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You did okay but next time you should go over it before you finish because it didnt make sense

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Great job at citing in the paragraph, although you might want to elaborate better and make more sense into what you're saying.

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The student did  a decent job, i think they need to improve in there writing and making there sentences shorter.

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excellent job on your summarization of the story.
next time you should have a peer check your work.
did you consider putting more detail into your writing.

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you did a great jog at citing but it didnt make sense overall so try to make it more clear maybe re-write it and read it over to make sure it makes sense.

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The greatest aspect of your work was citing your work, but i was wondering of you looked back at your work. Why did write this?

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The student did a great job citing his or her evidence. One suggestion will be reread your paragraph and make sure everything you say makes sense clearly.

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Excellent job on punctuation, one suggestion would be to reread what you wrote in the future. One question i have is what were you trying to say?

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The author does not actually write a flexible paragraph where the output has multiple missing words and everything doesn't string together.

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You excel at writing full sentences. You could improve making your point of writing the paragraph more clear to understand.

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Excellent job on citing the evidence but one suggestion would be re-read the writing and make sure it flows. One question I have is, did you consider find evidence that flows with the explanation?

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The student did a very good job at citing the evidence, next time don't forget to ask someone to check your work to write better, Did you ask anyone to proof read your work?

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You did an terrific job on citing your evidence, but one thing I suggest is to make sure your sentences flow together and have the reader understand your point of view. I was wondering of you re-read what you wrote? Do you consider changing around some words or adding words to make your sentences flow more?

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The most outstanding aspect of your work is how you have full sentences in your paragraph. One suggestion for you would be to double read what you write in order for you to catch any mistakes you might of committed while writing. Did you consider re-reading your writing?

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This student did a good job citing the evidence, one suggestion would be to reread your work and make sure what you wrote makes sense.

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you cited, so that's good. But whatever you tried to say didn't make much sense, so you have to try to make it clear next time. did you re-read why you wrote ?