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Star: Great speaking voice! 
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get your hands out of your pockets
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make eye contact and speak up!

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stand up tall and make sure not to fidget with your hands.

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Make sure not to just read off of the slides

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add sources

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dont read off the slides

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Be more firm with the hand shake

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great job though! great topic
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speak up!!
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Be more firm with your hand shakes

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Talk to us, not the board.

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The text is hard to read on the Prevention slide

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Speak up just a little . It was hard to hear you

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make sure you do a bigger font because someone in the back can not read your slides.

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add titles

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face the audience

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maybe do the arguement on littering
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Good talking to the audience

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speak up a little
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Slow down, spend more time on each slide
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good speaking voice
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you used the wrong "there"
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add citations for where you got the pictures :)

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For the history of the argument, put something in there about where the pink tax came from

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don`t be nervous!!

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really great info on slides!

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Great job, I would just suggest finding clearer pictures because some were hard to see
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work on thenhandshakes

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good speaking voice

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good start on your presentation!
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You should probably just restart...

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I like your pictures

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The photos are a nice touch

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Add more info and sources on beginning slides

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You can just use bullet points on your background slides

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Great facts !

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Good research
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Great hook and introduction

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Good explaining and talking towards audience

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don't say "so"and "um" as much

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use bullet points

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make slides more interesting

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good job! try not to use slang like "dippin" though. try something like "while we were newly discovering"

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Great job I love your topic and found it to be very interesting!
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add sources under your pictures

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make fonts a little bigger!

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great speaking voice

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add more pictures to help explain!

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try not to use fillers while you are talking. examples: uhhh or ummm, like. also dont correct yourself if you mess up. keep going!!

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Great hook and introduction

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your time was 10mins and 57 seconds!
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Great hook!!

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don't read off board

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speak up

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don't read straight off the board. i would suggest either flashcards, speaker notes, etc...

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look towards the audience more

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try to make fonts bigger and not pack too much info in one slide

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bullet points might help!!

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put less information on one slide

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nice job with putting citations in slides!

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don't look at the board so much and try not to use filler word like "so" and "um"

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maybe add pictures to make it more interesting! :)

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a lot of good information !!

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your time was 7 mins and 11 secs
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use sources under pictures

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nice hook!!

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check your grammar!

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Maybe add bullet points so you can not read board and explain to audience

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time was 7 minutes
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great pictures

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add more to subpoint one slide

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more eye contact!!

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your doing really good explaining your slides and not reading off.

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add more to interview slide

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the time was 7 minutes

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Great explanation, the graphs and photos are an excellent touch

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really good
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Good videos

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speak louder

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Don't just read off the slides, look towards the audience more

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speak up

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u should watch american made its ab pablo escobar

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you have a great topic. be confident

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Try bullet points so you can get an idea then turn to audience an explain

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don't be nervous you got this!
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Beall**** and interesting topic!!

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you are very confident! good job!!

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slow down just a little
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elaborate its helpful properties
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Good touch with the video

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disturbing,but a great video to get your point across

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Try not to read off board

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less words on the slide

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bullet points!!!

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time was 6:11.85

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add the same title to your slides that are on your table of contents
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change "bias" to "unbiased"  on interview slide
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Good points and explaining with loud voice!

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great improvement

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Great presentation
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stand up straight.

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good hook

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talk slower!!! dont be nervous bro!

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give more eye contact not just look at board

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in georgia its illegal to even hold your phone or have it in sight you could mention that

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Should expand on the slides. Time was only 4:37.52

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slow down bro

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testify*****

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add some more pictures to get your slides poppin
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good start!

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try to have less on slide and memorize rest

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dont be nervous! this is a great topic to be confident about. remember to eat a banana and powerpose 10 minutes before!!!

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your presentation^

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Don't be nervous, you are a natural !

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Good voice! volume is great!

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^facts!

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Nice work

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try not to use fillers like uh and um!!

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Final time was 9:01.54

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vety good^

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very*

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really good
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good explanations

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Good explaining slides to the audience!

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Add more information for sub points

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add scources to support your subpoints

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add more pictures

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Good eye contact and speaking to audience

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put some pictures

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good job!!

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Definitely knows alot of good information about the topic.

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Time was 5:38.59
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good eye contact and speaking voice

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Try not to read off the slides

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Add sources to Sub point slides

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good info

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good pictures

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time was 4:57

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add sources and cite them
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good eye contact

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speak a little louder

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great job not reading off your slides

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use bullet points

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Explain graphs a little more

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maybe make your sub points clear on your argument/thesis slide

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Nice examples

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Try to put your cost pictures on a separate slide so we can read

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background is a little distracting

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it's just a little blurry
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good eye contact

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explain your pictures more like the graph

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try not to read straight of the board and elaborate on the graphs more

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You did great, good job answering the questions
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interesting hook

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Good eye contact and voice

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good overview and interests

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dont read off board

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good job not looking at the board a lot

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great facts

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good job with statistics! i would definitely site tho -Zach

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you are very knowledgeable about your topic, good job!

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great job
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Great eye contact and presentation skills. You also seem to know what your talking about.

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Time 5:30 great job just up your time
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talk to audience

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good speaking voice

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good pictures but add sources

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dont read off board

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put video clip of the hate you give trailer

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^^!!

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instead of referencing a movie reference a real life case

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Time is 5:49.78

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good topic interesting
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Add some information on the sin tax on your subpoint about taxing unhealthy foods slide