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Writing commentary in a way that sounds less repetitive. I want it to flow with my writing.

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How to make commentary longer without being repetitive while still being connected.

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trying to not make it repetitive and using good transitions

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Writing the why and how for commentary. And making them clear and different.

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Knowing how to make clear and different body paragraph topics

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Writing a good thesis, and less repetitive commentary.

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i think the hardest thing for me to write is probably commentary. sometimes i feel as though it’s a bit hard to expand on specific pieces of evidence without including personal anecdotes or addressing the reader using “you” or other specific pronouns.

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not having repetitive commentary

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Shaping the commentary in a way that makes it flow smoothly, all while supporting the evidence nicely.

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how to make commentary less repetitive.

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Using correct commentary that effectively relates to the evidence and prompt.

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Commentary and how to make it not repetitive

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Commentary can be confusing for me because it can be difficult to differentiate between what is and isn’t considered commentary.

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Writing the how in my commentary

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Using sophistication and connecting the evidence to the overall point

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Line of reasoning, structure of essay

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Trying to come up with commentary that relates to the evidence and makes sense.

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how to write the why and how without sounding repetitive

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Forming and connecting strong commentary.

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Learn how to make my commentary correctly flow with my evidence

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Giving sophisticated context

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Haylee Baker
How to find and think of what to write for commentary, the how and why.

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The specifics of the rhetorical triangle (what they are exactly)

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Thesis, working on no repetition throughout.

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The difference between the Why and How in the thesis.

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using and creating commentary

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How to connect commentary to evidence.

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How to successfully differentiate the how and why of the thesis.

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How to explain the rhetorical devices, the why and how

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Putting commentary in my own words and not repeating my evidence