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When I got home, my mom started whipping me with my dads belt! "OUCH!" I told my mom!

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I heard my mom shout "come back!"

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I ran out of the office and I started crying.

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I got called into the principals office and when I went in he was there sitting with my mom.

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I got caught leaving school and got into mad trouble.

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So I ran home at lunch to get my football gear.

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"Of course not I need to use my football gear," said my friend.

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I asked my friend if I could use his football gear.

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She just didn't understand that I couldn't wear a pink tux to football practice. I was so embarrassed. What was I going to do?

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"Baby I think you look so handsome", replied mom.

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"I look like an idiot," I said to my mom.

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It made me mad because I hate pink!

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She made me put
a pink tux on.

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She doesunderstand the style these days. .

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Why would I have ever let my mom pick out my school clothes for me?

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Build on them story
Keep it clean
Use proper punctuation
Use dialogue

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I was Going thru the one way hallways trying to get the principal.

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I helped Billy pick up his glasses.

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He had helped me out and I knew it was my turn to help him too.

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I asked him why he had blood on him and he said, "This huge monkey looking guy shoved me in my gym locker and broke my glasses!" "The glass scraped my arm!".

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I found some cloths and he was bloody

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I finally found Billy in the hallway "I need some clothes,"I stated.

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"Billy!" I screamed.

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I needed his help because I knew he always had extra clothes but I couldn't find billy in the hallways or his classes.

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I got talked about the first day and I was sad.

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I got made fun of because my clothe was from Goodwill .

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I was lost and I had to have Help from my friend Billy.

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I remember looking down the gigantic hallway the first morning at a new school.

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When they made it to the island where we starving and dehydrated and Billy die

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They took them to the nearest island.

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After floating for many hours Some playful dolphins came and rescued billy.

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We had been floating at sea for hours when the sharks began to circle us.

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Billy thought he wouldn't make it.

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"I can't swim". said Billy !

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We all started to swim towards the island near by.

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They all jumped off the boat!

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"We're all going to die!" Billy screamed.

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The boat shook fast as the shark attacked the boat everyone yelled out for help.

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Then a shark attacked the boat.

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I was on a boat in the middle of the ocean on a bright and sunny day.

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Then I realized my phone was water proof, "I got wet for no reason." I remembered

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After I got it out of the pool, which included a lot of people getting wet, I asked Foo if he had any rice.

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"Just jump in and get and put in some rice,"Said Foo.

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"I'm going to get in trouble if my mom finds out."

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"It problably fell in while you were talking to your girlfriend."said Jennifer.

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"Jennifer, do you know how this happened?" I exclaimed.

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I looked everywhere but I realized it was in the bottom of the pool.

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At that moment I realized my phone wasn't in my pocket.

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"I CANT HEAR YOU!"Screamed Jennifer.

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"Crazy party, right?" I shouted to my friend.

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There was at least 200 people.

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It was so lit.

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There were a whole bunch of food and drinks and people I didn't know.

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I remember the crazy time I went to my first actual house party.

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post in order
Each team must use dialogue
punctuate the dialogue the best you can
use words besides said
see how the character changes