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I liked the idea and use of your box

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Your price is a little too high but other than that i liked the idea.

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Dean Cullen I like how you used ethos with simone biles because I grew up seeing her as a gymnast so this made me lean towards your product
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Dean Cullen I like how you used ethos with simone biles because I grew up seeing her as a gymnast so this made me lean towards your product
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I liked how you used all three rhetorical appeals. I think logos and ethos were the most effective. If Simone Biles told me that a certain brand of clothing was good to exercise in, I would listen to her!
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Dean cullen, Have you thought about maybe lowering the price?
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Dean cullen, Have you thought about maybe lowering the price?
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The use of ethos was good, but why is the box $3000 a YEAR?! Maybe it can be $20.99 per month so that it totals to around $250 per year?
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I like the name of your box, "make it yourself DIY" it stood out to me because I like to make things on my own and thats what this title means
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I like the name of your box, "make it yourself DIY" it stood out to me because I like to make things on my own and thats what this title means
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I love the theme of your box. I think this box is really affordable considering how many items you you have in there. I'd definitely purchase this. 
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Dean Cullen, I like the way you guys used logos trying to show yours is the best, better than any other box similar to yours
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Dean Cullen, I like the way you guys used logos trying to show yours is the best, better than any other box similar to yours
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I like your box a lot because it would be really nice to have something to look forward to in winter. It's nice to have something that can get you through the cold. 
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I love the theme and idea of your box, I would love monthly sports supplies! Your presentation is also very well organized. Your use of ethos is perfect, saying that famous athletes love the boxes
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I love the theme and idea of your box, I would love monthly sports supplies! Your presentation is also very well organized. Your use of ethos is perfect, saying that famous athletes love the boxes

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I love the theme of your box. I think this box is really affordable considering how much items you you have in there. I'd definitely purchase this.

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Dean Cullen, I like the way you guys used logos trying to show yours is the best, better than any other box similar to yours

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Dean Cullen, I like the way you guys used logos trying to show yours is the best, better than any other box similar to yours

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I like your box a lot because it would be really nice to have something to look forward to in winter. It's nice to have something that can get you through the cold.

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I like the name of your box, "make it yourself DIY" it stood out to me because I like to make things on my own and thats what this title means

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I like the name of your box, "make it yourself DIY" it stood out to me because I like to make things on my own and thats what this title means

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I enjoyed the way you used statistics

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I enjoyed the kid friendliness of the box because not to many boxes are for kids

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I tried turning up my volume to max and I couldn't even hear a single word

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Dean cullen, Have you thought about maybe lowering the price?

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Dean cullen, Have you thought about maybe lowering the price?

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The use of ethos was good, but why is the box $3000 a YEAR?! Maybe it can be $20.99 per month so that it totals to around $250 per year?

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Dean Cullen I like how you used ethos with simone biles because I grew up seeing her as a gymnast so this made me lean towards your product

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Dean Cullen I like how you used ethos with simone biles because I grew up seeing her as a gymnast so this made me lean towards your product

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I liked how you used all three rhetorical appeals. I think logos and ethos were the most effective. If Simone Biles told me that a certain brand of clothing was good to exercise in, I would listen to her!

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I liked your use of ethos by providing statistics

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I enjoyed how you really considered people in need with making your box.

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I like your use of these items since it will allow teens to venture more of their creative outlet.

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I love this subscription box, this is very helpful to those who can't afford materials for school. The name of the box is also very fitting.

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I like how to the point it is and how pictures of the products are the focus of the slide

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I liked the theme of your box

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I like your catchphrase, I think there's definitely a market for this

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Dean Cullen I like how you guys used logos and certain statistics

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Dean Cullen I like how you guys used logos and certain statistics

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I liked the testimonial.

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I liked the way you used statistics it really convinced me.

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I liked your use of ethos by using the Rock's credibility

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The facts and logos were very convincing.

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I think that all the techniques you used were very persuasive, especially the puppy and The Rock. Very few people want to make a puppy cry, so it's persuasive.

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I enjoyed the slide because of the Rock.

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I really liked the kid-friendly theme of this box. Especially with your sponsor being a Disney channel star, this is something that I would've bought when I was younger.

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I really liked how your box included many artistic aspects because I think drawing is a good way to implement self-care.

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I like the name of your box. It's clever and well-fitting given the contents, which paired with the other marketing strategies such as ethos encourages me to buy it.

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I liked how The Rock liked your box

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I liked how you included Michelle Obama in the presentation, because a lot of people like her. Have you thought about including more color in your slide presentation?

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I liked the idea of the box. It was very creative.

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I liked the fact that you used a puppy as a way of using pathos it sure convinced me/ Zamira Zabala  

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I liked the fact that you used a puppy as a way of using pathos it sure convinced me/ Zamira Zabala  

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Dean I enjoyed how you used ethos and talked about G Hannelius. I really liked G hannelius when I was young so this related to me

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Dean I enjoyed how you used ethos and talked about G Hannelius. I really liked G hannelius when I was young so this related to me

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The use of ethos was really effective, I would buy it if Michelle Obama told me too, and I'm sure others would feel the same.

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liked your energy and your marking strategy.

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I enjoyed your presentation because it was very well designed and the pictures made your presentation very interesting. 

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I enjoyed your presentation because it was very well designed and the pictures made your presentation very interesting. 

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I like how your box changes theme according to the month

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I enjoyed your slide because I think the use of statistics and logos as your rhetorical appeal would be very persuasive.

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Dean Cullen I enjoyed your presentation because it has a catchy name that really relates to your box

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Dean Cullen I enjoyed your presentation because it has a catchy name that really relates to your box

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I thought the statistic was very persuasive, I would buy this subscription box.

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I liked your subscription box because Michelle Obama likes it.

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I enjoyed your theme of your box because I think it can be very useful for people of any age. 

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I enjoyed your theme of your box because I think it can be very useful for people of any age. 

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Carly Weber

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I thought your subscription box was very creative. I liked how you used ethos because I watched G Hannelius when I was younger.

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Dean Cullen your use of pathos is good because it relieves "stress" which is an emotion

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Dean Cullen your use of pathos is good because it relieves "stress" which is an emotion

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I enjoyed the title because it rhymed.

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I liked your subscription box because stress affects a wide variety of people, so there are lots of potential customers.

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I enjoyed the overall concept of the box, I believe that it was very thoughtful and helpful for those who are stressful in their lives.

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I liked how you also used logos by including statistics in your presentation

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I enjoyed your uses of pathos because it made me laugh.

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Your use of pathos would be persuasive because I don't think people would want the puppy to cry.

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Dean cullen your use of ethos was persuasive because you said 9/10 students approve and thats an appeal based on the speakers credibility because its whether you are telling the truth or not 

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Dean cullen your use of ethos was persuasive because you said 9/10 students approve and thats an appeal based on the speakers credibility because its whether you are telling the truth or not 

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1.) I enjoyed _______ because _____.
2.) Have you thought about _________?
3.) Your use of [rhetorical appeal] would be persuasive because ______.