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What worked well and why?
In my performance, I felt that the gameshow worked well having had it from the beginning me and my class develop it along the way from it being just bland and long to it being entertaining and comical. The way we develop is by first speeding things up so it allows things not to drag out then adding an intro song which allowed me run out and dance a little which brought the funny factor out. In addition, my overall verdict for the performance was that everyone put 150% percent in their pieces and wowed the audience.

What required refining?
I feel there weren't anything from the actually performance to refine but I would have been worried before about the scene "question 2" the transitioning part I would have worked they a bit more. Also when the contestants come up to answer their questions with "stupid" answers having them have one line they say all the time not always going off improve because it got confusing for e as the host

What needed to be done to improve the piece and how?
if I had a chance to do it again I would keep everything I have now but I would add for example I wanted to increase the timing of the performance because I personally thought it wasn't long enough but the audience reacted well so felt it worked in a way with the short time. in addition I would have loved the fact of audience interaction into an performance which would have spiced up things. moreover adding a Wiglaf extra scene would have the given audience a better understanding and indept understanding of Beowulf.

What you would grade yourself and why?
I would grade myself a MERT+ because I made a whole scene by myself which was the Game show and also played the drum which was crucial to the scene where Grendel was killing everyone. in addition I played so additional roles as well which I feel could boost my grade for example servant to king Hrothgar also a close person to Beowulf at his funeral who praises him about how he was before he died.

What others said to you during rehearsals and after the performance?
The review from the performance is that it was a very high energized and funny performance also they loved the way I linked the three serial killers and presented in a good well.in addition they were hysterically laughing at my dancing for the intro. they felt was it all-round success.

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My PowerPoint Slide with info of the serial killers 

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My PowerPoint Slide with info of the serial killers 

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cgrath in my performance the planning was essential to me making & building the pieces we had performed to the audience.
So number 1 how we staged, it was an arena type stage with the audience all round us and we wanted that because it help us as actor so we never had our backs to the audience ever. also it we with the transitioning from one scene to another with the exits and entrances.
Number 2 the main acting technique  used during the scene i created was Subversion, subversion is when you take a situation and subvert (change) a situation into a complete different one e.g. that was what i did by me taking a hostile situation of serial killer which we are facing right an subvert it into a funny gameshow where people we relating the serial killers so memeber from kid cartoon sensation Simpson.
Number 3 the additional help that i got from the level 2 students was immence because our class only has 5 people and the level 2 literally filled in the gaps which were needed to be filled with because we down with number.
Number 4  the difficulties were minor but were still problem, for example as the person making the scenei felt that it was my resposibility to create the show how i like it to be but when we lost communication and started to clash becuase we coouldn't put aside our ego's and work together. but after some time we came an realised we were acting childish and started working properly as group.

Meeting with Niail McGrath
our meeting with Niail McGrath was a day before the performance which was to sort out all the lighting & multimedia's we were going to need for the performance. so once he came in we all started from me stating what type of lightning and multimedia we needed and when we were going to need it so we he could que it down so he could put it on his personal running order of our show and he gave some suggestions how may thing turn out then that

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The main Scene I had to develop was the game scene also the scene I gave the king the crown.

So the gameshow needed development because when it finally ready after scripting it and started the rehearsal process some of the feedback we got was that it drag and also it needed to link to the murders of grendel and his mother by Beowulf.

then the king scene needed a minor adjustment because the I was coming into the scene wasn't right also direction I was standing once I entered the scene was wrong so my teacher helped with that which was good.

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The News Scene  after Grendel's and his mother were killed. the reason why it was discarded because it never really made sense because they  already had one scene like it at the beginning.
my dancing/comedic scene with Laura. the reason why this scene was discarded is because it would have been too hard to participate in that whilst also having to run an drum in the following part of the scene.

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There will be three serial killer on a PowerPoint 

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There will be three serial killer on a PowerPoint 

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                                            My Version of Beowulf 

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                                            My Version of Beowulf 

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• Beowulf- POLICE/ chief inspector
• Grendel – serial killer (serial killer)
• Grendel mother- ultimate protector
• King Hrothgar – commissioner
• Dragon- Boko haram (Beowulf killer)
• Wiglaf – police office

As a young man, Dickson living in the 20th century, where crime was only seen around you but never near your until this crazy Saturday night. So as he dress up for a night on the limb with a couple of officer friends and even his best friend the chief inspector, he started to feel these crazy thoughts in his mind telling him to stay at home.
He shook the thoughts off as any officer would do and headed to club 97. Everything was running smoothly until about 2 hours into the partying, as everyone danced their hearts out, a sudden black-out erupted. Everyone started running shouting “what the f*ck just happened” then something starting to making weird noses which was causing civilians distress. As the noise continued, a bright light started to appear like the sun when the day is dawning.
Then suddenly slash, squirt the blood of the first few civilians splattered in their faces as the serial killer Saddam Hussein strikes and takes out his first few victims, in addition as everyone started to scream and shout in panic Dickson and the rest friends grab a handful of people and guide them to the exit door whilst Saddam Hussein continue to kill which made it 21 kills. as Dickson reaches outside setting the people free he calls for back-up and ask them to bring lethal weapons but as where the lights of the club had been turned on it was some very graphical scenes; heads cut off, scratches, deep wounds etc. it looked like a scene out of the movie slither, Saddam Hussein disappeared into thin air and the ambulance came, everyone went home safely and that was the end of the night.
The morning after the diasterious night before Dickson walk into police station looking disappointed as hell because of what happen yesterday, as he walked in the commissioner says” they have gone to my home Dickson, they wrote on the walls and all sorts, THEY MUST BE STOPPED” this channelled in Dickson head and he was determined to get down Saddam Hussein which is causing harm to south east London. Moreover, a full week of proceedings at the station went by and nothing has brought Dickson and the rest of the officers closer to catching the offender until Friday this Friday started off as a normal Friday but they were called to a festival near the commissioners 2million pound apartment where the locals were calling him saying there were shouting, and people running in despair around the place. They get to the area then the war starts guns and bombs are starting to be throne different directions in attempts to the oppositions, now bullets are flying until Beowulf aims and finally get Saddam Hussein in a pinnacle part of his arm which instantly makes him shout and runs to safety after they make sure the area is clear and safe it was time for everyone to head home after a successful day of catching the perpetrator Saddam Hussein.
the day after 12.00pm word around town is that the serial killer is coming back for vengeance today with a bigger army and even said to be bringing his mother Subha Tulfah al-Mussallat which is raging with anger and wanting to see blood. Moreover 2.00 arrived and it seemed that the serial killer and his allies were ready to attack with full strength and they targeted a train station in Camberwell where plenty of civilians were taking their local trains, so they strike start to killer the first with some have knives; some have guns; others were throwing smoke bombs also hand grenades which as being thrown it literally tore down the train station as people try to run to safety.
Although all this was happening Dickson and the rest of the police officer knew their main target which is Saddam Hussein and supposedly furious crazy mother, they charge everyone spits up Dickson focuses on chasing down Hussein, we starts bullets start flying in opposite directions also smoke grade trying to blur Dickson views but he moves out the way swiftly then POW,POW ,POW three bullet hit him one to his main skull, the other one totally ripped off already wounded arm and the last one finalised the murder of saddam Hussein so as he checks if actually dead then we hear a load women voice screaming “ohhhh noooo they have killed my only son as she splurged out and started crying” so she started to charge ahead of us and it seems that she was wearing a type of bullet proofing because every shot we had let go at her she would just brushing the bullets away like a demon but as Dickson swapped a m15 for a riffle which had multiply bullets with better aiming, once he gets this he aims straight for her neck because that is the only uncovered area of the body which could cause major harm to Hussein mother if not death, after 5 shoots to the neck his mother was laid flat out like a pancake with chocolate chip in them.
As Dickson confirms the dead of Saddam Hussein mother, everyone celebrates as the war is won between the two sides and once everything is cleared up everyone head home after a tiresome day of policing. The day after Dickson wakes up very in an eventful mood after knowing he and the rest of the police team single handle destroyed the opposition, so as he walked in expecting a normal day of work he was bombarded by his staff member as everyone joyed after another completed mission and it didn’t end here because the police force was invited to Buckingham palace for a celebrate and be awarded for their brave acquisitions. So, as we all lined up Dickson is told to head to the back because he would be getting a bigger reward compared to the other officers, so he waked up then she gave him a piece of gold crafted plate with a hand shake the told him to kneel so he can be knighted and be made in to a member of the most excellent order of British empire.
20 years later….
Dickson 57, now having retired for 15 years and had settled with his family of four with two boys Roland, Josiah and a daughter Jessica with his Cuban wife Maria, he lived in Dulwich a quite posh area compared to Peckham where he lived all those years back but was able to financially live their comfortably because all the years he served his trade in the police force. In addition, he was not ready for Friday evening at all, so a Dickson got really for his weekday evening regime of tea and biscuits while corrie is on the telly but his plans were changed when new claimed there were a large Islamic state terrorist group boko haram outside Sainsbury killing, terrorising, and kidnapping kid from their parents with it also the calming the police can’t control because it is getting brutal.
So as Dickson hears of this news he suddenly thinks he is a hero and attempts to get his old uniform from his closets his wife stops him and says “what are you doing, it isn’t up to you no more you’re an old man do go out an injure urself” so after 12 minutes of persuading he leaves to the rush to the crime screen, not unknowing this challenge may be a tad be out of his range but Dickson still felt obliged so he got their and it seem they were waiting for him as they circled him but he thought he was smart and he tried to use his mixed martial skills until he caught a stiff one to right jaw and that was the last time we saw of Dickson because they stamped him and strangled a him to death as his hand stretched out pleading for mercy, eventually the boko haram were caught and they had this message about Dickson death “he thought he was superior to death so we showed him he isn’t”.
Saturday 22nd 2044 12:30, Dickson Walter junior (MBE) funeral as everyone teared and wept the death of Dickson, everyone got up to say their two-cents of what kind of man Dickson was which touched everyone, then they put the gold plate he received from the queen and closed his casket for him to be buried because they believe he will come back in the afterlife and use. plus, show it off. The all lived on with memory what a nice family man Dickson was and now he’s been laid to rest.
The End.

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It will start with a blackout as I lean over the table then the lights come up as I stand straight and begin to talk.
Femi: Hello guy’s welcome to my game show called spot the serial killers, where the winner will have a chance of winning a bar of chocolate and I’m not talking about me so don’t get your hopes up. Now to contenders that we have got today.
Contestant number 1 stands up stormzy (William) gets up as the crowd clap for him.
Contestant number 2 stands up drake (Monel) gets up as the crowd clap for him.
Contestant number 3 stands up Anthony Joshua (Joffe) gets up as the crown clap for him.
So now that contestants have been introduced and I feel I don’t need blabber about the instruction everyone already knows. Because all it is that I will ask the question if you think you know the answers then run up as tap this buzzer and give your answer.so
Question number 1; what comes to mind when you think of a serial killer?
William answer to this question “is it someone who eats a lot of cereal”
I reply “no you idiot go a sit down.”
Anthony Joshua gets up to answer an says “is it someone tear down breakfast”
I replied to him sayin “that’s the exact thing blacko just said were you even listening
Then mukb comes an says “it’s someone which killed a vast amount of innocent people for no apparent motives”
Femi: I then congratulated him for getting the first question right.  Now Question 2 these 3 names & these 3 pictures, what come to mind when you look at them like what really stems in your brains???? Number 1 the Zodiac Killer/ Number 2 Ahmed Suradji/ Number 3 Luis Garavito make sure you think before you answer
William: I swear Luis Garavito use to play for arsenal where in one season he scored 30 goals and 20 assist he was hella banging. (I reply to the answer by saying no you idiot that’s Luis Reyes)
Joffe: I swear Ahmed Suradji is that guy from Simpsons where he has a family with a shop an that. (I reply to this answer telling him to get out of here if you only knew)
Monel: I swear that the zodiac killer is the surname of the CEO of zodiac battery company (I reply to this by saying you idiot batter bloody battery’s if you only knew)
Then I reveal on the PowerPoint slide a summary what they had done and how many people they’ve killed.
Femi: Now Question 3 this one isn’t just for the contestants, this is also for our audience members as well so Beowulf killed Grendel and Grendel’s mother does make him a murderer or is ok because it came with good intentions. I want you too really think. Should you be allowed to remove some from earth when you are no the creator of them.
I’m going to end with that today, thanks everyone for watching my game hope you come back.
Monel starts complaining about the prize.
Then I throw it to three of them.
Once I get to position I started on leaning on the table is time for the blackout and scene is over.

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the sainsburys where the last scene happens

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this is the area beowulf is placed at.

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Dickson Family

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police officers

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fake blood would be useful to show blood being slathered 

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fake blood would be useful to show blood being slathered 

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This is videos of the way I want the scene of Beowulf being jumped 

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This is videos of the way I want the scene of Beowulf being jumped 

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuTVgzh4E7k

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In my story these are the people who will killed beowulf,.

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the club where the first scene is happening

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https://www.thoughtco.com/top-crimes-of-saddam-hussein-1779933

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image of someone head being blown off