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Reason and evidence is spot on!

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I like how she had good evidence.
A good start.

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He had a really good start.

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I like how she had clear reason.Nice of that!

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I like how he made the reader think he had a strong opinion

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I like how you gave so many examples and started off with a strong reason!

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I like how you included your feelings about chocolate milk as well as so many facts. It was very convincing.

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Kevin

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I like how she well it sounded like she was REALLY expressing her self so they can get convinced-yaretzi

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I like how henry said what research has shown -Yaretzi

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Your evidence really supports your claim and reasons. I like how you included so many exact facts.

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I like how Yaretzi used really convincing, powerful words to help the reader understand that this is a big deal to her.

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Teonie had SO MUCH evidence! I like how she put the evidence into her own words and gave personal examples.

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I really liked how Aliem made the letter sound like he was talking. He included facts and personal opinions.

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clear sentences

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Everybody had good evidence

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i like how he talked about how it can effect your health

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i like how Jared kept putting like cancer and if he did it's because it's important and kids don't want cancer

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I like how Jared included facts and his own opinions. Like he would say a fact and then "I think..." This makes it more personal.

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I like how Journie had so many facts in her letter.

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had good reasons

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i like that Thanh had a good amount of evidence and he summed it up in a great way that's understandable, i also like that its short and easy.

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saying out her feelings

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I like the way Thanh kept it short and sweet. He had plenty of evidence, and it was easy to read and understand.

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i like how she has a lot of information

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i like the way Jazzy write her body paragraph and she got alots evidence on each paragraph

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Layla added her own opinions and ideas to the evidence, and this made the letter more personal.

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i like how Kim put where she found that information like it did in should there be zoos

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giving reasons

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i like the way Sarah was worried and kinda talking to the reader

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I like the way Sarah writes with her voice. I can picture having a conversation with her when I read her writing.

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Jazzy had a ton of evidence to support her reasons. She also used transition words well to bring the evidence back to the claim.

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I notice jazzy added lots of evidence in her letter - Teonie

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kim did good on punctuation