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lead sports with Senators, then move out from Ottawa.

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make sure you’re introducing the reporter just before playing the audio in a wraparound or script-and-clip.  Their name is often in parentheses at the beginning of the lead.

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the guitar theft story is a good kicker...it's a hard transition to go from that to a family that froze to death in Manitoba.

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make sure you’re introducing the reporter just before playing the audio in a wraparound or script-and-clip.  Their name is often in parentheses at the beginning of the lead.  Make sure you say something like “Alex Stone reports” before playing the audio.

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for a copy story, we don't need to know the name of someone who isn't the subject of the story, but rather a source of information.  We name people in copy stories if they are well-known (the mayor, a celebrity) of if the news is about them (charged with a crime or a victim).  Use general terms to attribute information that comes from unfamiliar people.  Ex: A city official, Ottawa police, witnesses or spectators.

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remember broadcast writing conventions; write out symbols such as $ (dollars)

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remember broadcast writing conventions; write out symbols such as $ (dollars)

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You need two stories with audio elements for full marks.  You find those in Canadian Press Audio.  Look in the National, Parliament, or Sportscall branches of CPA.

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You need two stories with audio elements for full marks.  You find those in Canadian Press Audio.  Look in the National, Parliament, or Sportscall branches of CPA.

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Good work, Ian.  Here are some tweaks you can make for your next newscast: 

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Good work, Ian.  Here are some tweaks you can make for your next newscast: 

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if you're talking about something happening the same day as your newscast, say "today", not Monday.  Likewise, the day before the newscast is "yesterday" and the day after is "tomorrow"...not the day of the week.

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-don't forget to write your name in the intro

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-the first two stories of the newscast are supposed to be local (Ottawa-Gatineau) and rewritten from local news media (CBC Ottawa, the Citizen, CFRA etc...).    You would need to focus specifically on the impact to local businesses for your lockdown lifting story to be local.

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Cue the transition to sports by saying "In sports..."

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We don't use a.m. or p.m. to talk about time. Instead it's four in the morning or ten at night.