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"rephrase this sentence so its more clear to a reader"

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"this sucks"

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Double check the grammar throughout your writing.

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Helping with the flow of the writing/ switching some paraghraphs around.

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Helping with the flow of the writing/ switching some paraghraphs around.

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Grammar checking the writer.

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Fix it

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Not giving reasoning and explaining what is wrong with it.

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highlighting clear organization

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I would recommend this ect.

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" I really love how you went into depth and details about your artifact. One way to improve is to avoid making your statements repetitive."

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"You might need to fact check this part."

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"You might need to fact check this part."

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this isn't good

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editing the writing with out telling you.

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editing the writing with out telling you.

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I recommend looking over the grammar and spelling mistakes and make sure you are not missing any.

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I recommend looking over the grammar and spelling mistakes and make sure you are not missing any.

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check, check plus, check minus

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when a paragraph could be to long and help break it into smaller pieces

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"I see your thought process, this is great, keep going either way that thought and transition to your next one."

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"I liked it a lot. It was so cool reading"

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that's incorrect

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Try and look over your work to make sure you have your facts and grammar right.  

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Try and look over your work to make sure you have your facts and grammar right.  

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Do better next time

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too vauge

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not giving a opinion on why you think its good/bad

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not giving a opinion on why you think its good/bad

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pointing out problems without explanation

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Focus on the main idea and connect it with emotions and true meaning.

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Focus on the main idea and connect it with emotions and true meaning.