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Write your paragraph here:
- Express your opinion for the question: Do you think being a procrastinator is a serious problem?
- Give examples to support your own idea.

The writing should be 4-6 sentences long only.
Deadline: by the next lesson: Wed, June 24th.

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In my opinion, being a procrastinator is a serious problem (.)because a procrastinator person is an inefficient  and lose many opportunities for triumph in the professional and personal ambit. (long sentences, separate into 2). I used to be a procrastinator.  I procrastinated all the things until last minute. I always told to myself, ”It’s ok to do it tomorrow.” Then I told to myself the same word day after day. On the deadline, I always regret that I procrastinated the things all the time instead of finish it earlier. I think procrastination can lead to poor academic performance, promote negative feelings and  procrastinators may be paralyzed by fear of making a mistake, a loss of self-worth. (this should be point 2)
In conclusion, be a (an) organized person is better because you will live happy (happily) and you will be a winner (of your) the business or work.
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+ stated the opinion
+ add in the conclusion

- The main idea sentence should be short to answer to the question "Do you think being a procrastinator is a serious problem?"
- The examples dont seem to support the main idea.
- Some grammar mistakes. --> review before you submit the task.

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Homework: Do you think being a procrastinator is a serious problem?

🤔 My answer: In my opinion, be (being) a procrastinator is a serious problem. It's (does) not mean that a procrastinator is not a good person. (doesnt make any point here--> remove) But procrastination brings more harm than benefit. The procrastinator often postpone or delay performing a task or making decisions, especially at last minute. (1st harm, should add in the consequence)
Also, They are usually not active in everything, prone to stress, anxiety and not trusted by everyone. If procrastination continues in a long time, it will greatly affect our health, mind and the people around us. In short, procrastination is a bad habit,  we will take a long time to change. (separate this clause into another sentence: Although it will take a lot of time for us to change this bad habit, But if we patiently change our habit in procrastination, we can solve a lot of problem(s) in our life.
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+ Stated the opinion (main point)
+ Explanation support the main idea
+ add in the conclusion
- Lack personal experiences.
- The explanation should should be short and coherent.

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From my point of view, being a procrastinator is a serious problem. First, many students are highly vulnerable to negative consequences such as poor performance, decreased subjective well-being, negative affect and reduced life achievements. For instance, I thought the homework time was long, so I didn't do it earlier. At last, I did my homework after my friend went to bed. When I came back to the dorm, the first thing I could do was do my homework. At that night, I did them until one o’clock and I felt tired and sleepy. (lengthy, lack the consequences) Second, a procrastinator person is an inefficient and lose many opportunities for triumph in the professional and personal ambit. (why is it the same as Minh Anh's?)For example, I usually list what I need to do in my mind but don't write them down. That made me forget what I must do and don't appreciate them. I miss my more time and the progress of things not getting done as expected. (not support the 2nd point)Third, procrastination made things urgent and I couldn't arrange them. No one believes my promise because I don't finish them on time. In conclusion, being a procrastinator can be a serious problem. So, we need to plan for our tasks, our plan should have enough flexibility and include our interests. (separate into 2 sentences)
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+ Stated the opinion
+ List supporting ideas in orders: first, second, third
+ add in the conclusion
- Lengthy
- Some examples dont support the ideas you mentioned.
- Some grammar mistakes

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Huynh Nhu                                                            Well, I think being a procrastinator is not a serious problem.Because if I feel comfortable with that and the procrastination doesn't ruin my life, it's not a big deal.I still have completely controlled my life with a little procrastination. But my life require energy more than, it maybe the procrastination in my mine is being serious problem.  (Point made unclear for this sentence)                

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Huynh Nhu                                                            Well, I think being a procrastinator is not a serious problem.Because if I feel comfortable with that and the procrastination doesn't ruin my life, it's not a big deal.I still have completely controlled my life with a little procrastination. But my life require energy more than, it maybe the procrastination in my mine is being serious problem.  (Point made unclear for this sentence)                

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+ stated the opinion
- Lack of examples
- Grammar mistakes

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Living in a modern life, people seems to be busier than they used to in the past. It is argued that procrastinating is nowadays becoming a difficult issue. In my opinion, I totally agree with this idea. Firstly, time is limited and everyone only has 24 hours, but we use 8 hours to sleep and 8 hours for other activities, which means that we have little time to work. Therefore, if we are procrastinator, we will waste lots of time, which helps us finish and be promoted in our work soon. (the main point should be made at the beginning, after 'firstly'. Main point ---> explanation ---> examples)
Secondly, being a procrastinator makes us passive. Our brain needs to work consecutively to reflect impacts from outside; however, procrastinating impairs encephalic function by bringing laziness and other dubious thinking. Next, when we procrastinate to do something, we tend to forget it. (does this support the 2nd point or is it the 3rd point?) For instance, if I put off doing my homework, I will forget to finish it on time. Moreover, procrastinating will exist as a bad habit. (does this support the 2nd point or is it the 4th point?) The more we postpone completing work, the more we repeat that habit again; hence, it is a serious thing we should consider. In conclusion, procrastinating should disappear in our life and we should make a plan to balance time for work and other activities.
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In my point of view, being a procrastinator is now a serious problem in our society. This issue not only brings the young people the bad habit but also ruins their future. For instance, you might think learning English isn't nessesary and useless; you often watch TV, chat with your friends, spend too much time on the social media instead of learning English. (This example would indicate many people procrastinate learning English if you have a leading sentence or clause, for eg: 'as lots of people do not see the importance of English in today world, they keep their progress delayed for years. They keep watching TV,...) That leads to the low score on your English test in your school. Five years later, your company which you apply to demands a certification of English. Then, regret is too late.
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+ Stated the opinion
+ Well-organized
- Lack a little of coherence (analyzed above)