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Why play badminton are dangerousPlay badminton are very dangerous because when you need to run you will run very fast so you may fall down .When you fall down it may be very very dangerous because when you fall down you may hurt your knee and sometimes you need to go to the hospital with your broken leg . then when you swing your racket sometime the racket will swing to your face because you swing so strong. That is all the cause why play badminton is dangerous.	

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Why play badminton are dangerousPlay badminton are very dangerous because when you need to run you will run very fast so you may fall down .When you fall down it may be very very dangerous because when you fall down you may hurt your knee and sometimes you need to go to the hospital with your broken leg . then when you swing your racket sometime the racket will swing to your face because you swing so strong. That is all the cause why play badminton is dangerous.	

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Nancy

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Câu ghép
I like to eat chocolate because is good .
I like to study maths because is good for me.
I like to study english because is easy.
I like to eat candy because is sweet.
I like to study science because is helpful for me.

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I like maths .
I like english.
I like to eat chocolate.
I like vietnamese.
I like sicence.

Câu đơn

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Cảm ơn bài viết của Vân, bài của con về tổng thể khá rõ ý và chi tiết về ngày của mình. Tuy nhiên, mình nên thống nhất sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho việc kể về ngày của mình con nhé. Co 1 số chỗ chưa có chủ ngữ của câu. VD chỗ: Next will go to => Next, I go to... Và đang sử dụng nhiều dấu chấm câu quá, nên câu sẽ bị cụt. Con xem lại bài nhé.

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Hiện tại đơn
She likes playing tennis.
He likes playing football.
Everyone has an apple in the morning .
No one wants to eat Bing Chilling in the winter.
I gets up early at 6 o’clock.

=> Sau "I" Không có "s". We/They/You/I

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Câu ghép
1. My mother like cooking because it’s fun.
2. I like English because it’s interesting.
3. My grandma like play volleyball because it’s very good health.
4. I like Math because it’s easy.
5. I like IT because it’s about internet.

=> Câu số 1 và 3 con xem lại thì và chia động từ nha

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In the morning,I get up early at 6o’clock ,I brush my teeth ,wash my face and comb my hair.I have breakfast with milk and bread .And then I go to school at 7:00.My school start 7:30 and finish at 16:30.I have lunch at school and food is very yummy and I go to sleep at school at 11:15.After start again at 2:00o’clock .I study four lesson :Maths ,Vietnamese  ,PE,IT.Break time,I sometimes play jump rope with friends .I come back go to at home at 4:45 .I do homework and play with baby brother .Evening,i take a shower and have dinner with my family.Goodbye!

=> Bài viết khá rõ ràng và chi tiết, tuy nhiên mình chú ý dấu cách sau mỗi dấu "." và ",".
Một số chỗ chưa chia động từ đối với danh từ số ít. VD: My school starts
- Lessons có 4 môn số nhiều thêm "s".
Cuối bài không cần thêm "Goodbye"

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Topic: Tell about your day
My day is very interesting and busy. In the morning, i get up at half past six, i brush my teeth  have breakfast at home, i get dressed and get my back, helmet and a mask. Then i go to school at a quarter past seven. My school start at half past seven to ten to five p.m. I have lunch at school, it’s very good. I have a break at eleven o’clock. I wake up at twenty four past one p.m. I start again at 2 p.m. After school, i play football with my friends. I come back home at 5 p.m. Then i take off my backpack and go to take a shower. I have dinner with my family at 6 p.m. I play the piano at 7 p.m. After that, i have many homework to do. Finally, i go to bed at 9 p.m. That it are my day. I want to no your days very much. Goodbye

Bài viết của con rõ ít và đầy đủ, chi tiết. Có một số chỗ mình sửa nha:
=> Chữ "I" viết hoa
- Chú ý một số câu về ngữ pháp để chia thì cho phù hợp. "My school starts at..."
-  I want to no your days very much. => xem lại câu này
- Trong bài viết không có phần này: Goodbye

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Thì hiện tại đơn :
1 He likes swimming very much
2 She makes cookies very good
3 My mom always goes to the store
4 A dog runs very fast
5 Everyone is goes to the supermarket to buy something

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Câu ghép:
1 He gets a bad point because he doesn’t study hard
2 She gets a bad point because she study hard => Study chỗ này cần chia => Studies
3 I have a good time and my family are happy, too => My family chuyển là "is"
4 They are happy because they are have a good day => They have
5 We are sad because it is raining

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Topic : Tell about your day
As you know, I'm a very busy person and my day is very interesting .Early in the morning at 6:00 , I wake up and get out of my bed . Then I brush my teeth and have breakfast . At 6:30 I pack all my books in my back pack and hop on my bike to school . My classes start at 7:00 and finish at 10:00 . I go home and eat lunch . Some times I get to watch TV until 12:00.I have a short sleep to 2:00 . In the afternoon I come back to school  . Then I learn 2 lessons from 2:30 to 4:00. I go home and do all of my homework . After that , I play football until dinner . I eat dinner and I play games with my mom and dad till 10:00 . We turn off the light , say :"Good night" and have a nice sleep. Everyday is awesome , I always feel happy .

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Câu ghép :
1. The dog is dirty because it played in the mud all day .
2.He is very smart because he studies a lot.
3.I practiced all day and I won the contest .
4. The dog played with me and he pushed me down to the ground .
5. I like to drink milk because it provides me a lot of minerals .
Hiện tại đơn :
1.He likes playing football.
2.Everyone loves eating cereal for breakfast.
3.He goes to school by bus.
4.Everybody hates tax.
5.My dad watches TV everyday.

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Checkl

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Hello balo Bing chilling