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you need to speak with intonation but your pronunciation es good. you use the grammar in 4 sentences whit adjective clauses in special with who. furthermore you answer the questions about where is the festival etc.
pay atention in the pronunciation in event .

Good job and interesting video.

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It is an amazing video, yo used perfect the grammar of the unit, with the four sentences with adjective clauses.
You spoke slow in the video, but it was good because you sound natural and fresh.
Good work Cristian

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Feedback

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https://youtu.be/qPot0GECtDw

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https://youtu.be/ZlhgRW_Ps6A

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OUTLINE

open wounds on the skin

the problem of open wounds on the skin

care and cleaning of open wounds on the skin

anecdote of my grandmother about an open wound in the skin on her foot

conclusion, how happy a person can be when taking good care of wounds or skin care