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I am very impressed on how you were very interested about your passion, it was clear because you wanted to help your community.

-Kin Anh 5C

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I am impress how you follow the checklist amazingly, you shown a lot of effort in your slides. Love your editing too! Please be ready next time.
Aca

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I like how you also added some visuals and showed a lot of things but next time remember to speak more clearly.

Chuong

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Sophia did really good!! It was cool to see she did interviews with teachers!! And had great image choices!! Well done Sophia!!

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I think you did a great job researching about Air pollution. Like Ms K said, an important thing to do now is reflect upon what kind of action you can take, now that you have the information, what will you do with it?

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He used a lot of big words and had a lot of information.
- Bill

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he did the excellent job from his presentation, i very appritciate about that

Tony 5A

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I like how you listed your favorite charity. and well done!
-Maxwell 5B

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Thank you Robot for your informative presentation today. It means that you 've worked so hard and you put lots of effort in your research. I'm really like your model and happy to see that you are taking action at home.
You should proud of yourself now!

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Congratulations! Thank you for sharing your passion with us. It a very polished presentation. I can imagine you cooking with all your cousins, having fun... and possibly making a mess along the way.

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I had the biggest smile on my face watching you present. Your passion was very clear and you did a FANTASTIC job!!!
Ms. Elsa

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I like youpictures and your presentation was great

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You said that you were nervous but you did not seem nervous at all- your presentation was clear, well-paced and very interesting- im so proud of you! Well done!

From: Mr Ross

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I like that you have a clear voice and you have a awsome presentation

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You did a amazing job on researching about your topic and it was also very interesting that you took what your passionate about and used it as your PYPX topic! Well sometimes that is very common but still grea job!

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What a great presentation, Robot! You have worked hard and researched. I am very proud of
you.  Thank you for  the detail explanation of your model. I liked that you have already started your action at home. Fantastic!

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Nice presentation, Jasmine. You have included different information and media in your slides.
Next time, maybe you could include the different sources of information in your presentation.
Well done!
- Ms. Maggie

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Excellent presentation Max - I really liked your link to your personal story and you're clearly passionate about this topic.

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Guys, you did an awesome job! I was really proud of how you worked together as a team to create a very interesting and informative presentation!

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Good job on bringing awareness to a very important issue. At AISVN we want everyone to feel safe and welcomed and we hope that we don't ever have discrimination of the LGBTQ+ community.

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Great presentation, Jenny! You synthesized all of your research so well into your presentation. You spoke clearly and answered some difficult questions from the audience. Fantastic job!

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Star: Well done Ngoc. Your presentation was clear and organised.
Star: It is obvious that you are very caring towards animals and want others to treat them with the same care and respect.
Wish: Maybe next time you can include some links to your research articles for readers to learn more about your inquiry.
-Ms Jeannie

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Spectacular job to Ngoc

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Amazing job presenting ! You speak very clearly and you have tons information and you explained clearly and easy to understand. Also you have showed what your journey through out your exhibition really told me what have you have learned even through at home is much harder to learn I have learned a lot from you.

- Milena 5B

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Well done Tessa!! Lots of information and I got to say it is really good!! For me who does not play sports... It was very cools to know that you got to interview other students!! Very awesome work Tessa!!

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Excellent presentation. I am so glad you challenged yourself by taking a topic that was new to you.
Ms. Elsa

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i like your presentation

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I am so proud of you. You were very clear and well spoken in your presentation. You worked really hard on your research and learned a lot!

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I like how you have a clear voice

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Good job. I liked the way you presented your information very clearly and your action component was awesome! I was wondering about what a 'poor' education is - so maybe that would be an area for more explanation for next time. Congratulations!

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you made a really good job in your PYPX
From: JOLIE 5C

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You have a lots of info and a interesting detail but make sure to read it slower.

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dung4C

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Very good presentation, Tessa. Your slides are full of evidence of your research with details. Great job!

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Hi Bryan, you have a very clear voice in your presentation. There was a lot of information and you have shown us that you did a thorough research on something you are passionate about. Something for you to work on is to slow down a little bit with your speed and read from your heart instead of reading directly from your screen.
Well done!
- Ms. Maggie

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You did a very good job, especially when talking about a sensitive topic like this, you were confident and clear. Great job!
-Annie 4C

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Great presentation Lance!  I really like how many people you interviewed and gathered many different opinions about your inquiry.
I also liked how organised your presentation was, making sure you answered all of the questions and meeting the criteria you were given for PYPX.
My only advice would be to try not to just read from the slides and to talk more to your audience, as you know a lot about your inquiry and your audience can read the screen.
Well done!

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the presentation was very good and i enjoyed the prestion.

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Great presentation, I think you did very good, but one thing you cold improve is just speak a little more clear and a bit more loud.

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she speak clearly through the presentation and she very brave when she present.

Her presentation is very good she just need to fix the WIFI

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I like how you have a clear voice and a lot of information and you also have confidence to talkinfront of us

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He speak very clearly, straight forward and he speak very confident

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You speak clearly, you've showed detailed information in your presentation. Interesting information and it's related to your topic.

Bim

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Great presentation! Very informative. Just need to speak a little more loud and clear. Thanks.

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Dung 4C

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Lots and lots of information. The format also looked good. But sometimes you repeat some information so maybe you can fix that by not reading everything on the slide and just simplifying it.

Chuong

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You are really confidence with your presentation. It's a really interesting topic that I would like to research next year.

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Good presentation. I got to learn more about fashion from you. You speak clear but a little bit fast (I think it's because your nervous and shy). Still, I like your presentation!
- Jenny 5A

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A really detailed presentation with interesting connections.
I lied that you talked about trying to remain balanced while working on your PYPx - not easy! Well done to you both.

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Good job on presenting about the connection of a vegetarian diet and climate change! I liked the Actions that you both took and I look forward to seeing if the Canteen will make the right choice and add Meatless Monday's to the menu!

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Good presentation. I really learned a lot from it you speak very clearly and easy to understand next time you should remember what to say because sometimes you always say ya or yeah.

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Great presentation. I really enjoyed it. You have a very clear voice and you have demonstrated a lot of confidence from the way you speak about your topic. I am looking forward to seeing more action from you after PYPX.
- Ms. Maggie

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I am so impressed with how well-spoken you are.  I think it is fantastic that you chose such a challenging topic that many people might be scared to talk about.  Your compassion for people is very inspiring.  Well done.
- Ms. Jessica

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I am glad you were able to inquire into something you are passionate about and can use in the future.

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He read it a bit fast but he is confidence.

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You were well prepared and it was a very interesting topic. Well done!

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Excellent presentation Brian - very confident and engaging.

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Great presentation! I wish you had manga as the supporting document.

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you are confident and you side have every information, but maybe next time make ti more colorful and add more picture.

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Hi Lloyd, you have demonstrated your love for anime and manga in this presentation. You have also demonstrated growth in your presentation skills from when we first started working together.
Next steps: As mentioned by others, it would help to include some kind of visuals in your slides. Also, it is worth thinking about what other personal actions you can take to promote anime and mange in our community, especially now when a lot of us are staying home.
- Ms. Maggie

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Annie present is very fluent and great to.

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I really like your presentation because i also like anime and you did great making your slides also whats your favorite anime's??
-Elsa 4F

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I think you need more pitcures.

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I like how you have confidence and you speak very loud me you have a wonderful slide but I really wanted more pictures

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Great job on your UV presentation Brian! I appreciated the suggestions you provided for people to protect themselves from UV rays._ Ms. Mich

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I like how Bach and David presentation and have a lot of information and having picture next time use another app it could be more interesting.

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the presentation was very good.

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Making the video slower so the audience could read the word

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Sumi,
I thought your inquiry into the black plague was a fascinating topic!  I think it was also a very important topic because there are a lot of similarities between the black plague and coronavirus. I'm proud of you for all of your heard work and research!
- Ms. Jessica

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Star: You showed confidence and spoke with a clear voice.
Star: You gathered a lot of information and shared many strategies.
Wish: I would have liked to see more evidence of you putting some of these strategies into practice. Maybe photos or videos demonstrating some of the ways that can help students focus and become better learners.
Great job Tony!
-Ms Jeannie

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He spend a lot of time on his slides but he did stutter a lot and he said "uh" a lot too. But it was a good presentation and he had lots of info.

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You speak very loud and had a lot of information

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- his presentation was cool and I have never heard him say so much about VR! but maybe next time shorten your info so that you don't have to talk so fast. and maybe spend some more time fixing your presentation so that you don't finish late. other than that brilliant job!

- Maxwell 5B

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I loved that you have loads of information, and also you explained loads of your work. The only thing you need to improve for next time is be more confident while talking. GREAT JOB!
-Henry

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Great job Susi! You presented your process well. I am excited to see how your research and action will positively affect you and your family with the quality time you have together.
Ms. Katie

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Star: You used Prezi which was really engaging.
Star: You chose a topic that was very interesting and some facts that I didn't even know!
Wish: All good!

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You were grear Bao! First one up and you were calm and relaxed and answered some tough questions!

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Star: You speak clearly, very confident about your presentation.
Star: You have lots of detailed information in your presentation.
Wish: I hope you would explain it shorter.

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You did such a good job preparing for your presentation.  Your information was well organized and you spoke very clearly.  I am proud of you for staying organized and for asking great questions that helped you dig deeper into your lines of inquiry!
-Ms. Jessica

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MyAnh:
Star: Has a big loud voice with confidence; speak coherently throughout her presentation

Star: Go through all of the checklist (nothing missing, shares her research)

Wish: Would like her to speak not reading on the slide and more pictures for an appetizing slide presentation.

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I think Milena did great.Her present is very beautiful and good.

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You did well Chuong I like your presentation

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Great topic to look into, Milena! I loved the different pictures you had on your slide that really helped me understand!
I'm also super proud of the progress you've made in your research and self-management skills since Grade 4. Your exhibition project really shows your long-term growth!
- Ms.Kanako

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Great job on your presentation. I love that you have an idea of some companies that will make more sustainable choices for clothing. I hope you choose to shop there to support them like I will. =) Ms Rebecca