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Nowadays people are working too hard. What is the reason for that and what should employers do in order to prevent employees from doing this.

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I/ VOCAB

1. cogent reasons

2. cutthroat labour market

3. spare no effort to V/ apply themselves fully to the job
for fear of job loss or with a hope to land/ secure a decent job

4. Before khi chuyển ý trong bài essay/ task 1 thì đều cần link tới ý trước đó: another reason >>> aside from the social factor, another immediate reason is the pressure and aspiration wielded by (wield: trang bị, đeo vào tay) parents

5. Another factor, seemingly a paradox, is ironically (từ nhận định quan điểm) the prevalence of digital devices

6. although/ albeit they release/ free us from humdrum [manual/ menial] tasks

7. they pressure us into a multitasking whirlwind

8. we tend to be compelled to V (cảm thấy bị bắt phải)

9. juggle many things simultaneously (nhiều cùng 1 lúc)

10. this task cram has indeed made/ rendered us more prone to tension and stress.

SOLUTION (DỰA TRÊN CÁC CAUSE LISTED, SOUTION CẦN TƯƠNG ỨNG VỚI CÁC CAUSE)

THERE SHOULD BE ATTEMPTS ON THE PART OF POLICY MAKERS TO ENFORCE STRICTER LAWS / MORE RIGOUROUS REGUALTIONS MANDATING (BẮT BUỘC PHẢI CÓ STH) STH

THERE IS A NEED FOR FUNDING OF + CHTRINH/ INVESTMENT IN PROGRAMS PROMOTING STH

STH IS A MUST - INTEGRATION/ INTRODUCTION OF … PROGRAM INTO THE SCHOOL’S CURRICULUM IS DESIRABLE/ IS A MUST.

PARENTS ARE EXPECTED TO SET ROLE MODELS OF STH

IT IS INDIVIDUAL ACCOUNTABILITY TO STRIKE/ MAINTAIN AN OPTIMAL BALANCE BETWEEN A AND B/ PHÂN BIỆT ĐÚNG SAI: DISCERB BETWEEN THE RIGHT AND THE WRONG/ ÁP DỤNG TÙY TÌNH HÌNH: PUT STH INTO PRACTICE [ACCORDING TO THE CONTEXT/ CONTINGENT ON] THE CONTEXT

-> It is believed that stress has become one of the fundamental issues that many countries experience these days. This essay will shed light on the root causes and then give some solutions to tackle this issue.

One of the reasons that develop anxiety levels among people is the heavy workload that people have to complete before the deadlines. It has been claimed that individuals who have numerous tasks are more likely to get depressed. As those massive amounts of work would possibly require people to devote their time to be able to get it over. Taking Japanese people as an example, working overtime has fairly become a common phenomenon in order to earn bonus salaries in this country. Little did they know that this repeated action might gradually affect people's mental health in the long term, leading to a significant decline in productivity as well as their will of working.

Despite all of this, there are a variety of ways to cope with stress and achieve a sense of equilibrium. First of all, people should manage a suitable time schedule for working and relaxing in order to prevent mental illness. This would consequently increase the excitement while working and the success rate of the organization as well. Another effective method would go for participating in recreational activities that help calm and soothe the mind including taking a break away from the hustle-bustle working environment.

In conclusion, it is true that people become easily nervous as a result of work demands. However, I strongly believe that there are certain measures that may be taken to help people feel less anxious.

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Option A: Some people believe positive thinking has benefits, while others consider it has drawbacks. Discuss both these views, and give your own opinion.

Synonym positive thinking:
a positive mindset, maintain an optimistic stand, optimistic people, a positive attitude, optimism, focus on the bright side of life

IDEAS: phải lấy ví dụ cụ thể
Đ1: tích cực là có lợi (khi làm nhóm dưới áp lực công việc cao, nếu tập trung vào nhiệm vụ mà không nghĩ quá nhiều về khó khăn thì sẽ đạt mục tiêu nhanh hơn. Trong một mqh, nếu tập trung vào điểm tốt trong tính cách của người kia, người đó sẽ được inspire để troử nên tốt hơn.)
Đ2: không chuẩn bị cho rủi ro thì không tốt (vd: sức khoẻ cần phải được chăm sóc cẩn thận và mỗi người phải có kế hoạch phòng trừ precaution plan

CHECKLIST:
- MB khi đưa topic phải đi kèm hậu quả
- MB phải có những luận điểm trái chiều (while, whereas, however...)
- Câu đầu tiên trong mỗi đoạn thân cần từ luận điểm mạch như stance/engagement
- Khi khai triển ý trong đoạn cần đan xe ý ngắn - dài trong bài
- Ý phải được kết nói theo tuyến tính
- Có nhiều từ reference được đi kèm với từ đồng nghĩa của từ  trước đó
- Mở đầu câu phải đa dạng (P2, Ving, phó từ, chủ ngữ giả)
- Ý phải được khai triển theo các logic khác nhau : chung - riêng, tương phản (nếu không - thì), nhượng bộ, dù - nhưng, vì nên.

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ADVERTISING

Lợi:

1. ngành giải trí sáng tạo > tạo công ăn việc làm

2. giúp người dùng biết thêm thông tin về sản phẩm > mua sắm thông minh hơn

Hại:

1. thao túng người dùng > mua những thứ ko cần thiết

2. trẻ con đòi bố mẹ mua những thứ ko cần thiết > phiền

Opinion:

1. kiểm soát

2. có hại > cấm
-> I strongly believe that it

ANIMAL RIGHTS (CÓ NÊN THÍ NGHIỆM LÊN ĐỘNG VẬT HAY KHÔNG?)

NÊN:

1. phần không thể thiếu trong nghiên cứu vaccine cứu người

2. con vật ở dưới con người trong chuỗi thức ăn > có thể bị hi sinh cho quyền lợi tiến bộ của con người

KHÔNG NÊN:

1. động vật có quyền mà không ai có thể xâm phạm

2. có nhiều thí nghiệm ko nhất thiết cứ phải dùng đv mà có thể dùng máy mô phỏng

Opinion:

1. nên ăn chay

2. nếu phải thí nghiệm > phải. giảm thiểu suffering

VEGETARIANISM

NÊN:

1. không giết động vật > nhân đạo

2. giúp tránh nhiều bệnh liên quan tới dinh dưỡng (béo, tiểu đường, huyết áp)

Hại:

1. chế độ ăn không cân bằng > suy dinh dưỡng, ảnh hưởng sk

2. mất văn hóa > thịt có ở trong nhiều món ăn truyền thống

Opinion:

1. tùy từng người

ZOOS

Lợi:

1. bảo tồn các loài động vật quý hiếm

2. giúp các nhà khoa học nghiên cứu hành vi của động vật tốt hơn, giúp trẻ hiểu biết hơn về thiên nhiên hoang dã

Hại:

1. động vật bị nuôi nhốt trong môi trường giả, ko thật > mất bản năng

2. môi trường nuôi nhốt rất brutal

Opinion:

1. chúng ta ko có quyền kiểm soát động vật cũng như thiên nhiên > ko nuôi nhốt

CITIES

Lợi:

1. nhiều cơ hội việc làm > cải thiện cl csong

2. cơ sở vật chất tốt hơn, dịch vụ tốt hơn > y tết, gd

Hại:

1. nhịp sống nhanh > con ng dễ stress

2. ô nhiễm không khí, âm thanh > sức khỏe (take a physical toll on)

3. chi phí đắt > khoảng cách giàu nghèo lớn

Opinion:

1. lựa chọn tùy vào hoàn cảnh công việc, đk kinh tế, và sở thích mỗi người

PEDESTRIAN AREAS

NÊN:

1. giảm lượng ô tô > giảm ô nhiễm không khí

2. giảm phương tiện cá nhân > giảm tắc đường

3. khuyến khích ngta đi bộ > lối sống khỏe mạnh hơn

KHÔNG:

1. ảnh hưởng đến kinh tế, logistic industry

2. không làm thay đổi hành vi tham gia giao thông của những người cần

Opinion:

1. tùy thuộc vào cơ sở hạ tầng của từng nước

2. tùy vào điều kiện kinh tế của từng nước

CRIME

CAUSE:

1. trình độ học vấn thấp > ko hiểu biết pháp luật

2. bạn bè lôi kéo

3. ko có kĩ năng kiểm soát cảm xúc và hành vi

4. kinh tế: đói nghèo

SOLUTION:

1. nhà nc đầu tư vào giáo dục, đưa môn về đạo đức và luật vào nhà trường

2. bố mẹ giám sát

3. bố mẹ làm gương, dạy con kiểm soát cảm xúc tốt

4. chính phủ phải đầu tư cải thiện tình hình kinh tế

Opinion:

1. kiểm soát

2. có hại > cấm

DEATH PENALTY/ IMPRISON JUVENILE DELINQUENTS

NÊN:

1. giữ công bằng cho hệ thống luật pháp

2. răn đe các tội phạm khác

Hại:

1. cho cơ hội repent (ăn năn) + sth và revamp (sửa) + sth

2. biological standpoint: quan điểm sinh học chứng minh là tuổi teen chưa phát triển hết vùng thùy trc bộ não > teen ko phải chịu trách nhiệm về hành vi bột phát

Opinion:

1. giáo dục/ chữa bệnh
2. bố mẹ kiểm soát và làm gương

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1. Khi viết câu, ý chính cần đẩy ra đầu và cuối. Không giấu ý chính vào giữa.
2. Khi sử dụng preference words cần dùng kèm synonym của cụm refered trước đó.

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1. Nhiều người học tiếng Pháp hơn: French is more popular/prevalent/dominant among sb
2. Nhìn chung số học sinh học ngôn ngữ thứ 2 đều tăng, tuy nhiên 2 xu hướng nổi trội nhất là tiếng Trung sau một thập kỷ đang trở nên phổ biến hơn, và tiếng ngược lại là tiếng nhật không trội nữa.

the number of second language learners increased lightly -> more people are interested in learning a second language other than their mother tongue, with the highest rate of increase being observed in Chinese learners rivaling Japanese which is falling out of favor.

3. Khi đồ thị có đoạn fluctuate xuyên suốt cả thời gian (có dạng lên xuống) -> with time, French could still remain its dominance among all the language suggested although the preference for this number one language has not always been stabled.

4. Khi chuyển phân tích sang xu hướng mới (kể cả xu hướng giống hay khác) đều cần TỪ NỐI: on the reverse, repeating similar pattern, a reverse trend was observed in

5. Câu đầu tiên của mỗi đoạn phải đưa ra logic với outline sắp trình bày

Cùng thu được số người học nhiều hơn, tiếng Trung vốn bắt đầu ở mức thấp nhất (thu hút ít học viên nhất), với chỉ gần 5%. Kể từ sau 2010, đã tăng vọt trở thành ngôn ngữ thịnh hành thứ 4 chỉ sau tiếng Nhật. Tương tự, các thứ tiếng khác cũng dần được chuộng hơn. Tuy nhiên trong một năm trở lại đây, thị yếu dành cho chúng đã mờ nhạt hơn so với ngôn ngữ trên. Một điều đấn ngạc nhiên là dù những năm 2006 ghi nhận một lượng đáng kể người học tiếng Đức, ngôn ngữ này hiện không còn được chuộng nữa, giảm xuống gần một nửa (mất gần nửa số học viên).

In tandem with this expansion of learners, Chinese historically least attractive (no more than 5% of followers in 2004), has risen at an unprecedented rate after 2010 to become the fourth-ranked second language, just behind Japanese. Similarly, other languages became more appealing to multilingual yet gained less favor in the last year of the period. It is notable that although the year of 2006 has reported a considerable number of speakers of German, this language gradually lost its appeal, losing half of the students after .. years.

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TASK 1: CHANGES IN THE SALES OF MUSICAL INSTRUMENTS IN THE UK FROM 2008 TO THE PRESENT AND GIVES PREDICTIONS FOR FUTURE SALES.
The given line graph compares the consumption of musical implements in the United Kingdom for the years 2008 to 2021.

Overall, it is apparent that consumers' attitudes toward buying musical instruments have changed throughout the period.

TASK 2: IT IS GENERALLY BELIEVED THAT SOME PEOPLE ARE BORN WITH CERTAIN TALENTS. HOWEVER, IT IS CLAIMED THAT ANY CHILD CAN BE TAUGHT TO BECOME A GOOD SPORTS PERSON OR MUSICIAN.

>> The dispute over whether or not a great athlete or musician is born with specific abilities has raged on for decades. However, some individuals believe that only through practice and training can one compete in the sport and music field. This essay will discuss both points of view before expressing my opinion.

On the one hand, many people assume that only prodigies in sports and music will become sportsmen and musicians. Sport and music are said to be a unique sector with specific standards that only true geniuses in this field can meet. For artists, these qualities might include imagination, and for athletes, an intrinsically flexible physique. This is true in certain circumstances, such as with the great composer Mozart, who was born to a musician and composed his first piece of music at the age of five. His skill is thought to have been formed by the artistic attitude he acquired from his father and his early success as a composer. It is therefore understandable why this viewpoint has garnered support.

Many others, on the other hand, believe that youngsters may well be trained to be good sportsmen and musicians. This might be the remnants of an old adage: practice makes perfect. With the aid of developed facilities, it is might be possible to trained individuals to satisfy the demands of these areas. There exist numerous cases where people who have let their born talents go to waste due to the lack of practice and consolidation. Perhaps being born with gifts is like keeping slightly ahead of the starting line, but getting to the end of the race requires uncountable effort and repeated practice.

In conclusion, I am a firm believer that both geniuses and ordinary children require instruction and practice in order to become good athletes or musicians. Training has never been easier, especially in the era of innovation.

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COMMENTS ON LINE GRAPH HW 17/1 (20/1/22)

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COMMENTS ON LINE GRAPH HW 17/1 (20/1/22)

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1. Không ôm số liệu, mỗi đoạn 3-6 số liệu là vừa
2. Câu topic sentence của đoạn luôn phải gọi ra logic
3. Câu topic sentence đoạn 2 phải nối logic của đoạn trước.
4. Câu đầu mỗi đoạn nên tả fact
5. Số liệu cần được trích dẫn bằng nhiều cách khác nhau. Được ngăn bởi dấu phẩy, trước số liệu cần có attitude
6. Các số liệu phải tương quan với nhau
7. Lingua franca: ngôn ngữ được dùng chung trên cả thế giới
8. Language dominance = language enjoys an all time language supremacy
- set out to be the most/least
- ending the period at somewhere around ...%

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In a world where housing has become one of the most important duties for all governments as a result of the ever-increasing population, the concern impacts on the environment have also been equally vital.

It is undeniable that along with the great growth of the population is the growth of the demand for housing accommodation, which is one of the primary results in house shortage. With the current rate of population expansion, the quantity of available land for housing construction will undoubtedly be depleted in a short period of time. Unoccupied land, on the other hand, was not only utilized to build residences, but also for other municipal infrastructure. This has yet to even take into account factors such as cases of living alone or having multiple housing ownerships.

In order to make profits, lots of stakeholders have neglected the harm of exploitation and deforestation to make room for construction. This has indeed created detrimental effects on the environment, as well as the ecosystem. After witnessing the Earth deteriorate every day, one significant solution has been embarked on in many countries is increasing the height of buildings. Apart from providing a larger amount of residences, skyscrapers could possibly decrease the building footprints of houses and the remnants of environmental damages.

In conclusion, finding the perfect way to minimize environmental destruction while increasing housing is a problem to which there is no simple solution. Even though many governments are currently seeking betterment, I strongly believe that each individual should first be aware of the situation in order to prevent wrongdoings.

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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of New Zealand elementary school learners who were learning a second language for the years 2006 to 2014.

Overall, it is apparent that schoolchildren's attitudes on learning many languages have changed throughout the period. Even in 2006, certain languages that were similarly popular had a shift in demand by 2014.

In 2006, the most preferable language among New Zealand primary scholars was French (29%), just ahead of Japanese at 28%. After some fluctuations, the French language was still able to maintain at the top of students' learning list at around the same percentage in 2014. However, it seemed that Japanese experienced a great loss in the number of learners over the period, plummeting to only 17% in 2014. Spanish then replaced Japanese to be the second most common language with approximately 23%.

German and Chinese were the two least favored languages among second-language learners. Primary students who take Chinese as a second language kicked off being the least commonly learned language with just under 5%, then grow at a great pace to reach approximately 12% in 2014.  Meanwhile, the number of students who chose German as their second language, started with only 12%, steadily decrease to around 6% in 2014. The term "other languages" refers to a variety of languages that were not specified. These were only 7% popular in 2006, but they rose in popularity over the period, reaching 9% in 2014 after spiking in the previous year.

Word count: 244

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1. Vocab
- learners, the language acquired, acquisition of, .... is most popular/most favored among ... learners
- students of French, students enrolling in French courses
Overall = cuối - đầu
Chia đoạn:
- TĂNG - GIỮ NGUYÊN
- GIẢM
SAU PHẢI TƯƠNG QUAN VỚI TRƯỚC
CÂU ĐẦU ĐOẠN: fact, logic
Câu cuối: đáng chú ý

TOPIC: Housing/accommodation for residents > 2 issues being called into questions: homelessness; land resources in urban areas (megacities)
Scant/limited: ít
Financial security
Residential security
Aid kit
Provide relief for them

Built more apartment complex
Attached to this
City planning
infrastructures connecting in-city amenities

1. Idea progression
2. Attitude: stance and engagement
3. Correlation (tính tuyến tính)
4. Logic idea: chung - riêng, dù - nhưng

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1. Vocab:
- shopping pattern, buying pattern, buying habit, consumer preference, high on the shopping list, sthg is popular, sth is prevalent among...
- product, item, good, gadget, appliance, white good (máy giặt, điều hòa, vi sóng, tủ lạnh,...)
- sự khác biệt về sở thích tiêu dùng: consumer habit by gender
- men put sthg high on their shopping agenda
- the gadget that attracts a little female

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MỞ: TÊN ĐỒ THỊ: ko chọn từ khác với mở bài > dùng word form khác của nó

- The provided line graph shows the comparison between the emission of carbon deposition CHECK MEANING between IN different sectors of the UK.
- Overall, it can be seen from the chart that acid rain emissions in the UK were losing their impacts over the period with the most noticeable change being in utility supply.

BODY:
- chọn số liệu: đầu, diễn biến chính giữa, cuối
- khi tả số liệu cần: - có adv quan điểm trc số để thể hiện cao/ thấp - có so sánh giữa các số liệu với nhau.
- câu đầu, cuối đoạn > fact

While emissions by electricity, gas and water supply started with 3.3 million tons, responsible for the largest amount of a.r.e. among the given sectors.. attitude ..., the transport and communication sector began with left the lowest impact on/ has the least bearing on a.r.e. level, just above 0.5 million tonnes. Utility supplies, on the other hand, seemed to have dropped substantially during the next 13 years, to less than 1 million tonnes, with transportation and communication following the same metric. After 2003, both transportation and utility sections decreased, measuring respectively 0.8 million tonnes and 0.5 million tonnes in 2007.

Kicked kicking off with 2.1 million tonnes in 1991, other industriesnhầm đối tượng miêu tả remained stable for the next 3 years before witnessing a gradual decrease to 1.2 million tonnes in 2007. Domestic industry followed the same pattern with approximately 0.5 million tonnes in the first year and then remained unchanged until underwent a moderately declined several years later.

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Đề bài: Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

>> The dispute over the existence of other extraterrestrial life apart from Earth has raged on for decades. According to one group of scientists, communications should be transmitted to such aliens in order to establish their existence. However, the other camp expresses concerns about attracting the attention of alien civilizations. I will delve into both views in this essay.

Scientists believe that humanity has only scratched the surface of what is still to be explored out there, and we may know little to nothing up to this point in time about how the universe really works. In order for humanity to evolve in the long term, it is necessary for individuals to start putting their place in the universe into perspective. In the pure spirit of exploration, astrobiologists seek to explore space for advanced life forms that may be valuable to mankind in the future.

However, we had no idea whether being able to communicate with another living being would truly benefit humanity or lead to the destruction of the Earth. Certainly, it is possible for aliens to become hostile since there is no universal policy that has been written and implemented in the solar system. However, people will no longer have to put their minds to countless mind-aching questions regarding scientific and outer space exploration if humans can actually communicate with aliens.

In conclusion, while there is room for valid arguments on both sides, scientists should conduct broad consultations with different groups to gather views from different angles. I strongly believe that until humanity has the ability to fully defense the Earth, we should isolate ourselves from outer space.

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The dispute over whether or not governments should be invested national budgets in space exploration has raged on for decades. Despite some repercussions of this, I strongly believe that the values attached to it regarding resources and knowledge are more desirable.

Many advocate the opinion that even though space exploration may seem needless and unnecessary given the humanitarian problems Earth is facing in this current moment; however có even though rồi, it has been pointed out that humans should simply put their place in the universe into perspective in order to evolve in the long-term. Indeed, scientists believe that humanity has only scratched the surface of what is still to explore out there and we may know little to nothing up to this point in time about how the universe really works. There is so much that is remained unknown about the world, and space exploration is the primary key to finding out more about humanity as well as the universe.

A significant benefit of space exploration is that it allows mankind to tap into more resources in space, which would definitely be beneficial for the whole world in general. Scientists have proven that the world's fossil resources would, sooner or later, be depleted and, eventually scarce. Be that as, in order to continue to progress as a species and develop hi-tech devices forward, the additional resources that can be extracted from asteroids are crucial in this regard. Apart from the aforementioned merit, with at least 200 billion galaxies in infinity, many scientists believe that there must be intelligent life, which also can be referred to as extraterrestrial life, elsewhere out of space. Humans might, however, be able to increase the opportunity of communicating with other species' life forms by traveling into space.

In conclusion, I am a firm believer of the opinion that further space exploration would bring many advantages for humanity on both micro and macro level. Not only did spending money to advocate space discovery provide answers to the many questions we have surrounding our existence, but also challenge the boundaries of what is known about the world we live in

Word count: 350.

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The provided bar chart compares the implements MEANING purchased by Britain males and females CÓ NHIỀU NGƯỜI CHÂU Á Ở ANH in 2013.

sự khác biệt lớn về thói quen mua sắm giữa hai giới:
Overall, there is a large disparity in buying tendencies/ preferences between genders:  gender disparity in equipment purchases: women tend to buy security and household appliances, whilst recreational modern conveniences are more popular among men-buyers.

Females The number of security cameras purchased by females headed the list
headed the list with 90%, which was almost four times more likely than males to prioritize security cameras on their shopping lists, with just 25%. Programmable thermostats and wireless home security both ranked second on the list with 60% of women purchasing them. Meanwhile, the number of men buying these two products was approximately two-thirds that of women. At the same time, the gap for the programmable vacuum was a little narrower.

80% of the male genders reported purchasing modern audio systems, which was also the most popular item among male customers. Next came the number of men who afforded energy management systems and home movie theatres AT justgrammar respectively  10% and 30%,   higher compared to the women who decided to afford this. The least favorable gadget was the outdoor speaker system, with 40% men and 20% women buying this.

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Đề bài: Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree

>> The dispute over the repercussions of plastic bags on the environment has raged on for decades. Many people advocate the viewpoint of prohibiting plastic usage, however, I am of the opinion that there exists no other replacement material that can be rival in the mentioned qualities. rival (v)

Decomposition is undoubtedly one of the most damaging aspects of nylon bags. There is only a small amount of plastic bags that are actually being reprocessed due to the undeveloped 3R recycling system (Reduce-Recycle-Reuse).  A single plastic bag, in fact, might take anywhere from 10 to 20 years to disintegrate. When plastic bags degrade, harmful compounds are discharged into the soil as well as the air, affecting not just human life but also the ecology. Taking a study from 2003 carried out by Oxford University as an example, it is reported that 67% of marine deaths are caused by suffocation by polythene bags.
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Even though nylon bags have a variety of negative consequences on the nghĩa environment as a whole, there appears to be no alternative material that can completely replace plastic. Scientists have embarked on creating more environmentally-friendly materials such as bamboo fiber, organic cotton. However, due to the cost-effectiveness and efficiency of plastic, a third of the stakeholders have no plans to enhance their usage of recycled plastic, and none are intending to utilize it entirely in their worldwide production. Households are also more inclined to use nylon bags since they can be reused numerous times, saving the users a lot of money.

However, due to the cost-effectiveness and efficiency of plastic, a third of the stakeholders have no plans to enhance their usage of recycled plastic, and none are intending to utilize it entirely in their worldwide production
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In conclusion, I am a firm believer in the opinion that forbidding plastic shopping bags might pose an economic risk that would be much more to be concerned about. Rather than preventing individuals from using plastic, environmental regulators should embark on how to enhance the recycling system so that it would meet up the massive needs of nylon consumers.

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1. Mở tốt cần nêu influence và mạch sắp phát triển trong thân bài

VD: Ngày nay người hiện đại thường ngủ ít hơn hẳn, thậm chí là hiện tại hiện tượng thiếu ngủ càng ngày càng tăng. Nhiều người quy điều này là do lối sống cập rập và sức khỏe tinh thần đáng báo động. Bài luận sau sẽ phân tích những nguyên nhân và sự ảnh hưởng của việc thiếu ngủ.

2. Bài hỏi quan điểm bản thân bắt buộc phải có dấu hiệu ý của bản thân thể hiện ở: hedges, booster, attitude markers.

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Bài Task 1 cũng cần thể hiện quan điểm qua những khóa từ của người viết