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Work on Pg 4's Questions 1 AND 2.

Write my planned response down

Padlet submission:

1. Upload a picture of your planned response

2. Upload your recording (answering Q1 and 2) in the tab that contains your name.

Submit by T2W1.

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Record a Personal Response in the form of a 1.5 to 2-minute-long audio clip, based on the questions below.

Your Critical Response must include the following:

1. What you enjoyed about the audio text ‘Hope is Our Only Wing’

What did you like about the plot?

How did it help you understand conflict and relationships?

2. Would you recommend the audio text ‘Hope is Our Only Wing’ to other students? Why or why not?

Elaborate with explanations and provide evidence where necessary

Guiding Questions:

Was the audio clear enough?

Did you understand the story? Was the story interesting?

Did the story help you understand conflict and relationships better? Would it be useful to your friends?

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https://padlet.com/tan_wei_ling_c/sec-2na-el-podcast-submission-xb6nyaz1h6545wdg

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I felt that i need to improve my tone and not sound cringe.

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Sorry my voice sucks, I was sick yesterday😐

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Good day to you ms vani
And welcome to my podcast today’s topic is the fabulous story “hope is our only wing”
This wonderful story is about a young girl adjusting to her new school much like me in secondary one
This story shows how the main character shamiso is quite rebellious towards her teachers 
The reason for this is extremely intriguing which I why I love the plot as it describes the problems of being a adolescent adjusting to a brand new school but for shamiso this rapid change is very challenging to overcome as she went to another country as a result of family issue
This resulted in a confused child which had to adjust to the environment which is what I will be talking about today my favourite part was when she angered her teacher by challenging him by asking him about his name and when the teacher got offended and told her that he won’t forget her name “shamiso” 

It takes time to build relationships but conflicts could easily destroy years of trust much like how a Forrest (trust,bonds,relations)takes decades to grow can easily be burned down by a wildfire(conflict)
Which the story depicts excellently in detail which allowed me to understand about relationships and  conflicts very well

In the story shamiso and mr mpofu disliked each other because of the issue in the classroom when shamiso did not stand up to greet mr mpofu which caused a small conflict in the classroom even when mr mpofu gave shamiso multiple chances to stand up but she persistently refused to react even when he was walking towards her the reason she did not stand up was because she felt disrespected even though she already disrespected mr mpofu when she didn’t stand up to greet him so this hypocritical behaviour puts her in the wrong and  because although she came from another country does not mean she can disregard her own teachers as that is extremely disrespectful and despite the multiple chances that mr mpofu gave shamiso she still in the end of the small conflict decides to disrespect him even more by asking for his name in a spiteful manner which is why I would agree and understand why she was in the wrong

Alright that’s all I wanted to share today 

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So awk lol

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El podcast

Welcome back to another wounderful north brooks podcast this is me keason speaking and to day we are dicussing about the story we once talked abou, hope is our only wing

I personally found the story very interesting as i found the plot, a petty teacher face with and disrespectful transfer student quite interesting.

The story helped me understand conflicts and relationships better better as the conflict in the story helps us understand stand that to have a healthy relationship both party’s must have mutual respect

After reading this short story it has helped me build a better relationship with my friends as now we both respect each other

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Spoke clearly - loud and pronouciation is good.
Well organised points that are linked to theme.-in a way whatever said wasn’t jumping around and mixed up.

Need evidence, elaboration. Understand the audio texts bd find good points to elaborate on.
Need to talk for a bit longer and be more detailed to what what said.

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Too much noise in the back ground.
Including different evidence and elaborating it well.

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be more expressive and overall quite good ok bye

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Spoke clearly as I can hear properly

Points are organised and linked to the theme as they were not everywhere

SPEAK LOUDER

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I can’t hear you(speak louder🦶🦶)

-zhishan

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Elaborate more

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zhishan speak louder !!
- auni

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Yes…listen to me yap for 2 minutes and 37 seconds.

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Final submission

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part3 & 4

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1. Record and upload your response for ALL questions 1-4. (You may upload your scripts as well).

2. Make sure that the recording is within 2 minutes.

3. LABEL the subject as "Name_Final Podcast". e.g. Eliza_Final Podcast

4. Submit by 25 March (Monday).