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I liked how she you created the video of showing the process about how you design the cloth. I also liked the amounts of information that you added on your slides, which made it clear for the readers to understand your project.

As you mentioned on the video, I think your jacket will be better if you sew the cloth instead of using the glue. I think it will be good if you create a eco-friendly cloth from the environmentally friendly material.

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What inspired you to make that jacket? The colors, patterns, etc.

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Your presentation was very detailed and interesting to watch! For instance, the improvements section was very detailed and interesting. The final video was also nicely edited, so it is very engaging.

Maybe you could reduce the number of words on each slide into notes so that it is easier for the audience to read, and so you do not read off the slides when presenting to your family.

In your PP essay, you could get more into your experience making and choosing the materials to make the final jacket product.

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I really liked your presentation overall, it was very interesting.
Something you could change to make it easier to understand could be the amount of text you put in each slide. It will bring more attention to your voice rather than solely the text.
I'd also really like to see pictures of the process, it would make following your procedure easily :)
Well done, your product looks really exciting, and I'm sure you had fun making it.

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I really enjoyed watching your video because I am also interested in fashion and I like how you made a jacket out of recycled stuff. I love the results too! I think you should use more eco friendly materials to make it more eco. But overall  I really like your project and it was very easy to understand:)

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I liked how you added lots of information in your slides which told me that you did lots of research, and wrote what you really think about this project. Maybe if you didn't make a lot of sentences on one page, it would be easier to read. I liked how you organized how you're going to finalize your work!

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i think it was really creative that you chose to make a jacket for your project. it was interesting and I like the final outcome. Your slides were well done and had good information and reasoning. - j

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i think it was really creative that you chose to make a jacket for your project. it was interesting and I like the final outcome. Your slides were well done and had good information and reasoning. - j

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Hello! I really enjoyed the aesthetics of the presentation. I like how you were very descriptive. I think some feedback is to have less text on the presentation. Overall great! i liked the music in the video!

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I found making jackets with students in the past was a really difficult project to complete for the first time with little knowledge about working with textiles. Your final product looked great. Well done!

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I found making jackets with students in the past was a really difficult project to complete for the first time with little knowledge about working with textiles. Your final product looked great. Well done!

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I think the way you combined the different fabrics/patterns was cool. I think you could write the words in bullet point form because there were a lot of words on the slides, which made it hard to understand.

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it really look good . i liked how you write so much. it's so detail and easy to underestand desu. i liked the video which you were recording while you were making your jacket dayo. i undrestood how you made your jacket. it really cool dakara you should wear it at school desu;]

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The final outcome looked very good and you has a very clear informative video that was very easy to understand. The aesthetic was pretty and I really enjoyed the video because I am also very into fashion.

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I liked how you took the fact that your passion for fast fashion was very harmful and took action to counter your negative impacts on the environment.

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I liked how you took the fact that your passion for fast fashion was very harmful and took action to counter your negative impacts on the environment.

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Julia, this is a very cool project!
You are very clear and it is easy to follow.
You set out your ATL's well
Very cool to see the journey into the product video.
Ms. Tudge