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南环路与建国路交叉口东南150米 7

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Week11-True Cost of Fast Fashion Worksheet

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Week11-True Cost of Fast Fashion Worksheet

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12-4 worksheet Fast Fashion_Student version

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Week10-Presentation about a Successful Company

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Week10-Presentation about a Successful Company

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The video was a bit long, so I split it into two parts.
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Week10-Opinions on The True Cost Documentary

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Week10-Opinions on The True Cost Documentary

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南环路与建国路交叉口东南150米

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南环路与建国路交叉口东南150米

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Week 7 - Reflection on Reading & Writing Skills

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Week 14 - Reading Paper on Making Fashion Sustainable

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Oxford EAP 3C Task 6 p43 - Writing definitions

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Oxford EAP 3D Task 7 (p47) (Writing a paragraph with a definition)

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Oxford EAP - 4D Task 6 (p61) - Writing a paragraph (120-150 words)

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Past Simple and Continuous - Worksheets(1)

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Week 11 - Oxford EAP Unit 7D Task 7&8 - Writing an Introduction.

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Week 12 - Summarise Article on Fast Fashion

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Could you try adding some content regarding your major of accounting? Could you paraphrase or summarise a section from a textbook using in-text citations? How about evaluating one theory in accounting and explain how it does / doesn’t work in reality?

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Essay Feedback
Hi Essie
Here is my feedback on your essay.
1. Your essay structure is quite good and includes an outline and good topic and concluding sentences. However, you thesis is not clear and it should have stated your stance on the effectiveness of the solutions.
2. Very good description of the problems and the solutions, but there is little evaluation of the solutions. You could have analysed the solutions more and said when and where they will or won’t work.
3. You have used some in-text citation within your writing very well, but this is not enough. Try to incorporate at least one source within each of your body paragraphs as this adds credibility to your writing and shows that you have good knowledge of the topic.

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Portfolio of Work Feedback
Hi Essie
Here is my feedback on your Padlet.
You have demonstrated a high standard of work throughout the semester and produced a very good portfolio of work. Your time management has been excellent throughout the semester and you completed all tasks on time. As for vocabulary, you have recorded a lot of useful academic vocabulary that will be beneficial for your future study. The collocations you recorded are very important as they help you to use the words correctly within your writing. As for independent study, you completed several tasks that focussed on different language areas. Try to increase the amount of self study you do each week and focus on areas that you need to improve.
Here are some points to help with your writing next semester.
1. Try not to start sentences with coordinating conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). Use transitions words instead like - However, Therefore, Since, Because … Another way to correct this would be to join the sentence with the preceding sentence using a coordinating or subordinating conjunction.
2. Try not to write in the first person – we, our us … It’s much better to be specific and use the third person like – accountants, companies, the general public, graduates … and referencing pronouns like – they, their …
Well done this semester, and I hope you have a great Chinese New Year

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Good day. I hope you're all right and enjoying the break. I have included comments below on your semester.

You have shown an exceptional quality of work during this past semester and presented a superior digital portfolio. Additionally, you implemented the tasks in a punctual time frame which shows superb time management skills. Your listening and speaking skills have improved throughout the semester, and I recognized more natural speaking skills in our coursework presentations. These successful presentations characterized your growing language acquisition and confidence. Moreover, everyone’s desire to speak more proficient English is influenced by independent study. Strive to enhance the quantity of autonomous learning daily and pursue content that you are passionate about. Furthermore, acquire a genuine curiosity and passion for language knowledge. If you do, your English language acquisition will continue flourishing.