babysit on the weekend one day.

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My dog’s name is  Vega  someone knocks on the door she barks If someone answers the door she'll still be barking then if someone tells her to stop she stop and she walked and went to lay down and rest then she watches TV when it is on because my mom likes to keep on the TV for the dog Vega If she hears something weird are hears me and my sister Cherokee squeal she thinks we're in danger and whoever she sees that she thinks is trying to hurt us she bites Unless it is my mom or it is me and Cherokee just fighting she doesn't bite me in Cherokee or my mom my sister Vega always helps me when she says the dog she has because she is a cutie puppies maybe she is might not be pretty or cute but at least she is a great great great dog to have around help you cuz every time she helps you there's another thing for her to do every time she'll help you and help you if you're only of my sister my mom she loves helping me and my sister my mom cuz my mom's her mom my sisters moms my dad's her dad my sister's dad her dad everyone's mostly her family and my family and I love it.

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Once upon a time. I was going to try to swim in the deep end. Add Water and I was grounding cuz I could not swim and my mom called the ambulance and the cops the cops brought a dog it was swimming in the water to me and same to swim underwater and saved me and whatever I got saved I was very and I was crying for my mom so much and I 5 was balling no one understanding why I would go in the deep end they was all like why would you go on the deep end you cannot go in the deep and you know you'll get hurt and I  I was trying to learn how to swim right right in the deep end cuz I thought you guys were watching me and That is why I tried to swim  in the deep end because if I don't know how to swim soon I will be in probably nine When I learn how to swim so that is why I try to swim myself I thought you guys were watching in case I did down and you guys were not watching me so why do you think I drowned.

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

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Once Upon a Time there was a boy Who Cried Wolf. the boy had to watch for a wolf and he said there is a wolf all of the villagers people grabbed their torches and their pitchforks and went to the boy and said where is the wolf there is no wolf there no line fine okay you can spank me good boy who is Ervin is there no wolf wolf and all of the villagers villagers went back home there's a wolf all the villagers that their torches and grab their pitchforks and went to the wolf and so the boy was lying cuz there's no I said you are getting spanked again cuz there is no wolf they all went back home help me  bark bark  most of the Sheep thank you  The end.

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cool story from lera

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awesome story from kaden

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login you or sow cool and you or varey cool sow much

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login you or sow cool and you or varey cool sow much

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i like how you described your story

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I like how you talk about pta

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PTA

Pta should be appreciated for What they do for us, because they set up build and learn. They also set up game night they also raise money for field trips for fundraisers For the entire school and some field trips are awesome the one in 3rd grade you get to see the nutcracker..

At game night you can play shoots and ladders, sorry and checkers. They have movie night  in gym  and they play movies that are appropriate for kids and they sell popcorn

They also sell pop, water, juice.

At build and learn you can get stickers and paint the thing you build and you can build a car and or a boat and you can get a free hammer and free goggles. One of the fundraisers are apex and cookie dough there's a fundraiser that you get key chains and you get other things but the best thing is you get a limo ride and pizza. Also pta sets up the book fair they have dude diaries, plants vs. zombies books and erasers. Bookmarks, pencils and secret uv pens that you can draw on paper or your self and light up the pen cap where you drew and no one can see it.  But you can buy whatever book you want to like captain underpants, dog man and other books that you like. So you should participate in the book fair, build and learn and fundraisers.

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really cool kaden ! from lera

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I love your story!
from Nadia

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awesome story

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awesome story dude

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i like your story

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i like bacon to

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i argee with jaden that games cost $$$$$$$$$$$$$$

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i argee with jaden that games cost $$$$$$$$$$$$$$

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i like bacon from simon

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everyone great job

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cool story

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COOL

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I like your picture.

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good story everyone from kaden

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I lick it good job

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i like bacon from derrick

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Games

The games are fun you can play cool games you

Can make a game.But it cost $$$$$$$$$$$$$$

But you get the money back if it is good .You well

Have fun.

And new 2017 games are cool

And my games are not new and the one I like it is new

It is plants vs zombies Instant warfare it got

Army zombie man and scientist zombie and

Football  player zombie and Pirate zombie And super z.

And you can be a plant to more zombie characters and plant on the

Zombie Side it is bad and the plant side is good you can Level

Up you can be a zombie and plant and you can get cool

Plants. Costume and zombies to now more of plant vs zombie

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awesome  story from kaden

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your story is great

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good story from lera

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my favorite game is gta awesome story from kaden

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cool story from lera

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cool story from mary

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I like your writting

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you have a awesome dad derrick   from kaden

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i like that you put sum picter in mary I like the picter with the dog in a cup

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Cool

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I like the story mary
From benibel

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your writing is good great work
from mary

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i love your story from lera

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awesome writing dude

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I love your story

from Nadia

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:0 by simon

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cool story logan

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You had a good discription
from mary

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i like baken

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Lera I like how you give really picher's

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Lera I like how you give really picher's

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Grama

She  helps  me  when  I  got  bullied  on  the  bus  and she   side a  shoe  get  a  9th grader  on  the  bus.

I  went  to  her  job  and  she  helps  old people  and  I  love going  to her job.

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She  helps me  read   all  and  I’m  getting  better  at  read  she  helps  me  every  night  and  day  and  I’m  getting  better at  reading.

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cool story

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cool story benbel

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My mom

mom buys  lunch like chips and treats. My mom buys me clothes.my mom gave me a BIG playset and she got me clothes and num noms and a lot of toys.

she treats me well when i am sick.when she gives me medicine and makes feel better. My mom helps me with my homework  thats math. She does laundry for me.

by:sarah

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If  you have snack at your school did you ever notice that when they serve some people don't have a snack because they don't like the choice that there is and sitting there with? nothing to eat Well I am going to tell you a little bit before you read my story so you can understand what I am going to talk about.So here we go okay so I'm talking about the snacks at school because they can be a problem because some  people don't have a snack to eat. We also  need to convince people that we need different snacks at our schools.     The snack  here can be a problem because some people don’t get a snack cause  they don’t like it.  Yeah you're going to say so they  don’t  have anything to eat .   They might  need something  to eat so they are not starving so if you brought  something to eat.  They might  be very hungry  it is not just so they might be  hungry.Don’t  have something maybe you could share some of your snack so they don’t go starving cause that is sad.  Also  not so much fun for them because they are so hungry so you should help them instead of just looking at them and saying in  your head well they should  have brought a snack cause. it is not nice instead  you should feel sorry for them because it is sad that they don’t have a snack  to eat and it is not nice to make fun of them and then after a long time then apologize after then give them a snack it means. more to them if you give it to them right when you see them then  it means more to them  but here at school.  They should give this  snacks instead   should be more like chips,strawberries,sweets,carrots, grapes, goldfish, apple slices, bananas, fruit snacks, animal crackers.   by Ellie

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cool story benebel

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Brianna

Cousin you know  Brianna then you will know how special she is to me.  Brianna is a special cousin to me because when she lived at my grandmas house.  We all loved to play board games.  Her favorite was Sorry because she always won.

She makes me and my cousins breakfast like bacon and eggs when she wakes up.  Sometimes she makes us lunch she would make us spaghetti and meatballs.  My favorite was pizza.

In summer we go swimming.  When we ask her to swim with us she usually  says yes but sometimes she says no.  For church in the morning she brushes my hair.  On saturday when we go to grandma's house she'd always play with us when we are board.

She is gone now and we are so bored.  We all miss her alot.  She was supposed to come stay with us December but she didn't come and all of our family members have at least one picture of her.  We are all raising money to go to   California to see her and her family.  She also has a twin sister her name is Alex and a friend named Eav they both remind us about Brianna.   Two out of three kids in my class said they had 13 year old cousins too.  Brianna is a special cousin to me and all of my family.  Next year she will be staying with us for christmas and Naveah’s birthday.  In the spring she might come to my birthday too.  Eav is special too.

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.My dad is nice

.my dad bought me a gargar bins toy

.sometimes he takes me to manevent

.Sometimes he takes me to an arkad

.he takes me to my babysiters

.on valentine's day he lets me eat a lot of candy

.Sometimes he gives me money  the

.my dad is funny

.onc he wore my mom's dress

. he tells funny jokes

. his pictures are funny

.   he plays funny

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If people Who go to  the beach don’t pick up after themself animals can die .Some animal that come to the surface can get stuck in the trash and die.Some animals get stuck in the soda bottles because they are so small.

On a show called nature cat I sow some animals get stuck in trash. I sow some pictures of animals get stuck in trash. It makes me mad because people don’t care about the animals and the environment . and sad because animals die almost every day. I felt six when I sow it it is bad that people dump trash in the lake. Some animals like duck

can get stuck in the trash that people dump in the lake.

Conclusion

Now you why it is good to pick up after yourself it you can save the world by just by picking up trash.And by telling people to pick up trash that they see.make the earth a better place and if you listen  to what I say you can save the earth .

Question  why should I care for the earth ?

Do you pick up trash ? What do you do when you see trash?

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I like how you tell us what you see

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I like your work
From:DERRICK

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cool story benibel

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My aunt is the best.She helps me calm down.When she lets me get my Anger out and breaking

some  wood.

She lets me going the basement and lets me play with my brother and my sister and we play tag to get my anger out and my energy out and then i am calm down and i have a great day with  my aunt  and my brother and my sister and my grandma and my papa uncle and my.i went to her house ones and what i do with her is hang out with herbe the pool and we play catch with her and she went to my grandmas house and we had fun and then my sister made me mad and then my aunt told her to stop and then told me to go to the basement my brother came  down we played  and then my sister came down and we had fun and a great day and we were sad when she left and we cried all day and all so she sits with me and she Massages my back and she calm me  down by  helping me with my  homework and then i got 100% on my test and she is the best. she is the best because she's always being nice to me and she helps me with  my baseball practice and that's why i love her so much.

she plays with me she plays catch and we went on a walk and we were hot and i was drifting and i fell of and i got mad because i got wet in a puddle and we went home and i got a worm trawool and hot cocoa and i got clean pants and clean shirt and brand new pair of socks and i went on another walk and i had fun and i was sweating and after we went on the walk i got a popskull and ice cream and we went to freddy's and i got a hot dog and some fries and some jilley holopono and it was really spicy and hot and i drank all my sota and i had a good day and i also got mad because me and my brother got in a fight and my lip was bleeding and my nose was bleeding and his nose was bleeding and his lip was bleeding and we got heart and we got in a bigger fight by calling each other names and then we stopt and i got a band and i got tichu and for my lip and my nose and my mom got mad and we stopt and i was not happy and i just had a ode day and then i got happy because i got some pizza and i got two slices and i had a good good day and my family was happy and my dad was happy to and i was proud of myself and  i think  my great grandma that died and i think that she was proud of me and i was sad and mad because my Great great grandma was in heaven and i miss her so much but my family is still happy family.

My aunt

By. brayden

Martinez

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Introduction: Dj is my step dad and he is nice to us.I love him.do you have step dad ?

Dj is nice. He is my step dad and I love him so much he is nice to us. He help with me my homework he bought us a house to live.I really like his chilly. It warms me up!!! We do not get to see him a lot. But in the morning me and dilan get to see him. And he does not work on weekend’s. He buys us clothes to wear and to be warm. And he buys us toys to play with .what do thick about your dad is he the most. Awesome dad in the world is he funny. Is he nice does your dad cook sometime yes .Is your dad  nice yes sometime very nice do you. Play with your dad play catch get on the trampling . Sometime if you do keep playing with your dad.

Conclusion: now you know that Dj is nice he buys us. Food,toys clothes.and he is fun. And you can have fun with your dad to .

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Ms.Colwell should be appreciated because she helps with multiplication,reading and spelling. I Am lucky  to be in ms .Colwell class because she is so nice to us. She awes helps us with math question like 6x6=36 11x2=22. She  pushes us to write more and more every day it helps me all the time and if you are startling to have trodal  with writing she can help you a lot trust me i now. Ms. Colwell is really nice to us .

what is your teacher like? Well you think and  i will go on telling you about  my teacher  so she is so nice like nicer  than any ether teacher ever i am sesers about  my teacher she is so  nice  to me.So she is the best teacher ever  trust me i now . She lets us eat with anyone She is so cool! Best teacher ever !!

By: Lera simpson

Best teacher ever

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by cara
Garrett

does the dishes for my mom he cooks dinner for us he helps us when we are hurt.He washes mom's car he gives me a bath.he cooks his favorite food macaroni. he is awesome because my mom loves him. my mom was happy when garrett washes her car. we pick up carly.

he takes me to my dad's and he is gonna come to my birthday . carly erin and garrett got me ponies …

Garrett watches us  when erin is gone. carly is taking a nap so we better be quiet or we will wake up carly.

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We should have no morning work!

By : Benibel

We should have no morning work it’s because every time we do morning work it’s hard for people. It’s hard for people. Some people are so frustrated they get mad.

Morning work is hard. It’s because sometimes you get hard math problems. Sometimes you mix up with the adding and take away. The plus sign you look at it and you frustrated because you’re supposed to take away, not add. Writing like you own sentence and copy is hard. Its like a big long thing. It’s too long, you just get frustrated.

And people get so frustrated They Don't Like  morning work  some people are mad math and reading other stuff . And some people got to owe their  recess if they don't do the morning work. and sometimes it take the whole recess in might be hard sometime.And   on Mondays we should get to play on prodigy other day we should go on XtraMath. in the morning  you should do our writing in the morning and sometimes not every Time.

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Dad

Goes to work everyday and he is a

He was a Marine and helped our country.

Cooks good,eggs,bacon and biscuits and gravy!

I get to work with him like welding.

Takes me to Royals and Chiefs games.

By.Derrick Brack

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Dogs Should Be More Appreciated. By Mary Quintanilla.

Interdiction... Dogs are really nice animals. They can save people and comfort you. Dogs can help you any where. Dogs are great animals so I hope when you're done reading you will appreciate dogs.

Dogs should be more appreciated because they help people so much. For example, they can calm  you down when you are stressed out or mad. Also if a fire happens they will bark when they smell smoke and that might be a signal  to get out. Dogs can also help old people cross the street if they see a car coming they will bark so you know there is a car there and you will not get hurt.

Dogs are nice calm animals and. Animals should be treated good so they do not try to bark at you or even they might try to bite you because when they get treated badly they will do that. Dogs can be calm and I know that because they snuggle with me when they are  calm.

Also some dogs are in need of food if they do not get food or water they will grow weak and die. I have seen that at the street and homeless dogs  have no food or water and then they die. So help dogs and appreciated them and you will have a nice dog to remember. So everyone appreciate DOGS!

conclusion... Dogs help a lot of people like they help in the military or the k9 or even normal dogs can too.So please after reading this book try to appreciate DOGS!!!!!!!

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By: Zander

He gives us a house i like that he appreciates us and others around. I like that he gives us food.

I like that he lets me go to Kiani’s house when I ask.

I thank him for appreciating me for putting my money in the bank.

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