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Critique: The value change drawing need to be inproved, I should add or emphasize the distinction between near and middle portion, I also found all the drawings were not complete, I would pay attention to stand farther from the observation space to make the drawings more complete.

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Critique : I should add more diagonal movement in the drawing to emphasize the sense of space, I could emphasize more on change of scale and the transition of line thickness.