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To conclude opportunities to learn and enjoy school should open to all students fundraising by students can help them get along in areas. Fundraising gets students working together, as well.

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Finley fundraising gets students working together as well its helps to build the social skills that we be important to student when they grow up.

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In conclusion this is why students should raise money for school, because it says when students raise money for school, they still learn. This is why I think students should raise money for school .

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Students will learn how to work together as a team, and they can learn how to be social. After this, students might raise money for their schools, don't ever think you can't raise money for your school. That is why students should raise money for schools.

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In conclusion,I think students should not raise money for the school because if you give money to the school instead of you grade level how does it make sense cause that's your money not the schools.Students should not raise money for schools cause nobody knows what the school is gonna buy they might get something they don't need.

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In conclusion, I think students should not raise money for their schools because students should fundraise for their grade not their whole school the school system wouldn't have enough money to buy all of the schools needs

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In conclusion surveyors are more important than you think and they can make sure that buildings, skyscrapers and more but they use a machine to measure sights.

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Have you wonder who are the people on the side of the road? surveyors job is to measure distance and height for land and building. surveyors collect this information in a few different ways.

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In conclusion surveyors help builders very much. If builders didn't have surveyor's buildings would be out of place and builders would make buildings height and land would be wrong.

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In conclusion, this is why you see people on the road with the camera-like equipment. And hope you learned that these people are called surveyors and they help build with land and bulidings in are community today.

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In conclusion surveyors can measure heights and distances. If they didn't builders would build buildings to high or long. If we didn't have surveyors there would be a lot of long or high buildings around us.

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In conclusion surveyors measure land and buildings. So now you know who those people are on the side of the street are with cameras.

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Do you want to know why sea animals live in seashells let me tell you why.

They live in

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Have you ever set yourself a goal. If you haven't, I will tell you why you should, and why its important.You can set goals such as practicing reading,or getting good grades in school.Even practicing math is a goal. And I will be the one who will tell you why it's important to set yourself a goal. First setting goals is good for you. just like vegetables are .But the best things about setting goals are seeing the change. somtimes it's good and sometimes it's bad, but at least you still tried.In my opinon thats all that matters. And thats why I think setting goals are important.

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Have you ever thought about how setting goals is important? Setting goals are something that is really important to do. It is amazing to think about the goals we set and how we can reach them.

According to google.com goal setting is very important because it provides focus, direction, motivation, and much more. Direction gives you clarity, measurement helps to track your progress, and confidence builds up to use it in any moment.

Goal setting is something we all need to do more. Measurement, direction, and focus all lead up to goal setting.

Cali, I am so impressed with your writing. You are improving each time you do an essay. I am excited about your next submission.

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Why is goals important? According to google chrome goal are important because it can help you focus and to tell you what matter. so you can achieve your goals. goal help you understand what you want to achieve and create roadmap for reaching your desired out come

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Easey

Goals can be a big factor of your life. I'm going to tell you why it is a big factor.

Reason one is setting goals. The important of setting goals is chasing goals. If you set a goal, then you won't stop chasing your goal. My last reason is it is crucial According to google.com it says " provides direction, motivation, and a sense of purpose, leading to improved academic performance, and better time management.

That is why goal setting is a big factor of your life or a young child's life.

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Have you ever set a goal before? If you have not set a goal, goals are important! Goals can help you save money and stating calm.

Goals can help you by saving money. Lets say you want to save up for a ps5. That can be your goal!

Goals can also help you with calming down. According to Google goals can help you stay calm, focused, and motivation. So some people might want to set a goal.

Setting goals are a good way you can save or calm down. So now you know why setting goals are important.

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Did you know that setting goals are important? Goals are like a to do list. You can set goals any time for anything you want to set a goal for. Goals help us do things we want to get done.

Setting goals is a crucial for personal and professional success because it provides direction, focus and motivation, ultimately leading to increased achievement and a greater sense of accomplishment.

Having goals fuels your motivation and helps you stay persistent even when faced with challenges.

In conclusion setting goals are important after all.

Great job Antoine. I can see that you use what you learned to write your introduction.

Next steps: Working on adding more to your conclusion based off our lesson.

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Have you ever wondered how air, land, and water can help us? Air, land, and water are big parts of our lives. Air helps us breath, water helps us be hydrated, and land helps us walk. These are the top three things that we need to even be on earth to live. That is why we need air, land, and water to live.

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Did you know that Washington, DC has many national treasures? Washington, DC has places like the white house and famous museums. If you didn't know, the white house is where the president lives and were big docum

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Air ,land and water is important because air land helps us live and water helps the body and if you don't drank water the body would not be good and you can faint so the body need water ever hour and the air comes form trees and trees is on land and that is why air land and water is important

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Have you ever wondered if land, water and air help us survive. Land homes diverse ecosystem from forest to desert and crucial for regulating the earth climate and providing habits for species. Water covers over 70% of the earth surface and supports marine lives. Air help essential for life and includes the air we breath.

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Has anyone wondered how air, land, and water help us survive? Air, land, and water are the three most important nonliving resources to survive. If we don't those three recourses then earth wouldn't be created because without land we wouldn't be alive on earth

Knight you are off to a great start.

Next, reread to see where you can make corrections.

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The earth have land and water we have land to stay safer and we need air to breath and we need water for Hilbrand and land keep us people healthy sowed can growl food.

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Air, water, and land is important because they help us survive. Water helps animals and humans. Air helps us with oxygen. And land helps us with shelter. Thats why air, water, and land is important.

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Have you ever wondered how air, water, and land can help us? Air water and land is a big part of what keeps us alive. Air keeps us alive. We drink water and we walk on land. so that means air, water, and land can keep us alive for a long time.

You rocked effective conclusions.

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Effective Conclusion

Have you ever wondered how air, water, and land can help us. Air, water and land are key factors of our lives. We drink water, we breathe air, and we walk on land. And water, air, and land keep us alive

You rocked sharing your knowledge of writing effective conclusions.

Next, write your essay.

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Have you wondered how water, air, and land help humans? Land, water, and land are a big part of what keeps us alive. Well, we breath air, we drink water, and we walk on land. That mean these three elements help out humans a lot.

Tyler please reread and republish.

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Have you ever wondered how air, land, and water can help us? Land, air, and water are big part of what keeps us alive. When we drink water, it keeps us hydrated to keep us healthy. Air helps us breath to stay alive and land allows us to build houses to have shelter.

Great job Cali sharing your knowledge of how to write an eye catching hook.

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Air, Land, and Water are the three mains' components of the earth atmosphere, Hydrosphere and lithosphere respectively. Together with living things they form four subsystems on Earth which are called the four spheres. The four spheres are air, land and water and living things.

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Did you know that the ocean covers a vast of 71% of the earth's surface. The ocean has 29% percent of land. The ocean is a major source of atmospheric oxygen. In conclusion, the ocean is a vast and intricate ecosystem.

Isaiah, check your hook and make sure you summarized from the source in your own words. Should there be a conclusion in the hook?

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Question: Have you ever wondered how air, land, and water can help us?

Main topic: Air, water, and land are a big part of what keeps us alive

Big idea: we drink water, air we breathe air, we walk on land. That means air, water, and land keep us alive

Great job planning your introduction.

Next, write your introduction.

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Question

Have you wondered how water land and air can help humans?

Topic

Land, water, and air are a big part of what keeps us alive.

Big ideas We drink water. We breath in air. We walk on land. That means water, land, and air keep us alive

You rocked planning an expository introduction.

Next, write your essay.

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Question Have you ever wondered how air land and water can help us?

Main Topic-Air water and land is a big part of what keeps us alive

Big idea. Air keeps us alive. We drink water and we walk on land. That means that air water and land can keep us alive for a long time.

Antoine you rocked planning an informational introduction.

Next, start your essay.

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Have you ever wondered how Air, water, and land help us?

Topic

Land, water, and air are a big part of what keeps us alive

Big Ideas

We drink water, we breath air, we live on land. That means air water and land can keep us alive for a long time

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Hook

Did you know that surveyors measure land and buildings. surveyors' information also helps decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precise surveyors help to make sure buildings are safely.

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Have you ever wondered were builders get information? they get information from surveyors. they make sure the bui are safe to

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Did you know that Surveyors measure land and Buildings ? surveyors measure disances and heights they help builders know how tall they want they building to be it and the right height survey information can help to decide which new building can be made.

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HOOK

Do you know what a surveyor is a surveyor works must be very precise that helps to make sure buildings are safe and properly located. Surveyors' information also helps decide which new buildings can be made.

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Did you know surveyors can use information to be sure they build new buildings the right way? Surveyors can also travel to areas that is concerned. The surveyor can then use survey equipment to note down distances. Using computers, a map of the whole area can be made. Survey also helps decide which building should be made.

You rocked creating a hook that keeps the reader engaged.

Next, start your essay

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Did you know that surveyors measure land and buildings. Surveyors help decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precise

Hailey you are rocking showing your knowledge of writing a hook. keep up the great work.

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Did you know that surveyors measure land and buildings. Surveyors help decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precisely.

Aaliyah I am hook and want to read more. Great job writing a hook.

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Did you know that Surveyors measure land and buildings? Survey information also helps decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precisely.

I am hooked.

Great job writing a hook.

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Did you know that surveyors measure distances and heights. Survey information also helps decide which new buildings can be made. Surveyors must work very precise. Surveyors help to make sure buildings are safely and properly located. Knowing your math is important if you want to be a surveyor.

Great hook Isaiah !!!

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Did you know that architects design the buildings that you live in? Architects must use materials that are strong and resist decay. Architects (he or she) draw up plans for new buildings. Sometimes, architects look for ways to use natural materials like wood. At the end, architects have many different styles to design buildings that you live in.

WOW!!! What a way to catch the reader.

Very knowledgeable of writing introductions.

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Did you know that architects design the buildings that you live in? Architects must use materials that are strong and resist decay Architects (He or she) draws up plans for new buildings. Sometimes Architects look for ways to use natural material like wood. At the end architects have many different styles and ways to design of building the buildings that you live in.

Nyla I am so impressed with your hard work. You always go above and beyond to ensure all task are presented at top level.

I am hooked on Nyla's work : )

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Did you know that architects design the building you live in? Architects must use materials that are strong and resist decay. Architects (He or She) draw up plans for new buildings. Sometimes architects look for ways to use natural materials like wood. At the end, architects have many different styles and ways to design the homes that you live in today.

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Did you know that architects design the buildings that you live in? Architects must use materials that are strong and resist decay. Architects (He or She) draw up plans for new buildings. Sometimes, architects look for ways to use natural materials like wood. At the end, architects have many different styles to design buildings that you live in.

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Introduction

Have you ever wondered what helps sea creatures survive? Sea creatures have unique features for example the octopus's uses its feathers to fund. Some sea creatures like the pistol shrimp use noise to stun their prey.

WOW!!! What great team work in creating a great introduction.

Next, start your own introduction.

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Have you ever wondered how sea creature's features help them survive? Some features help the catch prey. Some sea creatures can hear a lot, so they know when their predators are coming. Some features help them stay safe. North pacific octopus find food. A lot of creatures have different features.

Great job writing an introduction.

I can see that your team work together to complete the task.

Next, reread the introduction and see where you can make changes. (What is the North Pacific?)

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Did you know that some sea creatures use features to survive? Some use features to help them find food. Some use features to help them stay safe. For example, the pistol shrimp uses noise as loud as a rocket ship to stun its prey.

Great job writing an introduction.

Next, we will analyze a prompt.

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Have you ever wondered how sea creatures survive? Some sea creatures have features to help them survive. Some sea creatures like the octopus use their features to find food. pistol shrimp have sound as loud as a rocket ship to stun prey. All sea creatures have unique features to help them survive .

Great job Team 2. Your introduction makes me want to read more.

Next, check for capital letters and ending marks.

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Eleanor Roosevelt was born October 11, 1884, in in New York NY and died November 7, 1962, in East 74th street New York. Elenor Roosevelt was the long serving first lady of the United States. Holding post from 1833 to 1845. After the death of her husband in 1945, she started her career, as an author, speaker and spokesperson for human rights

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Beyonce is a singer, songwriter, and businesswoman. She first became famous with a singing group named, Destiny's Child. Soon Beyonce went solo and became famous herself.

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Sidney Mclaughlin-Levrone is an America hurdler and sprinter who competes in the 400 meters hurdles

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Ida B. wells was an investigative journalist, a teacher, and a NAACP leader/founder. She tried her best to fight for African-American equality. Without her, black people wouldn't be where we are today.

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Did you know that there are 1,100 species of bats. Some are mammals some are nocturnal; some drink blood some eat insects but all together they are very successful creatures. Let me tell you why.

Girls you rocked writing an introduction.

Next, reread and see what you can edit.

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This month is about all about important women in history. I am writing about Rosa parks. Rosa Parks is a civil right activist and is also called " The mother of the modern- day American civil right movement." She was also called" The mother of the freedom movement. As we all know she did not give up her seat to a white person during segregation she was arrested. She started a The Montgomery boycott that lasted 381 days and she was arrested but it did cause a change in the laws. She is one out of billions of people that we are not enslaved today. She sadly passed away on October 24, 2005, of old age. her legacy lives on today and we know her as a wise and powerful person. This month is march and is so important. Make sure to celebrate the people who fought for our rights.

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Have you ever heard of Juju Watkins? Juju Watkins is an American college basketball player for the USC Trojans of the Big Ten conference. She was born July 15, 2005, in Los Angeles California. She is currently 6 feet 2 inches tall. She is an inspiration to all basketball athletes.

Trent I am impressed with your knowledge of writing an introduction.

Next, write an essay about JuJu.

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Harriet Tubman was an abolitionist, a civil war spy, and a nurse in the army. Harriet Tubman took over 19 trips to free slaves and freed over 300 slaves and helped free more slaves during the civil war. Harriet Tubman was a very important person in black history. Unfortunately, she died at the age of 91 years old. She was a very brave woman, and she will forever be remembered.

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Did you know that bat are mammal an some also eat insect. they help us by eating bugs. Do you know that bats sleep during the day and active at night

Great effort Chaies. Go back and read to make sure it has subject-verb agreement. Add at least one more big idea.

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There are a lot of different kinds of bats. There are big bats, and small bats. did you know that big eared bats are very large bats.

Great effort to write an introduction Owen.

Check your last sentence and see what you can edit.

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Hello, have u ever wondered why bats only wake up at night or maybe why they sleep upside down. Well in this essay i will tell u facts about bats.

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Did you know that birds are the only mammals that fly? Today I'm going to teach you some facts about bats. Instead of flying with their wings they fly with their hands, some call them "hand-wings". Bats sleep upside down. Also, did you know there are 1,300 species of bats? These are only a few facts about bats, and I hope you learned more about bats.

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Have you ever wondered why bats do unusual things? Like sleep upside down or sleep during the day and wake up during the night? This is what I learned about them.

Antoine great use of research skills. Great job writing an intro. Next, remember to add commas for a series of things. Go back and correct.

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Did you know that there are more than 1,100 species of bats. Some people ask why bats do certain things or how they do it? Well today I will answer all your questions about bats and there way of doing amazing and very interesting things.

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Have you herd of a bat? Well bats are nocturnal that means they are awake during the night. Let me show you a bit more facts about bats!

Tyler, you rocked writing an introduction.

Next, I want you to always read for editing to ensure subject verb agreement. Also make sure its at least 4 sentences or more.

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Did you know that there are over 1,100 species of bats? There is a example up on the picture right here! Bats are one of the most interesting mammals that I have ever saw, Lets look at more bat facts!

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Did you know that 20% of mammals are bats? I have five facts about bats that will make you go wow. Here are my facts bats are the only mammal that can fly, bats are a nocturnal animal, they are the second largest order of mammals, some of the species of bats are fruit bats, and micro-bats mostly use echolocation. I hope you learned a lot about bats.

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Hello! Have you ever wondered why bats sleep upside down? This article will answer all your questions about this interesting creature. According to the article, from Kiddle it says that "Most bats rest, sleep, and hibernate in an upside-down position". To do this they have a locking mechanism in their feet which stops them from slipping. I hoped you enjoyed these facts that I gave you about this species.

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Did you know that bats are the second largest order of mammals? Bats are interesting creatures and mammals. I am going to tell you some interesting facts about bats

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Have you ever wondered about bats? Things like why they are nocturnal, and why do they have such big ears? Well, this article will answer all your questions about these mysterious creatures.

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Did you know that bats are the only mammal that can fly? I have learned some interesting facts about bats from an article. Today I am going to tell you some facts about bats. I hope you learn something new.

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Have you ever wondered why bats hang upside down? After all they do have feet and wings. Bats live all around the world and have unique features. Bats are very unique creatures, and I am going to share what I learned about them.

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