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Good consideration of props and costume 

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Good consideration of props and costume 

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Brandon needs to quivver on the floor more before Jess says her line. So we really feel the impact of this moment of weakness for Brandon 

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Brandon needs to quivver on the floor more before Jess says her line. So we really feel the impact of this moment of weakness for Brandon 

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Jess the use of your blanket is good and helps you with the opening lines. Big improvement. Why can’t I go home - this line needs to be a different tone

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i love the use of props
Brandon you actually look like you’re drunk which i like,
Jess i love your character !
i love the costume as well :)
i like that we’re closer to the stage. makes it more intense

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Good setting. Jess look at audience more. Brandon good delivery of lines. Definately improved. Little bit louder. Positioning bettter. Think we need to be closer still? Both very believable.

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Positive -
Love the atmosphere - really believable
Brandon- good sternness to voice
Really strong characterisation
Good memorisation of script
Positioning is better

Areas for improvements -
Jess good timidness but project a little more
Don't stamp for sound effect
Project in seduction scene
Emphasis on word killer

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Nice projection from both sides
Well thought actions and reactions
Good staging
Brandon charcater was good
Jess should show more emotions and actions

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Why is there one line that’s direct address? I like it, but should Tia have the same at some point as well? Maybe Tia talks to the audience before leaving to go out?

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Really nice. But you need to seriously take time to look at yourself. Think of the power she has on you

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Well done, maybe you could say hello as you enter the room. And leave the bottle behind. Then ask ‘is there anything else you need?’ Then wish them goodnight? Perhaps - think of character?

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Positive - more dramatic pauses which makes it more intense
Chels characterisation
Tia very timid
Rehearsals pulled off
Tia's facial expressions

Improvements- tad improv

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I like the tone, I like the new laughs in the lines. Which is good. Just slow down, and be louder

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Need to be louder.

Suite blaster - this is a well considered reference to the work.

Tia - you’ve just arrived into the ‘amazing room’ so why after 2 seconds are your feet tapping the floor in boredom?

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Projection is better
Chelsea have a strong characterisation (bit quiet sometimes)
Staging is better than it was
Tia have to be more scared
It is showing that you have used Kate's technique of aggression and molestating.

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Chelsea you have character to a tee. Kist careful.not to lower voice in olaces. Tia definatly improved with timidness. Good use of space. Good touch wheb looked at audience. Maybe a bit too long pause? Maybe toa nwed to be freaked out a bit more

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Possitive: can tell the difference in levels, Chelsea came across good an sleezy and delivers a strong male character, tia does a very good job at coming across hurt and innocent, you can feel and see the discomfort and distress. Can see that they have given more time between moments in scenes to bring a more dramatic effect.
Powerful ending loved the delivery.
Possible improvements: at points there needs to a louder delivery, and give more time in what you say especially with you giving more time between lines.
Smashed it, very much improved and I enjoyed it very much.

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Suffocation was better the characterisation 

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Suffocation was better the characterisation 

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One line ‘yes you are so confess’ came out as funny - why is this?

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One line ‘yes you are so confess’ came out as funny - why is this?

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When the drama of the second scene erupts, the lighting changes, these are considered and the candle play. However, I need to feel Moreno if a struggle between each other

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The bed position has changed from last week. Not sure this is as effective when you consider audience - remember audience is one of your criteria 

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The bed position has changed from last week. Not sure this is as effective when you consider audience - remember audience is one of your criteria 

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Great use of props. Such an improvement from last week considering line delivery and characterisation. Think of pace still. 

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Great use of props. Such an improvement from last week considering line delivery and characterisation. Think of pace still. 

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Of your line delivery. Slipping up of words

Your tech cues are different

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Suspicious - careful of the shaping of the words. Csilla slow your drivery to be clearer in characterisation

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Suspicious - careful of the shaping of the words. Csilla slow your drivery to be clearer in characterisation

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Positive: clearly put the time into the rehearsal, good use of levels, they have an understanding in what they are delivering and saying.
While delivering lines they have clearly worked on there movement, so that it comes across smooth and without unnecessary pauses.
Possibly improvement: focus on breathing, bits where need to be louder but good projection, allow your dramatic pauses to drag out longer, needs to be a smoother change in levels when coming to the end with the killing scene, Very powerful performance it was fantastic I enjoyed it and has come very far, well done girls.

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Good projection
Audience engagement
Realism
Modernisation - still relating to script
Memorised script
Good engagement with each other
Great characterisation and emotion during fight scene

Areas to improve;
Characterisation and reactions from csilla - phone scene
Aware of staging
Aware of props - candle!

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• good costume
- nice staging & props
- Slow down on the phone call
- good use of stage. nice movement while on the phone
- realism
- A lot better off script! :)
- good characterisation
- good emotions
- stayed in character even when audience laughed
- i loved how you used the pillow this time. had a mich more dramatic effect
- just be careful louise that you don’t fall off the bed at that part :’)

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Positive - audience awareness
Listened to feedback given
More movement in first scene
Louise really good eye contact with the audience
Good use of the space
Good connection between each other
Improvements - projection
More fear (Louise is about to get killed)