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First paragraph i was told from my peer editor everything els good

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In my author essay, the areas where I need help the most is in my conclusion

connecting to the larger world. Another area is the body paragraphs with the conclusion sentences

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I need help with leading into my quotes in the three body paragraphs. Also what to add in my comclusion.

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I need help with fixing my thesis statement and adding a few conclusion sentences.

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I need help writing my conclusion. I actually did not include one in my essay so I need to ad one but I cant figure out what to say.

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I need help with my introduction and first body paragraph

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i need more help on writing my citations and where put them .

i also think i need to be more carefully with run ons

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i dont have any good facts about her. and its hard to get history and stuff anout her since she is a modern day writer

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i dont have any good facts about her. and its hard to get history and stuff anout her since she is a modern day writer

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meagan

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i need help with parenthetical citations

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I need help with the citations and end of my conclusion

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i need help with my transitions and adding quotes and also transitioning to the next paragraph. my concluding statement i dont know what to rightabout

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I don't have any transition words in my essay. I don't really know how

to use them in this kind of writing.

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My body paragraph s don't end with good conclusions.

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i have to add in more information

into my paper

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Create your own text box/sticky note. Within your note, tell me your name and where you need the most help on your paper. Example:

Betsy Sue I need help with my conclusion. I don't know what else to write in addition to my restated thesis.