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I like how you used detail. I dont know anything about Mongolian culture but while i was reading i could still understand.

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1. My first star is your slides. They are well put together and have a appealing color scheme. I also think the images you included fit your slides well.
2. My second star is your idea. I think your idea is unique and you’re counterargument helped your product a lot. I know that I would definitely want this if I was older!
3. My one star is that you didn’t add much about the box or the price when you order. I think that if you added that your slides would be greater then they already are.

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I think the idea was great. I would love to have a whole batch of treats delivered to my door every month. I think you used Greta persuasive strategies while writing. I think you could have added more information though. Like the cost of the subscription, and how the box functions. IF you needed to keep something cold or hot. Other that that great job!

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I loved your product!
Star 1 : I loved how you added a criteria of who might like your product! It was very helpful and creative
Star 2 : I also really liked the image/design of your product because it was super cute, creative and eye catching!
Wish : I probably wouldn’t change a thing about your product but maybe you could space out your slide since there way a lot of words on one slide.

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I love the idea of your product because it helps people who dont like to cook but love sweets, another thing i love about your product is that its easy to get and there’s no cooking needed, one thing i wish you had and i might have just missed it but I didn’t see how much it costed, but over all your product looks great

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BUY MY PRODUCT:                                                            I really loved your product, however I think you could of maybe spaced out the slides a little more because there were a lot of words just on one slide. 

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BUY MY PRODUCT:                                                            I really loved your product, however I think you could of maybe spaced out the slides a little more because there were a lot of words just on one slide. 

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One star is that I think that this idea is really original and I would definitely buy this product! The second star is that I think your slides were really nice and easy to read as well as represented your product well. One wish is maybe you could add how much a subscription costs per month. Overall, great job!

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I think the word choice was really good in the essay and the essay was very persuasive.

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One star is that i thought your topic was very interesting because i feel like a lot of people in our town do pass but that hospital and wonder what it could be so people would feel very interested in your topic. Another star is your examples really do pursued your writing and they help make great examples and answers to everyone’s thoughts. A wish i do say is your hook it was really boring and i feel like it didn’t hook me into your topic so i do wish there was some spark in it cause i did think it was a wonderful essay.- julia

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One star is that i thought your topic was very interesting because i feel like a lot of people in our town do pass but that hospital and wonder what it could be so people would feel very interested in your topic. Another star is your examples really do pursued your writing and they help make great examples and answers to everyone’s thoughts. A wish i do say is your hook it was really boring and i feel like it didn’t hook me into your topic so i do wish there was some spark in it cause i did think it was a wonderful essay.- julia

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I really liked your essay and I like the idea of it like the urgent care. I think that is a smart and very important idea!

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I loved your piece and it was so well written. One of the things i lived most about your persuasive essay was your word choice, you used strong words that pursuaded the reader!

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Hi from period 7!