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Excuses by Alan Ahlberg

We think its good but not funny enough 6/10

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Where teachers keep there pets: we found it funny.

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6.5/10. Explanation: maybe they should do a bit more exotic vocabulary and it can be quite hard to read for a younger or a beginner poet reader. We think they should add more about what the poem is really about.

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9.5/10

Its fun to read it rhymes which makes it even more better to read its quite random but amusing. We would definitely read it again!

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In flanders fields

It was using nice vocabulary

Its also talking about poppies

7/10

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The door

Leeroy -i like it because there are good sentences. My favourite sentence was 'even if there is nothing go and open the door'

10/10

Kheshmika- i liked it because there was good description and it was short but got to the point

10/10

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The magic box: ⭐️⭐️⭐️

What sienna liked- "I like the fact that it doen't rhyme like most poems."

What Millie liked- "I wasn't a big fan of the repetitiveness but I liked how i could see it because it was so descriptive."

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The thought fox 1957

Author, Ted Hughes

Good and strange

7/10

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Excuses the teacher it was hilarious

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I HYPNOTISED THE TEACHER

9.5/10

We thought it was very funny,

It was rhyming every two lines

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It very nice and it makes me feel good and it makes me feel confodent.

7 out of 10⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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How not to play with your food.

I like about this poem because it makes us laugh and it rhyme's.

8\10

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Where teachers keep their pets

Its funny but the ending is WEIRD! VERY WEIRD! 7/10

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the magic toilet: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very funny! And we loved the rhyming !!

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Our magic toilet

we found it funny because you can put everything inside it

9/10

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remember

It is talking about it is telling to remember

Also talking to the reader

6/10

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6/10 explanation: we think that they shouldn't add to much repetition in there sentences. And it has some odd sentences. For example: what the hammer, what the anvil. These could be confusing. We think that they could add less vocabulary.

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Remember

We don't really like it, but it has a nice message behind it.

Chloe-5/10

Sasha-5/10

Flanders field

I like it, it has rhyming words and a strong meaning behind it.

Chloe-7/10

Sasha-9/10

Thought machine

I like it, and all that it says really boosts our confidence.

Chloe-8/10

Sasha-8/10

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10/10

it is really funny and we like it very much,

There is a lot of repetition

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Gran can you rap

We think gran should on bgt.

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Gran can you rap 'Jack Ousbry'

It is odd and goofy 5/10

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Extract from Georges marvellous medicine

Author Roald Dahl

Its a funny story

7/10

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6.5/10

It was quite supernatural how it said go open the door you will see some random objects it was quite suspenseful when when it said the darkness ticking even if there's only wind even if nothing is there.

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4.5. We think that they should do different sentences starters. And that they could mention different words instead of just: the, the, the. As it could get boring or just repetitive.

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The river by Valerie Bloom:

We think its a good rhyming poem

And peaceful (ignore the fact that it says the rivers a monster)

We both came to a conclusion and we gave it a 7.5/10

Recipe to make a wolf:

We don't really like the second verse we think its a bit creepy

Unlike the other one we thought that it was definitely not peaceful.

4.5/10

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thought machine

It is talking about you got this at the start

Also talking about your doing great

Giving you information about your daily mental health or showing you what it would be like for am example/ talking about your day 10/10

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The moon speaks

Author is James Carter

9/10

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Anshdeep:1.5/10

Deeptha: 9/10

There is a lot of rhyming,

A little but of suspense at the end

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This poem make me laugh because when he called the teacher a duck he started acting like a duck

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the magic box

We liked how it did not make sense

Leeroy- 4/10

Kheshmika- 7/10

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Our magic toilet

Author Kenn Nesbitt

Rone said it was kind of weird

Maybe needs better vocabulary

6/10

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How not to play with your food

we like it because they're no wasting food and they say "just enjoy your mothers cooking and refrain from playing with your food except when no one's looking.

10/10

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5.3/10. We think they could add more vocab.maybe make it sound less orderly in terms of like: go open the door, and it has hints of suspense or horror but they could add more adjectives.

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its very adventurous and it is very interesting and calm and full of nature

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5.5/10

We spotted the numbers of food gone down in a order of 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, and 1

It was fun to read a bit random for are liking.

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⭐️⭐️⭐️- millie

Very funny, repetitive and informal! 🍗🦃

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It is Ryming and telling you about her grandma

.for exampale it is using question marks and .

7/10

Recipe to make a wolf

its telling you how to make a wolf

giving you information about how to make it like a / speed of a squirrel's dash

It is a potion

10/10

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In Flanders Fields ' John McCrae

We have seen better war poems 3/10

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This poem is like a sad one cause in world 1 and 2 it saying the soldiers in world 1 and 2 died

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I went to the fridge!

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We didn't really understand it, it seemed a little bit pointless 🙁

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The door

By Miroslav Holub

There's quite a bit of repetition

10/10

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I went to the fridge

We thought it was very funny and random

9/10

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Where teachers keep their pets

We like about this poem because it makes us laugh, of course it rhymes and all the pets are in weird places, especially The last one🤗🤗.

9.9\10

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Deeptha: 7/10

Anshdeep: 3/10 (boring)

There is NO rhyming,

A LOT of capital letters

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how not to play with your food

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Funny! 🤣 and we like the rhyming !!

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6/10. It's funnier than the others with less about magic. And a more amusing poem. And i think that they can add more adjectives to hook the reader in. And it's quite short with an ending that leaves you wondering and speechless. This can be helpful and annoying.

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Tyger

I don't like it, it reminds me of William Shakespeare because of thy.

Chloe-4/10

Sasha-3/10

The moon speaks

We think its sad, because they say their lonely.

Chloe-3/10

Sasha-4/10

The river

I don't like it, because its repeating a lot but i like the metaphors.

Chloe-2/10

Sasha-5/10

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THOUGHT MACHINE ' Laura Mucha '

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6.5/10

It was good description aswell with each sentence it was also fun to read.

It has a lot of description and a lot of sentences and i would read it again! - Connie

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The magic box

Devon- The smile on the baby is creepy and i mean extremely creepy

George-it was very boring (not in a rude way)

We rate it a 0.09/10 its from the baby no joke it creepy

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Anshdeep: 10/10

Deeptha: 2/10

We don't really understand it

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It talking about the sun and rain so the rain is in front of the house and the sun will be make the rain go away

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talking turkeys

Be nice to your turkeys

9/10

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How not to play with your food

By Kenn Nesbitt

Lots of repetition

4.8/10

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gran can you rap?

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Fuuuunnnyyy! Lots of tongue twisters!

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The Thought Fox (1957) ' Ted Hughes '

Its good 8/10

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This is a 10/ 10 because the moon said am not cheese an it make me laugh .

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8.7/10 They have made this poem really funny spellings like: yu ,hav ,cos , de and dis. This could be tricky to read.We also like how they stuck onto the subject which was about turkey.

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Excuses:

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Funny, lots of rhyming

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8.5/10

It was very fun and funny and a bit questionable at the end!

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William Blake

Decent 9.9/10

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author kenn nesbit

We like it because he's making the teacher do everything he says and it makes us laugh our favourite verse was 3 and 5

10/10

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The magic box

I don't like it, because its too confusing and has a lot of random words.

Chloe-2/10

Sasha-5/10

Our magic toliet

I like it, because its funny.

Chloe-7/10

Sasha-6/10

The door

I don't like it, because its boring.

Chloe-3/10

Sasha-4/10

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The moon speaks ' james carter '

No bad

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In Flanders Fields.

We like this poem because it rhymes and everything is in the correct place.

9.5\10

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we like it because it is funny

5/10

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I dont like it beacause it has very less vocabulary 👎❤️

1/10⭐️

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where teachers keep there pets:

Very funnny! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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10/10. Because it's funny and the subject about playing with food is more real than the ones about magic or a talking moon. One issue we found was the adjective was a bit low quality.

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talking turkeys

By Benjamin Zephaniah

Very informal but quite good

Very long aswell and very repetive

10/10

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it was funny and rhymed well

5/10

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Deeptha: 4.5/10

Anshdeep: 0/10

rhyming

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our magic Toilet

It is talking about how things vanish away and they do not now were there go

It is a magic toilet and get things and pout things in to see what happens

8/10

The magic box

It is talking about a magic box and Ryming things to go with it

Also pichets to give us more infomashon

Its talking about things like memories and then saying there putting it in the magic box

So its very important to them

6/10

The door

Talking to the reader/

And saying things are going to be bahind the door

And being mysterious

9/10

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I went to the fridge:

We thought that it made us starve to death NO JOKE!!!

10/10 George rating

Devon rating 0.1/10

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10/10

It was a bit long but funny, it was funny because the grandma rapped everywhere and said that she the best rapping gran the worlds ever seen!

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Recipe to make a wolf ' Pie Corbett '

Fake story we had high hopes for this story but it didnt fail to dissapoint :( 2/10

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6/10 We think this because it says i went to the fridge but wheres the fridge is it in the supermarket

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In flanders field

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in our opinion it is boring!

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Aila and Isla and Robyn The thought fox (1957)

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Its calming because it is set at nice midnight setting and it describes the animal in a tranquil manner.

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Our magic toilet ✨ kenn nesbitt

10/10 no words its just good

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Excuses

By Alan Ahlberg

Very good and quite funny

8/10

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The Door

Good i guess 8.7/10

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4.2/10

We ate not really that much of fan the poem but it was quite good we liked it when its repeated the last sentence 'there may be rain at the front if the house but sunshine round the back.'

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We like this poem because it makes us wondering what's gonna come out.

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The magic box does not make sense.

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Thought machine

We liked it because it showed good examples

10/10

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Thought machine:

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Nice but a little confusing

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Deeptha: 7/10

Anshdeep: 10/10

We think it is very funny and kind of a rhetorical question

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9/10 We think that the poet can add more adjectives to make the story more funny. It's using the same words like: I and Said. This could be changed to make it better.

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How to not play with your food

I like it, because its just funny and i like how it says just enjoy your mothers cooking.

Chloe-8/10

Sasha-9/10

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gran can you rap

By Jack Ousby

I like the bit near the end of the verse

Repetetive

5/10

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in flanders field

10/10

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Where teachers keep their pets:

The words are to blurry to read but we managed it

We gave it a 5/10

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Talking turkeys

there are treating it as there pet

Its funny and has a sense of humour

10/10

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The river

We lime this one its fun

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Talking Turkeys!! - Benjamin Zephaniah

Decent 4/10

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I went to the fridge is funny because the person who wrote it is making themselves sound dumb! Its our favvvvvvv!

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The door

It's really bad it is boring it doesn't rhyme and is bad.

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