# data[].attributes.body
Glow:

Your video was well-presented and very organized. I liked how you took the time to explain your survey results and tie them in with your own experiences. The presentation was also engaging and straightforward to follow.

Grow:

For future purposes, try to reduce the information on the slides and explain it rather than read it off them. Also, maybe talk more about how your experiences connect to Wagner's thoughts from the text.

# data[].attributes.body
Glow:

You did a great job clearly explaining your thoughts. Your presentation was very appealing and easy for me to follow. I especially liked how you explained more about what was on the slides rather than just reading off of them.

Grow:

In the future, I suggest changing your tone when expressing certain information to keep the audience engaged. Also, making the images showing data larger would make reading and understanding what you are talking about easier.

# data[].attributes.body
Glow:

You did a great job making your slides simple and easy to follow. I liked how you connected the course text to what you were talking about. I also liked the presentation's theme, which made it more appealing.

Grow:

It was hard to follow along for some parts because I could not hear you properly. Some parts felt less put together, and the presentation was short, so expanding your ideas a little more would have improved the video.

# data[].attributes.body
Glow:

I liked how you expanded on what was written on the slides rather than just reading it. Your presentation was easy to follow, and your tone was clear and concise.

Grow:

In the future, connect your thoughts to the text and explain your survey results more. Also, add more visual elements to make the presentation stand out.

# data[].attributes.body
Glow:

Your presentation was very well put together. I liked how you took the time to explain your thoughts and how your consistent tone kept me engaged throughout. The theme of the slides was also very appealing and made the slides stand out.

Grow:

In the future, try to condense what you are saying into smaller portions so that you do not spend more time on one slide than another.

# data[].attributes.body
Glow:

I liked how you tied what you were talking about to your personal and professional life. You presented the information simply, making it easy to follow along. I also liked how you took the time to explain what was on the slides rather than just stating it.

Grow:

It was a little hard to hear what you were saying at some parts because your mic was cutting out. Also try adding more about your survey data and how it connects to Wagner's thoughts from the text.