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Good:
provide examples of how mobile phones have increased the distance (check the posts, share their lives with other social media users)
Work on:
- Be careful when reading the question "Have ...increased"(增加或縮短)  --> we shall not use "can increase", but we use "have shortened"  if you talk about how people can update their friends through social media platforms and know their friends better

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Good:
start the question with reference to data (According to the table/bar graph, ........)
Success for including two drawbacks of using mobile phones

Work on:
too many teenagers --> most teenagers (because you are describing the bar graph and the word choice have to be neutral [中性])
electronic (adj.)--> electronic devices/ gadgets
chatting friends --> chat with friends
eye diseases (check the pronunciation)

Intonation:
Try to have a failing intonation when you end a sentence. (e.g. the last sentence in question 1)

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Good: You have talked about why you choose to work in the retailing industry (零售行業) as it is challenging and suitable for you as a youth. You have also talked about what you will do for your career.

Try to work on:
1. Apart from shopping heaven, we can also use shopping paradise (more common).
2. Dare to challenge--> challenge what?
3. will shopping--> will shop (bare infinitive)
4. Too many tourists:太多(負面) Vs So many tourists: 好多 (中性)
5. study more knowledge --> study harder/ gain more knowledge
-->You can use this website to check 配字 (https://www.freecollocation.com/search?word=knowledge)

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How to Pronounce CARRIER and CAREER - American English Pronunciation Lesson

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Good:
- Clear structure: Use "first", and "second" for two ideas and the examples are provided for the first ideas
- Good word choice: Romance, Comedy, cartoon
- Correct use of "according to your preference", "at the same time"

Things to work on:
- preposition: successful about your language learning --> successful in your language learning

- I advise you can --> I advise you "to understand"

Try to rewrite the sentences:
1. Rewrite the bracket with "whether", the sentence shall end with a full stop ( . ):
Today I'm going to talk about (do you think fields are useful for language learning? )

2. Using "It is important that you..."
It is important you must choose about the films, what language you study.
e.g. It is important that you choose the films with the language you are studying.

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Good:
- Use "I support this good idea."
- Compare the difference in attitudes towards study between China and Hong Kong.

Things to work on:
- closing: can be clearer, e.g. So, they (who?) can use these opportunity to study (study what?). --> So, Hong Kong students can use these opportunities to focus on their academic studies (學業).
- subject-verb agreement: a good grades --> a good grade/ good grades
- part of speech: desperately (adv.) to study hard --> desperate (adj.) to study hard

Word Choice:
- educational mode--> educational model (Mode 通常指的是一种形式、样式、方式或状态。例如，在数据分析中，它可以指“最常出现的数值”或“一组数据中出现最频繁的值”。在时尚领域中，它可以指流行的时尚款式。Mode 还可以用于表示工作状态、运行状态、音乐调式等。 Model 指的是一个榜样、模型、范例或者原型。例如，一个时装模特可以被称为 Model。在工程设计中，Model 可以是一个物理模型或计算机模型。在艺术领域中，Model 可以是一个工作室模特或彩绘模型。 因此，Mode 和 Model 的区别非常明显, Mode 主要与形式和状态相关，而 Model 则更强调榜样和模型方面的含义)
- school teachers/ students --> teacher/ student (意思重複)

Try to rewrite the sentences:
1. Rewrite the words inside the bracket with the word "difference"(n.):
I support this good idea because (inside China schools and Hong Kong schools, educational mode has a big different).

2. Make the sentence complete (what is missing ?):
But, Hong Kong students will not this.

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Good:
- Clear structure: clear opening, and clear ending of your idea
- good time management
- good use of "first", and "however" to show the change in your ideas
- good use of "delighted"

Things to work on:
- only one benefit is mentioned in your speech. So, try to include one more benefit in your speech.
- Subject-verb agreement: e.g. they studies --> study
- Word choice: travel out of --> outside Hong Kong

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Q: Have mobile phones increased or shortened the distance between people? (1-minute response)

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Q: You are working on a project about the use of mobile phones among young people in Hong Kong. You saw the data below in a newspaper and would like to share 2 of the impacts of students spending too much time on mobile phones. (1-minute response)

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Q: Which of the three fields would you most like your own career to be in? Why? (1-minute response)

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Q: Do you think films are useful for language learning? Why and how, or why not? (2-minutes response)

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Q: Is it a good idea for Hong Kong schools to have exchange programmes with schools in other parts of China?

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Your group has chosen the topic of school trips for a presentation you are going to give in class.
Q: What are the advantages to students of trips outside Hong Kong? (1-minute response)

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How to pronounce serious. How to say serious. Listen to the audio pronunciation in the Cambridge English Dictionary. Learn more.

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How to pronounce obviously | British English and American English pronunciation

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Feedback for Hong Kong kids and Prince/ princess disease

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Feedback for Hong Kong kids and Prince/ princess disease

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Good to tell the difference between these two phrases: in this case, the structure can be clearer: I think they (who are they? Are they Hong Kong kids and children with prince/ princess disease?) are similar because they are not good at taking care of themselves. ...... --> However, Hong Kong kids and children with prince/ princess disease are not the same. .......

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For the first audio about raising children 

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Exercise 1: try to change 2 sentences in the audio using " daily tasks" and "parenting style".

Exercise 2: Rewrite the sentence: "It could make much influence of bad"

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Good to include examples in your speech; analysis from an HK citizen's perspective; good time management; good use of "in addition", "obviously"

For "washing clothes, cooking", we usually called these "daily tasks" and "life skills" (生活技能); when we comment on how parents raise their children, we can use "parenting method" or "parenting style" (家庭教養模式)

Sentence example: The better news is that a good parenting style can positively influence children. ; Children shall acquire basic life skills at home and school to perform daily tasks.

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choose title 2 :label of "Hong Kong Kids"…

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Small challenge (You can choose 1 Question to answer)

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Small challenge (You can choose 1 Question to answer)

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1.    Which of the theme parks in Hong Kong – Ocean Park or Disneyland – do you think is more attractive to tourists?

2.    Would you like to be a tourist guide?

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Small challenge (You can choose 1 Question to answer)

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Small challenge (You can choose 1 Question to answer)

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1.    What can be done to improve students’ problem solving and self-management skills?

2.    What do you think about the label “Hong Kong kids” and terms like “prince / princess disease”?

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Your school is going to receive a group of 16-year-old students from Australia and your group has been asked to organise a day tour to one of the tourist attractions in Hong Kong. Explain which of the following places is most suitable.

You may want to talk about:
• which of the four places is the most suitable for the Australian students
• the activities and rundown for the day
• what preparation is needed
• anything else you think is important
(3-minute-long response)

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Q: How would you raise your children if you were a parent? (2-minute-long response)